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Summary: Past Featured Story

Arianna and Michael meet and right away they have a spark but what Arianna doesn't know is that Michael has been watching her for a long time and in a way waiting for her. Were they meant to be just friends or something more? Join me in a journey to find out.... 

I LOVE TO READ YOUR COMMENTS AND REVIEWS ON EACH CHAPTER OF MY STORY. IT MOTIVATES ME TO WRITE THE FOLLOWING CHAPTERS SO PLEASE FEEL FREE TO TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK. THANK YOU FOR READING! 

WOW!!! over 1500 Reviews! I never thought I would see that day!. Thank you so much. I am humbled and honored by your love. Thank you for making this story so popular in this website. 

** "WAITING FOR YOU" IS ONLY BEING POSTED BY ME ON MJFICTION IF YOU SEE THIS STORY ANYWHERE ELSE, IS NOT ME THEN IT HAS BEEN STOLEN. THANKS FOR THE SUPPORT!! 

 

Official Waiting For You Promoter: AMALuvzMJ

 

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Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, Lisa Marie Presley: 1994, HIStory: 1995-1999, This Is It: 2006-2009, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Lisa Marie Presley, Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 178 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 850299 Read Count: 266518
[Report This] Published: Mar 10, 2011 Updated: Feb 09, 2017
Reviewer: martovska Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96 - Starting Over...

It’s me again :D


Something just came to my mind. A few chapters back from now, Arianna asked Michael if he saw Lisa Marie to be attractive woman. For which he answered “..she’s not my type”. So I wonder, what Arianna’s POV will be? Will she think that he lied to her back then, and that he was unfaithful since long time ago?


p.s. You see what you did to your readers? I just can’t stop thinking about this story lol


You better give us two chapters at a time lol, the second one like a bonus for the waiting time lmao …. But take your time dear, we’ll wait :) <33



Author's Response:

Hey don't I know you from somewhere? HAHA j/k

hmmm...another good question and it seems that you and Arianna might be thinking alike...she asks him that in the next chapter but where would it go? Let's see

LOL I love that you are into this story. It keeps me going, it keeps me writing.

Thx hun as always for your support :D

Reviewer: martovska Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96 - Starting Over...

Hey, and this is me again :) …. Looks like me and joy2thaworld are the most impatient ones haha...


I just stopped here in hopes that maybe you updated, since you have been writing a lot lately lol


I am still mad at Michael as hell, and this story was not leaving my mind the whole day!


P.S. BTW, CONGRATULATIONS on 500’s Reviews girl :) YEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I couldn’t resist a temptation to be a 500 hundred reviewer LOL But you deserved them girl!!! You are very talented writer!!! AMAZING!!!!! I just never want this story to end :)


I hope  you give us the next chapter soon :) Love ya!!!



Author's Response:

LOL it's ok but I love that you two are so interested in the story, is very flattering :D

Thank you so much and YAY!!!! 500 reviews...I should throw a party. I feel very honored by the love of my readers. You are very sweet, hun and thank you for your sweet comments. You are amazing and your comments keep me going. I wanted to reply back right away when I saw it but I couldn't reply back from my phone but they definitely put a smile on my long stressful days.

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Date: Dec 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95 - It's Ugly in this November Rain...But so Beautiful on this Christmas Day!

Aaaaaarrrggggghhhhh!!! Michael…Michael….Michael!!! That boy needs a real good spanking in my opinion!!!!... Something just tells me that you going to bring  Lisa Marie into the story? Yes? No? I don’t know any more! Lol… I just need Arianna and Mike to be together again!!! He needs some good adult time too, so his ass would not be so stubborn! He will be salivating like Pavlov's dog lol


p.s. sorry for my absence girl, I was not home for the past week, but I read the previous three chapter from my phone, and wanted to post my reviews sooo bad, but my phone didn’t let me to…. I missed u and <3 u :) can’t wait for mooooore!!!



