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Reviewer: mjlover6 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2012 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 4: Trash Bag?

I can't believe those girls said tht about Lilly's hair! Now look wat they made her do to herself! Her hair was just fine the way it was! I think she already has found love too, they both just haven't realized it yet. It's not just b/c of her hair either. Those girls were so wrong about wat they said.

Reviewer: mjlover6 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2012 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 3: Teenage Girls

I feel so sorry 4 Lilly. Lots of ppl r so mean 2 her 4 no reason. I thought it was sweet tho tht MJ and Lilly complimented each other on their hair. :)

Reviewer: mjlover6 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2012 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 2: Terrible, Tortuous and Tough Triplets

Those 3 brothers r so unbelievably mean! I hope they get wat's coming 2 them soon.

Reviewer: mjlover6 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2012 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 1: Alone

Oh this is so sad! I feel so bad for Lilly! I hope things get better 4 her. :(

Reviewer: mj58smooth Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2012 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 20: If You Go, I'm Going With You

I don't want them to kill themselves :( Michael really loves Lily to take his own life.

Reviewer: amajorlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2012 05:01 am Title: Chapter 19: The Bad Things Are Never Ending

who is doing all of this bad stuff? Its so mean. Plz update this soon its one of my most favs!

Reviewer: amajorlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2012 04:55 am Title: Chapter 18: The Note

she should show michael the note! I wonder who would send such a note like that to her, thats sad

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Date: Jun 18, 2012 04:49 am Title: Chapter 17: First Day

what a great start for them. im happy that for once both of them are feeling happy.

Reviewer: mj58smooth Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2012 06:31 am Title: Chapter 19: The Bad Things Are Never Ending

Aww poor Lily :( And what kind of person would put a little girl through that?! Smh.

Reviewer: Calichick101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2012 07:56 am Title: Chapter 8: End The Pain

Omg...I'm taking the time to read this story and it is amazing! It's very, very sad though, but amazing. It's very well written too. I love it. I can't wait to read more :) xoxo Briana



Author's Response: Aw! :) Thank you! I hope that you continue to enjoy it!

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2012 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 17: First Day

Im happy that Michael and Lilly had great first day at school. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: amajorlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2012 12:55 am Title: Chapter 16: Boarding School

please update soon!!!! I hope they fit in there at the boarding school!!

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Date: Apr 28, 2012 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 14: Away

OMG Im soo happy that Lilly saw Michael again. I cryed my eyes out reading this chapter. You did a great job writing this chapter. When you get a chance please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E. <3

Reviewer: amajorlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2012 12:28 am Title: Chapter 14: Away

yes she is finally away from auny molly!!! hope she gets sent down, she was a nasty piece of work. hopefully lilys life can be turned around i cant wait for the next update!!!!!

Reviewer: amajorlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2012 12:22 am Title: Chapter 13: The Reason

I hope michael finds her!!!!!  ooh this is getting so good i love this story!!!

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