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Reviewer: polka216 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2012 10:20 am Title: Chapter 1

this story is really good! i noticed you made rainy days probably to replace this one since you haven't updated it in a while, but please update this one too! this story is sooo good! its has a great idea and its written well. michael and olivia are awesome but please update this one. btoh rainy days and this story are really good! 



Author's Response:

WHY thank you! I WILL update this one....it's just going to take me a minute or so but I will!

Reviewer: backpackkk Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 29, 2012 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 4

update quorl.

Reviewer: YANAgirl07 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2012 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 4

:D I really like this idea! Please continue with it! Even if you don't turn this story into a super long one, even if it's a story on the shorter side, I'd still love to read more! This is really good! Definitely adding it to my favourites!

Reviewer: mjtheking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2012 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

so cute...interesting storie very different in a good way...<3

Reviewer: SmellyApplehead Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2012 02:01 am Title: Chapter 3

Keep it going. Michael and olivia such a cute couple, they're too funny. I love this, a cute romance comedy story :D

Reviewer: PiperJackson4eva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2012 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 3

Lol! "I'm a f$#king ninja!" This is going 2 my favorites! Keep on going. I'm lovin it!

Reviewer: PiperJackson4eva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2012 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 2

Half naked? Wow! This is funny and amazing. Keep on going. If the next chapter is really good, I'll add it to my favorites.

Reviewer: Hassiba Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2012 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 2

love the storyline, verry original. Pleas continue :)

Reviewer: Alina Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2012 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

My God!

THIS IS AMAZING!

She's a very interesting person!

I am willing to read MOOORE!

 

MUCH L-O-V-E!

Reviewer: PiperJackson4eva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2012 04:48 am Title: Chapter 1

Yeah, you should continue.

Reviewer: SmellyApplehead Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2012 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like it ! Next chapter, please :D

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