[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2012 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Celebration of Our Love
Aww im happy Michael and Yannina has been together for 3 months. And the pendent Michael got Yannina its so beautiful and the rose pettels on the bed thats was so romantic. And when Yannina was dancing with Michael i thought that was beautiful. And Im glad Michael did this for their 3 month anniversary. Now i wonder what will happen next. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Date: Oct 05, 2012 10:12 am Title: Chapter 27 - Celebration of Our Love
this was really qhudd please continue.
[Report This]Date: Sep 20, 2012 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 26 - A Little Spying Game
Wow i wonder what will happen next. I hope Yannina gets the killer before he gets to Michael and Yannina before anything bad happends. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Sep 13, 2012 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 25 - A Night In Paris
I hope Yannina catches Damien soon so she and Michael can be with eachother without any fears. Damien needs to get caught soon he is one evil S.O.B. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Sep 09, 2012 11:27 am Title: Chapter 24 - First Time In Paris
:0 And the action continues ... Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: Sep 04, 2012 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 24 - First Time In Paris
0.0 Oh shit i hope that gun shot was not from Damein. I hope Yannnina does not get hurt and i hope Michael does not hurt. This was a great chapter. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Aug 31, 2012 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Shadow of Doubt
I feel like crying, this chapter was soo beautiful and the passion between these two is unspeakable !!! Its amazing. But poor Tatianna being sick for at least a month. Karma, perhaps? Hope you can update soon !!
Author's Response:
It is not karma, it is Yannina. She slipped something in her food to make her sick :D
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2012 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Shadow of Doubt
Wow this was a great chapter. I hope nothing bad happend in Paris im praying that nothing happends. When Michael said "If we survive we survive together. If we go down we will go down together. Which one shall you have?" that was powerful and it made me tear up a little bit. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2012 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 22 - The Face of Evil
Wow a huge worrie was taken off my sholders. Im glad Yannina found the killer. And im hoping Michael and Yannina gets hurt. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2012 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 22 - The Face of Evil
I hate seeing these chapters end, especially when things get juicy. But I can't believe Damien is the killer! I was not expecting that.
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2012 10:52 am Title: Chapter 21 - A Night To Remember
Finally, the action that I have been waiting for. Unfortunately, it occured during their date. I feel like I'm reading a script to a movie. This all seems so realistic. Kinda wish it were. That would be awesome!
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2012 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Big Toys for Bad Girls
Hahaa! I can't help but gigle when they say 'that fat guy'. Im sucha lame.
I need something like Nick in my life. I'd be the happiest chick alive.
Can't wait for all the action and suspense to start!
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2012 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Big Toys for Bad Girls
Wow i cant believe Yannina has a AK-47 she means bisness. I think guns are cool but i would never own a gun they just scare me a little bit. But i hope the killer doesnt strike in the next chapter. I hope Yannina at least ease some fears Michael has. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2012 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 19 - New Rules
WOW Tatiana was so dumbfounded lol i busted out laughing when she had that say what look. Looks like whatever plain she had is finished. I cant wait to see her go crazy. Im hoping Michael doesnt really have a human brain but i know he would never have something like that i think he just said that to make Yannina laugh and freak her out. I was laughing throughout this chapter. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Author's Response:
Actually, he really had one, both his mother and Janet said so, he got it from a doctor friend and he showed it without warning to Janet and she nearly fainted of fright. That was around 1989-1990. So, it's true fact :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2012 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Turning the Tables
Ugh!! That chick has some nerve disobeying the rules... Wonder what Yannina has in store for her ...