[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2012 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 22: End Note
:( Bullies are the worst.Its great how you have tried to spread awareness through a story.
This was an amazing story which moved me and definetly one of my favorites. thankyou for sharing it with us.
Author's Response:
Bullies are the worst! I don't understand how some people are just okay with making other people feel less then themselves! Like, I'm one of those people who hates to be hated so I'm always nice to everyone because when I hurt someone I feel SO guilty! I don't understand how other people don't feel guilty as well! It's weird... it's stupid...
I'm so glad it made you feel that way and you're welcome for sharing it! :) Thank you for reading it :D
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2012 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 21: One, Two, Three
:( No I cant believ this!
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2012 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 20: If You Go, I'm Going With You
:( No I wish they didnt think like that but how michael stays by her side like a true friend touches my heart I cant wait to read the next chapter
Date: Jul 03, 2012 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 22: End Note
I agree w/u completely. Great story, ur a really talented writer. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I really appreciated all of your reviews! :D
Date: Jul 03, 2012 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 21: One, Two, Three
Please don't tell me they actually did it! This is such a shame! :'(
Date: Jul 03, 2012 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 20: If You Go, I'm Going With You
The fact tht MJ would give his life 4 Lilly, tht's true love. It doesn't matter tht they're only 8 yrs. old, tht's true love. :)
Date: Jul 03, 2012 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 19: The Bad Things Are Never Ending
The only person I can think of tht it could be is her dad, but I know tht isn't right, because he's in jail. I have no idea who it could be.
Date: Jul 03, 2012 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 18: The Note
Wow. This is true friendship. :)
Date: Jul 03, 2012 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 17: First Day
Sry I haven't reviewed in a while. If my dad knew I was reading anything 2 do w/MJ, he'd kill me! Lol As u can c, tht hasn't stopped me tho. *Devil horns* :D It's a really good story tho; very heartwarming. :)
Author's Response:
Haha! It's cool! And lol! My Dad is the same way. Thank God I have my own laptop so I can just do it without his knowing >:)
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2012 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 22: End Note
:'( :'( :'( I did not want this story to end like this at all. I really could see myself in Lilly because i was bullied at a young age in Elm school and im still bullied now in high school and its really sad that people take their own lives because of someone's actions and words. It really is SAD that Lilly and Michael took their lives. They had so much in store for them they could of grew up with each other and lived a happy life but Lilly couldnt take it anymore and Michael couldnt take it if he was without Lilly in his life. Thank You for writing this story and spreading the message that Suicide shows no age and we should really think before we speak. "Sticks and stones may break my bones but words will never HURT me" but that is never true words will live with someone FOREVER and alot of people need to realize that because we are loosing people we LOVE and CARE for with all of our HEARTS. R.I.P Michael & Lilly You May Be Gone Too Soon But You Will Never Be FORGOTTEN We Will LOVE And MISS You
Author's Response:
Writing the ending was tough. It was sad for me to write it, but I knew from the very beginning that that was how I wanted the story to end, because I really wanted the message to show in there.
I'm SO sorry that you feel that you can relate to Lilly and that you've been bullied since Elementary school. That's terrible. It really is. I'm glad you didn't take your own life because of it. I promise it gets better in the long run! <3
And about that old saying, it's so true! Words hurt a lot. In my opinion, they hurt more then actions. I'd rather get beat up then have rumours spread about me or have people tell me hurtful things. That's the thing with being a girl and being a guy. Girls have it WAY tougher then guys when it comes to that! Guys are more "Imma punch your guts out" but girls stab you in the back, gossip (A LOT), and they're just flat out mean. A lot of girls at my school are just totally ahem... 'female dogs'.
It's sad that people do chose to take their lives because really, when it's all over you'll look back on it and realise that it was only a few years of life, and you've still got everything else to live for. RIP to everyone who has chosen to take their lives!
"You May Be Gone Too Soon But You Will Never Be FORGOTTEN We Will LOVE And MISS You"
I couldn't have said it better myself. ^^^^
Date: Jul 02, 2012 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 21: One, Two, Three
OMG NO!!! :,,,(
Date: Jul 02, 2012 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 22: End Note
They should of got married
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2012 06:15 am Title: Chapter 21: One, Two, Three
:,(
Awwwwwww!!!!
Michael's a good friend for staying with her, and then they died together... This is just... AHH!
I'm just speechless. <3
Date: Jul 01, 2012 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 9: Aunt Molly
Noooooooooooo!!!!!!!! This can't happen! Michael and Lilly r so cute together! :(
Date: Jul 01, 2012 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 5: Tell me and I'll Tell You
awww, I thought it was so sweet tht Michael told Lilly tht she was pretty just the way she was. It made me get tht Bruno Mars song stuck in my head. :)
Author's Response:
:) Stuff like that is always sweet, unfortunately a lot of guys these days don't say that stuff but you know, we can dream right?
Aw! I love that song and Bruno Mars! :D Thanks for all of the lovely reviews you've left! I appreciate them so much!