Author's Response:

LOL he does and that comment of Pavlov's dog had me dying LMAO.

Why am I not surprised that once again you are in my head?...hmmm....LMP is back in the next chapter, now up. I wonder what she would do! Check it out.

Missed you and luv u!!!

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Date: Nov 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90 - Shh...Don't Speak...

I can’t even imagine what Michael must have felt the first minutes after hearing those accusations! I hate Evan Chandler so much! I still do! How could people be so greedy? How can one bustard show up in someone’s life, and completely ruin him in the snap of a finger? For what? Money? Didn’t he think back then, that the truth would be reviled, and people would point fingers at him or his child? It has been almost twenty years since the allegations, and Jordan reviling the truth that his father made him admit all of those awful things just for money. But still, the boy is leaving on MJ’s money till now! What the reason of admitting the truth, and still keeping the money for himself? I’m pretty sure, that money earned that way will not bring him wealth and happiness. He always will be the person, because of who was hurt and humiliated the most innocent person in this world! … I still remember the statement that Michael released back from Neverland in 1993, and still it is so heart wrenching to see how much he suffered. And the police? Taking all of those pictures of him? Were they nuts? If that was my right to do, I would strip them, and throw them naked on the streets of NY, so they would get a feel of humiliation!


I understand that you had to write this for the story purpose, even if it’s too painful. But well done girl!!! Can’t wait for more! <3 ya! Your dedicated reader Oksana



Author's Response:

I know what you mean. I don't want to imagine what he felt like because I know it must have been killing him.

Is hard for me to comprehend that there are people in this world who would do anything for money but unfortunately there are bad people everywhere and that's the sad part of all of this. Life was never meant to be that way.

That's why Michael was special, he reminded people that we must love each other.

It is painful which is why this bad part is ending soon, is hard to write Michael's emotions as he goes thru this.

<333 ya more Oksana (love your name btw) ....a proud author to have a reader like you, MissA (Andrea)

P.S. What part of NY are you from?

Reviewer: martovska Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91 - I'll Stand By You....

YEY!!! They are getting married again! I know it’s not under the best circumstances, but they were married before. He really needs his little family right now! Arianna did great by giving him all of her love and support!.....And that little video really brightened my mood, really cute :)

P.S. Thank you for complimenting my name :) but I would gladly swap it for Andrea lol. I always loved it. This name makes a woman more sophisticated :) Is it Greek, or Spanish origin?.....And no, I don’t  live in NY, actually central NJ, but I go to the city often since it’s just 35 minutes drive to get to the Midtown Manhattan. I might be relocating to NY, all depends if I find a job any soon, since it’s a little bit slow right now here for new graduate nurses without experience. So I just started a job hunting :)

 

Please, please update soon! I’m really excited for the next chapter! <3 u too ;)

 



Author's Response:

yes, the video was cute. Wish they showed more of her but oh well, I'l take what they gave me.

P.S. no really I meant. I never heard your name before. I love it. Funny you like my name because when I was younger, I hated it. I used to dream of growing up and changing it. I'm ok now with it but it's like ehh lol

Sorry, I assumed when you said we were neighbors, you were from NY but you meant NY's neighbor state. Keep the faith, you will find something and good luck in your job hunting.

Next chapter is up. Love ya more :D

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Date: Nov 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87 - It ain't too hard for me to JAM....

Little Jimmy is growing up! But he has all the rights to be angry, Michael has to stay away from that evil family!...... I hope they will become a family again, and have more babies!


p.s. it was very rude of June to assume Arianna to be a single mother!


p.s. I love Give In To Me so much! He is sooo HOT, and beautiful at the same time in here. It is such a beauty that you want to hide from the world, and keep it all to yourself LOL …I never get tired watching that video, or listening to that song!



