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Reviewer: mrsmj2011 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2012 09:42 am Title: Chapter 11

Noooooooo!!!  Please let him be ok. I don't want him to die ':(



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=/ I know, I know. Thanks for the review!

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Date: Jul 14, 2012 09:24 am Title: Chapter 10

This chapter was beautfiul. She told him that she loved him. She loves him so. I don't want him to kill Emilio. Maybe he can just call the police on the SOB. And while he's at call DCF.



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=) And the Police are worthless at this point. Thanks for review!!

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Date: Jul 14, 2012 09:16 am Title: Chapter 9

When I first saw this story, I didn't think that I could read cuz it talked about abuse. But I guess that my curiousity got the better of me and now I'm hooked.



Author's Response:

=) Glad I've hooked you! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mrsmj2011 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2012 09:07 am Title: Chapter 8

Lmao the detention part was too funny. Oh yeah I remember being on the phone until 3 or 4 in the morning talkin to my boyfriend back in HS. Ahh..this chapter just brought back sweet memories lol. Oooohhh...this is my song right here! *dances* XD



Author's Response:

Lmao, I used to stay up talking to Mike til like 5 am, only to wake up at 7 and see him again at 8:30 ^__^ Lol I love this song too!!! XD Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: mrsmj2011 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2012 08:50 am Title: Chapter 7

Wiz Khalifa as Cameron. Figures lol  Keyvonne says that he is sexy. She says that he's skinny too and she'll break him in half. Yeah, Yeah I know she is nasty. Oh yeah, it looks like Mike and Dri-Dri are gonna be a couple. That truck is so beast!  I love it XD



Author's Response:

Lol, I love Wiz and yessssss it is=) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2012 08:45 am Title: Chapter 16

:-) Awww Mike singing ^_^ He needs to be careful; she's right, he's not the type for that subastanecs. And omg, that's so cute, he is like the soft fuzzy part of velcro!! :D

And ha O's medicinals. Well, they better recognize XD

Great chapter dear heart xoxoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

=) Exactly. I love that analogy!

Lmao, O and his medicinals XD

Thannnks for the review Lemon Cake!!

Reviewer: mrsmj2011 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2012 08:41 am Title: Chapter 6

Lmao he is a perv. But its all good cuz he is so yummy XD



Author's Response:

Lmao, is he? XD Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mrsmj2011 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2012 08:33 am Title: Chapter 5

This story is so sad, but I can't stop reading it. Can't wait to read more XD



Author's Response:

Awwww=/ and Awwww=) XD Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: delavielove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2012 08:28 am Title: Chapter 15

Audrianna's mom is sooo ratchet -_____- like, you been stopped caring about yo child and then you randomly pop up when you can't get yo shit? Baby bye!

And lmfaaaooooo the song Cameron sang when rolling his blunt. I can't even deal. I was hollering. But ohhhh, Michael, he shouldn't have done that :( it's only acceptable for Audrianna to be upset



Author's Response:

Yesss, a ratchet mess. IDK why, but that song has a way of popping into my mind at the wierdest of times...Like church, baby showers and funerals -___- XD

Exactly, Mike knew better.

Thanks for reviewing!!

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Date: Jul 14, 2012 08:04 am Title: Chapter 4

Tony Montana, Tony Montana, Tony Montana. "Say hello to my litle friend!"  Scarface is my favorite gangsta movie. Mikey is fallin for her. I hope that he can save her from SOB of a stepfather.



Author's Response:

I fucking love that movie! XD thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mrsmj2011 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2012 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 3

I love Mustangs. My bestie, Sherry and her finace, JD share one. They are really fast lol. And I love Audrienna's car too. Michael is too fine w/his yummy self XD



Author's Response:

Mhmm, they're nice=) And that's a newer version of the car I had in high school, same color, rims, headlights etc.  Thanks for reviewing love!

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Date: Jul 13, 2012 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oooohhh..Vanessa Williams and Ice Cube. Girl, I knew when I saw O'Shea that you was talkin about his cray ass. Love it XD



Author's Response:

Lol yep! Love those two!!!! Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: mrsmj2011 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2012 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really feel sorry for her. I hate Emilio and her mother. Ooohh...girl I love Ashley Tisdale. She is the perfect choice for Madison. I can't wait to read more XD



Author's Response:

Lol yes. It was K. Stewart but it's impossible for me to get pics of that bitch smiling -__- Lol Thanks for reviewing.

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Date: Jul 13, 2012 05:39 pm Title: Character Information

I am intrigued and I can't wait to read more XD



Author's Response:

Lmao, I'm glad to see that you are intrigued. Lol thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2012 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 16

WOW Michael got high thats was so funny but also bad. Im Happy that Adrianna and Michael made love. Michael was made for Adrianna and i truely believe that. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Author's Response:

=) Yes yes yes and I just did. Thanks for reviewing.

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