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Reviewer: amajorlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2012 12:18 am Title: Chapter 12: Why Me?

this was so sad i hate her aunt with a passion. i hope she gets out of that horrible place soon. i cant wait to read more!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Illusion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2012 09:19 am Title: Chapter 13: The Reason

Oh, I hope Michael saves Lilly!!!!!! He just HAS to find her!!!

 

This is a sad story but I love it!!! <3

 

Keep it up!

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2012 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 12: Why Me?

WOW this is starting to get intense (in my book). When u get a chance can u please update. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response:

I'll definitely update soon! I'm really anxious to write the next few chapters actually because I have this whole circus planned. Just have to write it...:)

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2012 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 11: Wishing You Were Here

I cant wait till the next chapter is up. Can u update soon Please. I LOVE this And i cant wait and see if Lilly see's Michael. Lots Of L.O.V.E

Author's Response:

I'll update as soon as I can! I've recently been having problems with posting stuff on the website so I didn't write a whole lot, but I'll post a new chapter up before the end of the week! :D

Reviewer: amajorlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2012 02:44 am Title: Chapter 1: Alone

Amazing chapters i cant wait for more!!!!!!!

Reviewer: amajorlove Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2012 02:43 am Title: Chapter 11: Wishing You Were Here

This was such a sad chapter i hate aunt molly so much. I hope Lilly thinks about michael and that gets her through another day... Or he even helps her escape! That aunt is dreadful



Author's Response:

:'( It was so tough writting that chapter. I just imagined an actual person having to go through that when I was writing it and I felt sick! It's horrible what some people have to go through in real life. Absolutely horrible.

Glad you're enjoying the story! I'll update soon!

Reviewer: amajorlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2012 02:39 am Title: Chapter 10: Miss You More

No i dont want her to leave with her horrible aunt! I hope she is brought straight back... She is going to miss michael terribly and he will miss her :(

Reviewer: Missdiana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2012 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 1: Alone

Before I start, I just want to say that this is the best sad story EVER!!! And that's why I love it so much! Please update soon.;)

Reviewer: amajorlove Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2012 12:51 am Title: Chapter 9: Aunt Molly

hope you up-date this soon!!!!!!

Reviewer: amajorlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2012 02:09 am Title: Chapter 1: Alone

please update soon i really love this

Reviewer: amajorlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2012 02:05 am Title: Chapter 9: Aunt Molly

its so nice how michael made her another sock pig its the sweetest thing ever and o no i hope she doesnt leave with aunt molly! Just when she was finally a little happy.

Reviewer: amajorlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2012 02:03 am Title: Chapter 8: End The Pain

She was going to kill herself :( im happy michael was there for her great chapter!

Reviewer: mimi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2012 01:08 am Title: Chapter 9: Aunt Molly

this story keeps getting sadder and sadder :( but it's so good! i can't wait for me.

Reviewer: Illusion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2012 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 7: Piggy

Awww! :'(

 

Reviewer: Briana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2012 02:08 am Title: Chapter 7: Piggy

Why won't those inconsiderate bastards leave poor Lilly alone. I relate to this story alot, I feel like I'm not pretty but I know that's not true. This was a great update :)

Author's Response:

:( I'm sorry you feel like you're not pretty. But I'm glad you mentionned that you relate to this story because I really wanted to do this story to show how cruel kids can be and how big of an effect bullying has on people and even if people say stuff like that as if it were a joke, it still hurts.

 

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