Author's Response:

Little Jimmy is growing up and I'm loving it, I absolutely adore him

LOL I know it was but Arianna handle with class :)

I am obsessed with that video and song. When I hear it on my ipod, I close my eyes and let his voice soothe me. He sounds so sexy in it and don't get me started on the video haha

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Date: Nov 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86 - Behind the mask....

WOW…you are writing a lot these days! I was out of the town for a week and you posted three chapters …YEY lol


I must say I feel guilty a little for Arianna keeping that a secret.


So here come the Chandlers? I still don’t get how people could humiliate, and hurt such an innocent soul!! It’s not like they were poor, or barley making for a leaving.. I hate such people, they would do anything just to get what they want. Always money hungry…never enough..



Author's Response: haha I had a lot of days off when I was home resting but now I'm back at work ugh! Don't feel guilty they will be ok, you'll see... I hate them too. I wish I could erase them from Michael's life in real life but sadly even if we do erase them, there will be another family who would have tried to hurt him.

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Date: Nov 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85 - Keep It In The Closet....

Damn…I was sitting on pins and needles while reading this chapter! In The Closet and Give in to me are my two most favorite videos!!! Do you see what I see? That fine ass, perfect muscles, and that flirty, sexy smile!!! Even my hubby likes that video, bud definitely for a different reason haha…. Naomi LOL. No wonder Arianna feels jealous! But did he just emphasize her to be his best friend? Damn wrong Michael, If was Arianna I would strangle him with my bare hands lol


I’m intrigued!!! Who was she on the phone with? Kristina? But Michael being the biggest snoop like most men are, should not think just the most negative things. It’s not like if Arianna have said to the other person “I love you, or I miss you…”. God… You are becoming a pro at making it harder to wait for your updates :)


p.s. tell your boyfriend that you are not the only one obsessed with sexy thing Michael haha…


Love ya :)



Author's Response: Girl, don't get me started on talking about Give in to me....I am obsessed with that video, is so simple but he looks like a sexy rock star in it, I can't watch it with out melting lol In the closet, is sexy on its own, I am not even paying attention to Naomi. My eyes are glued to Michael. My bf is a MJ fan but for other reasons, you know his dancing, his music and me too but to me he is the whole package, sexy, sweet, funny, kind...ok, ok I'm stopping haha you get my drift so my bf gets all jealous ;) " You are becoming a pro at making it harder to wait for your updates :) " <---- I'll take that as a compliment LOL Love ya more :D

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Date: Oct 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84 - We're almost there....

Hey girl, I’m glad that my last reviews have sparked new ideas in your head :) And I would never get upset if you haven’t considered them. Because you are great writer on your own!!! But I must admit, I’m more excited now, because it became a guessing game for me even more lol


Let me mess with your head a little more :) …..So now that Arianna decided to keep that a secret, and she can’t be on the birth control. She would not be able to tell Mike to use condoms. Or will she? Nah…. she will not find the reasoning for him? Or will she anyway?….. ok, I shut my mouth lol….. Write the way you want it, it’s going to be awesome anyway!


p.s. you should give your boyfriend a high five for “Michael Jackson porno” you made me laugh hard LOL. But what my nosy husband told me yesterday, almost knocked me out of my chair. He was asking me lately “What are you reading on your computer, and why are you hiding the computer screen from me every time I come in?”…he even crept slowly on his tip-toes once, just to get a pic of it lol. But yesterday, on his multiple attempts to snatch my computer away from me, he said “what are you hiding there? Naked Michael Jackson?” LOL.  So, I turned all shades of red at his comment. But then realized that he couldn’t have seen me reading mjfiction, because I’m using InPrivate Browsing from Internet explorer, and my browsing history is clear, except just school or work related links LOL …. I swear I would die from embarrassment if he ever found out about mjfiction LOL


But stories like yours just help me relax after the stressful day. So keep up your great work! And I will keep it a secret from my snoopy husband LOL. Also, Arianna should feel at ease, all wives have their little secrets haha…


Love ya ;)



Author's Response:

I love listening to my readers so I enjoy the little tips they give on the reviews and I especially love reading their guesses on what they think it's going to happen next.

