[Report This]Date: Apr 05, 2012 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
Can't wait for the next chapter! And don't delete the story!! It's really great! And don't change Michael! I LOVE his personality just the way it is!
[Report This]Date: Apr 05, 2012 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
For the person that said its not like Michael needs to shut the hell up! ITS FICTION! & keep up the good work it's a really good story don't change anything it's my Fav!
[Report This]Date: Apr 05, 2012 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Keep up the good work. I like it. As for someone saying that it isn't "Michael", how do we know that? I don't mean to get all philosophical with this, but we all could have been plenty of things since we are a combination of nature and our environment.
Who knows how Mike would have turned out if he never became famous and remained in Gary, which I heard became pretty rough starting in the 70s? Anyways, it's just a story and I want to see where you are going to go with it.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I really wanted to show him in a different way. I'm kind of tired of seeing him as this perfect guy. He is a human just like the rest of us. Plus it's all for fun. That's really why I wrote him this way. It just seemed like a fun idea.
[Report This]Date: Apr 05, 2012 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just hate the fact that its moved to our modern times. It just dosent fit for Michael. I think it would have been eaaier if you kept it in the 80s. Its more realistic.
Author's Response:
I know but I'm not good with seetting stories in an era I'm not familiar with.
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2012 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 4
continue i cant wait for the next chapter mel and mike date should b interesting : ) his cousin greg takin pictures he seem like a creep lol please update soon
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2012 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
i am loving this story well i love everything u write this is one of my favs molt liqour blunts and middlefingers i can picture this those ba ass bastards oh my god i lmao on this chapter continue
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2012 09:38 am Title: Chapter 4
Ah! I Need another chapter soon pleaseeeeee :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2012 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 3
Nice to see DC highlighted,both the good and the bad. This is very interesting. Just picturing Michael listening to Backyard almost makes me want to break into giggles. That's my city. Keep up the good work...and I also love Darling Nikki.
Author's Response:
OH SHIT! Lol I live in DC that's why I felt comfortble placing the story in DC. I can give real locations. But I didn't know that anyone on this site was from here. Shout out, to all my DC peoples! lls
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2012 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
Just want to thank all of those that are reading the story! Please leave a review and let me know how you feel about the chapter.
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2012 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
this story is PERFECT so far. can't wait to see what the future holds for them.
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2012 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
Love it! Continue
Date: Mar 31, 2012 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
love this its great update soon
Date: Mar 31, 2012 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is greatt!! :D
Author's Response:
Thank You!
Date: Mar 30, 2012 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
You should continue. You know, when I read the summary and thinking about melissa, the first that came to my mind is Sandra Bullock in "the proposal" film.
Good story though :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2012 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
PLEASEEEEEEE CONTINUE!!!