Reviewer: True_Critic Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2013 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 35

Ugh ok i've always loved this story but everytime i see the samething of Michael becoming sick or crazed it starts to get annoying after awhile.

Everyone is doing the samething and im shocked that you are to.

Ok so Michael started off as pushy boss but then after awhile he turned crazy and sicko and twisted.

It's not always sexy with him being that way. Your one of my favorite authors but sometimes i can't always say i love everything. The same goes for all my other favorite authors.

I gotta be honest.

Not trying to down you or anything i just feel the need to be truthful.

Isn't he already crazy in Heist? though which is a great story i love it a great deal.

But as for this one goes i hope this doesn't turn into Heist number 2 matter fact this reminds me a bit of that other story by lostchild.

His other side almost idenical.

Well anyway carry on you did your best.

Author's Response: ....your words are confusing me seeing that this story was created before both Heist and the lostchild's story in fact it was the first psycho story that I have created and at the time NOBODY had a story like it on this site. But I'm guessing that you thought that every author's story was created at the same time. As for the character differences there are majors, especially seeing that you are comparing two completely different plots which is sort of impossible to do. Obviously you are over looking the fact that Michael in Heist is not only a psychopath but has many social and mental disorders which cripples him and his relationship with Sky. That is what the plot is centered around. Michael in Strictly Professional has no mental disorders, he is just an over bearing asshole which means he is held more accountable. This was my first story creating Michael this way therefor the character development was a bit vague. Heist is proof of my growth as an author, it has nothing to do with strictly professional. There is no comparing the two. How is it possible for this story to be the sequel when this one was created first?? That is what I ask. Is it because you enjoy Heist more? Well that's fine. But to compare your likes and dislikes of an author is unnecessary. As for the 'sexiness' of my story...I'm sorry but if that is what you think my character development of Michael is based primarily off of then I am greatly offended. I aim for a story with depth. Not sexiness. I'm sorry that I am not able to deliver the right amount of sexiness for you but that is not what my stories are about. Sure, they contain scenes that are meant to engage the reader in a sexual manner but by no means do I intend on centering his characteristics upon his sexiness. He's sexy enough I don't have to add anything to it. I understand that you are trying to be honest and whether or not you know this your review is extremely disrespectful. To somewhat hint that I stole my character from lostchild is inappropriate. If that isn't what you meant to do then that's fine but that is how it is coming off. To compare my works and claim that one is better is very rude. I work extremely hard on every story that I have created and each character has been developed with care. You may feel as if you are being truthful and maybe to you, you really are. But what you have been doing, going from author to author rudely reviewing and causing issues amongst the site is extremely disrespectful and uncalled for. I hope that your intensions are genuinely good, I honestly believe hey are. I don't believe that you intentionally hop from story to story saying rude things on purpose. I just ask that you be mindful of your actions and what comes out of your mouth. Thank you for your honesty, I am glad that you read my story and cared enough to feel the need to inform me that it is a copy cat of another story I have created. Thank you for that.

Reviewer: SunniVan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2013 03:35 am Title: Chapter 35

Okay... first of all Michael...

That is NOT how you treat the woman you are supposed to love.  His spoiled, bi-polar ass is gettin on my NERVES!!!

GRRR!!

And Cam needs to do something about this... he's driving her nuts, and she knows it. Goodness... such madness...

BUT I LOVE IT!!

Thank you so much for updating this!! Love it!!!! LOL!

Sunni*

Author's Response: Im glad you enjoyed the update and yes Michael is being an ass as always

Reviewer: dshanice Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2013 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 35

Michael is too sexy <3

Continueeeee! :D

Author's Response: I know right? If only that was me

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2013 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 35

Finally! Lol update more plz!

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2013 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 35

Damn Michael never stops & he's the boss alright poor girl is stuck & she can't do nothing about it. I was so glad to see this back :D I missed this story i see you been updating little at a time. That's cool cause i missed your stuff up here. Hope you update more of this soon girly! :) oh and update Rommie's & My Bully to :D ok I'm I'm being A pusher :P lol ttyl

Author's Response: Lol yes you are. Its difficult updating when I have sooooo many stories

Reviewer: Mjladyinlove1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2013 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 35

Damn Mike is something else I HOPE he DON'T cheat on her cause them my ass would be pissed like cam dont do some stupid shit michael or Im going to jump in athe story and beat the living hell out of you lol and just to let you know im Mikeylover32 and Mjladyinlove I had to make a new page because Mjfiction was tweaking so just letting you know keep going on here.

umm what happen with the thing we do for family huh you left me hanging

Author's Response: Lol well I have like a billion stories. I have to get to them one at a time

Reviewer: pweetie subi Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2013 10:06 am Title: Chapter 34

please update.this story is the best i read so far :)

Author's Response: oh wow thank you