Oh..so you are going to mess with my head even more huh? LOL regarding that we will see more of what happens with this decision of her keeping it quiet more as we go along further in the story ;)

I told my bf that everyone commented on what he said and he said "Well, how do they know?" I said "I wrote it on my mj porno site" and he laughed, he was like "I knew you loved Michael but damn I didn't know I was in competition with him, thankfully you won't see him again because you are obsessed" and he didn't mean it in a bad way but oh well, at least he knows I will leave him if Michael asked me LOL

LMAO at your story, I was like that in the beginning but when I started writing, he found out. It was hard to hide it then, he just laughed at me and shook his head.

I'm glad my stories make you feel better in a stressful day. You are so sweet. Love you more.

 

Reviewer: martovska Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83 - I'm asking for a miracle to come.....

Damn, I’m kicking myself for mentioning the baby thing to you. I guess I gave you an idea how to torture your readers more lol


And Arianna should get to the best clinic for a treatment, and keep her mouth shut. I understand that Michael is busy with a tour and everything, but Arianna should start trying for a baby. I know it may sound selfish, and not right, but keeping something a secret for a while doesn’t imply a lie. Mike would get really frustrated knowing she might not have the children anymore. Miracle must happen!!!.....Please update soon, I’m dying to know what will happen next :) <3



Author's Response: First of all, get out of my head lol. I actually knew this would happen so it was really hard to remain quiet after reading your last review. I don't want to torture you guys but this must happen for story purposes. And I hear what you are saying and you might be up to something. I'll keep that in mind. Thanks for reading, hun! Love ya! Xoxo :)

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Date: Oct 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82 - It doesn't matter if you are Black or White...

Thank you for your warm comment girl! I understand that you don’t want to revile anything so people would not lose interest. And now it became a guessing game for me, knowing that Lisa is still there lol. But please, those two need to have the baby of their own, even if it’s going to be later in their lives, even if the baby will be a complete secret, and hidden from the public eye!... But you are the writer, and I don’t want to mess with your ideas. And baby or no baby I still will love it, because you are awesome writer! :) Love ya too! ;)



Author's Response: I am very appreciative and humble for my readers. Honestly, this story would have never gone as far as it has if no one had responded to it and if no one liked it. You guys keep me going. As for Lisa, I am just going to keep you guessing...who knows what she is up to..if she is up to anything. My characters have a mind of their own,I just write their story ;) As for the baby idea, I want them to have a baby as well. I will have to talk to Michael and Arianna and see what happens (haha) ;) Thank you for sweet compliment. Love ya more :)

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Date: Sep 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73 - She's Invincible....

Hey girl,


The site was down, and I was afraid it will never be back. I am relived now :)


 You did good with this chapter. But Arianna starts to get on my nerves! Is she that blind? Doesn’t she see Michael is fighting for a reason? And damn River! I thought of him higher. How could he take advantage of her, knowing she is not over Michael? Knowing that she is still deeply in love with him? It is not like River was just a new guy that she just met, he was her friend. What kind of friend was he? Just a typical asshole trying to satisfy his needs at his first opportunity!!! Michael is still technically her husband, and has all the rights to fight for his family!!!!


Just curious. What kind of feelings does she have for River? What goes through her mind when she is with him?



Author's Response:

hey hun, I know. I was going crazy. Apparently, the website got hacked as they were switching servers. Thankfully, they were able to fix it. Brokensmile smile is a great hostess and she worked hard to get us up and going. Haha...Arianna is getting on everyone's nerves but I have faith in her and Michael. What does she feel for River? Next chapter, you will find out :)

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Date: Aug 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71 - He about to lose me

WOW Drama all the way!!!


Knowing that Sandra took advantage of Michael when he was drunk doesn’t make him a victim!!! Not at all!! Because he was supposed to be with his family, and not getting drunk on the after party at the first place. I know that trust between couples is one thing, but you can’t trust when it comes to other people. And if everybody knew they were married, that wouldn’t have gone so far! I guess Arianna’s words came true, he decided to keep them a secret, and other decided to split them apart, thinking that Arianna and Mike were not that serious!


I know that Arianna is going to regret that she slept with River, but I’m kind of glad that she did. It will make them sort of even. She is going to hurt poor guy’s feelings even more!!!


Is she really pregnant? Because if she is, and knew about it, the way she acted was damn wrong!!!!


Great chapter girl! I hate it and love it at the same time lol. Can’t wait for more!!! :) <3<3



Author's Response:

OMG I love you because you are the only one who saw Arianna's POV. Everyone was so busy defending Michael. LOL. Now, that does not mean that Michael was right or that Arianna was right in their actions. Thanks hun btw :) xoxo

Reviewer: martovska Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72 - Who is it? .....

I’m glad Arianna realizes it was not his doing. But still she is thinking how she would not be able to be with him, because another woman touched his body, or kissed his lips. On the other hand, she consciously sleeps with another man right the same day!!! So what about Michael’s feelings if to assume they would try to work it out? She even did it while her damn babysitter was watching Jimmy? So what kind of mother she is, and I’m not talking what kind of wife she is? Mothers don’t act on impulse, because they have obligations before their kids. So, if Mike and Arianna were to get divorced, the boy is better stay with his father at the moment!!!


People make mistakes throughout their whole life, but I guess the couples that have been married for some time are more experienced, and know better if there is anything left to be fighting for in such situations………. I’m not trying to defend Michael, because he is guilty for getting drunk, and for keeping them a secret. But the only thing I know they are separate and hurting bad. Still Arianna is much younger then Michael…….. I don’t know how you would continue. But what matters is Arianna’s opinion if she was to find out about Lisa’s plan! Would she look at things differently knowing that was supposed to happen one day or another?


Anyways, good luck Arianna trying to fall in love with River!!!! You know you never will!!!! Also, you are not better then Michael, because you are using this guy!!! And River you are better hiding FAST!!! LOL. Mike is coming after you!!! Lol


OMG, you got me hooked! It’s different when you have 69 chapters right in front of you, and you keep reading through drama moments almost all night long. But now my anticipation is killing me knowing there is no next chapter to read yet! I loooooooooove this story!!!!!!!! Please update soon, and try to scare off that boy River!!! Because, it is either a coincidence or what, but every time two people are fighting there is always a 3rd one trying to get in between. River, give them time to think through!!! It is too low to jump into bed with woman who loves another man, and that is because some dangling piece of your body is itching badly!!!....... Girl, you doing a gret job!!!! Can’t wait for more lol. :) <3! Oksana



Author's Response:

I know it's a little confusing huh? But I think when you live with your heart on your sleeve and let your emotions take over, you are bound to make some mistakes. You just think of protecting yourself. Arianna is young but not stupid, so don't lose faith on her yet. Michael and her just need to heal. I have faith on those two :)

I'm very happy that you are enjoying the story. I'm trying to post the following chapters as fast I can. I don't want to keep you guys waiting for too long. Thank you btw. xoxo

Reviewer: martovska Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70 - Eaten alive...

OMG, I can’t believe what happened!!! I was expecting a kiss, and some paparazzi taking a picture of them, but not that!!! So heartbreaking, I can understand what goes in Arianna’s head right now, but Michael? He will be broken!!! And Arianna is possibly pregnant right now??? Ohhhh God you got to fix that!!! Little one will need his daddy!!!!! Pleeeeeeeeease!!!



Author's Response:

the story took a different turn huh! ....I will try to have the next chapter up tonight if the server stops kicking me out *annoyed* :D