Penname: Beatit777 [Contact] Real name: Mary
Member Since: Apr 16, 2017
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Hello all...I'm a life long fan of Michael's who loves writing fan fiction, and sharing my love of Michael with others
Gender: Female
Age: 21+
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Summary:

 

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After being cheated on by his long term girlfriend successful (mostly behind the scenes) producer/ editor (for movies and TV shows) Michael Jackson decides to leave New York behind him and continue his work In Los Angeles where he meets Ariel Moore a broken hearted girl about to take her own life 

Will he help her find happiness again? 

Will she be able to let him trust women again?  

Will these two ever find true love or happiness? 

 

Find out in: A New Beginning 


Categories: 1993-1994, HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Attempted Suicide
Series: None
Chapters: 105 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133323 Read Count: 13376
[Report This] Published: Aug 19, 2016 Updated: Aug 11, 2017
Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 13, 2018 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Well, good to see they made up...I knew they couldn't stay angry at each other for too long... :)

Oh the assumption of the check out clerk... smh lol

Aww Ariel fell asleep...that's okay, Mike has the condoms on hand for the next time ;), lol

Author's Response:

They love each other too much to be mad :) 

 

Ikr? Smh 

 

 

 

Lol yes he does :) 

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Date: May 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Glad to see they made up...and they're working on understanding each other :).

Typical coworkers...'eyeroll' smh...LOL

Author's Response:

Yes they made up :)

 

 

Yes typical lol 

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Date: Jun 15, 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Hm...LaToya forgetting her passport in Asia...can't take that girl anywhere LOL smh

Love how Michael and Ariel are spending more time together :)...

It's interesting to have a gay woman's perspective...or is Jasmine bisexual? Still it's interesting to get her opinion about things :)

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

Yeah smh at that girl lol 

 

Yes more time for them together :) 

 

 

Jasmine is not bisexual, she only ever had girlfriends not boyfriends

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Date: Jun 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Well, that's good...Cindy's baby isn't Michael's...

Hmm...so Danny's a womanizer who doesn't really care about Cindy or their baby...let's see if he keeps his promise about making child support payments...Cindy just might have to REMIND him about that responsibility...

Author's Response:

Yes it's a good thing the babies not Michaels 

 

 

Yes that's Danny, let's hope for the sake of the child he pays child support 

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Date: Jul 14, 2018 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Good for Ariel, defending Michael and keeping Joseph from making the family believe Michael had been unfaithful to Ariel with the IVF & Jasmine.

Always love the twins :D. Sounds like their mommy will be having the 'where do babies come from?' talk with them pretty soon... :) 'Did you eat a baby?"...Too cute :D.

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

Yes Ariel will tell them how it really went 

 

 

Yes they're really curious lol

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Well, you know I LOVE Jamy...and Jayson...they are just too cute.

They sure do love Ariel...and Michael

Maybe Ariel will give Jamy and Jayson a little 'cousin' before the year is over

look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

They're adorable aren't they? 

 

 

We shall see ;) 

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Date: Aug 31, 2017 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Awwww...I always love scenes with little ones helping out :). Can just imagine Jayson sitting on the counter with the eggs. And of course Jamy perking up and joining in when the family had breakfast together...TOO CUTE :)

It's always hard for gay couples to start families because of the prejudice that exists. Hope the donor Maria has in mind is willing to help them out.

Good to see the willingness to let Jasmine be the godmother of Michael and Ariel's baby :)

Author's Response:

Yes those two are adorable :) 

 

Yes it's sad. Let's hope so

 

Yes she deserves it 

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Date: Jun 21, 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

LaToya may not have the best sense of timing...but at least Michael and Ariel didn't let that spoil their date :)

Katherine sounds like a good cook...wonder if Ariel and MJ will save enough for ME LOL :D

Author's Response:

They won't let anything spoil their time together :)

 

Yes she is, I want some too lol 

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Date: May 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Ariel really seems to care about Michael...

Michael seems to be warming to having Ariel around, but doesn't seem think he has a chance with her... will be interested to see if this changes...and if he finally picks up on Ariel's signals that she is interested in him

Author's Response:

Yes she really cares about him 

 

 

He's just careful and protective of his heart 

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Date: Jun 26, 2018 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Wow...Good old Joseph...smh...his comments about Michael helping Jasmine...good to see Michael standing up to him, and defending Katherine

So, Jasmine is pregnant...got my fingers crossed for the pregnancy to be successful :)

Author's Response:

Yes smh at him 

 

Yes she is :) 

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Date: Jul 29, 2018 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Glad to hear Jasmine is going to be okay...

Michael and Ariel...glad to hear they made up...maybe if they remember what is really important, they won't keep having arguments... :)

Author's Response:

Yes thankfully she's going to be ok 

 

We shall see if they keep having arguments or not  :) 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24, 2018 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Awww...nice to see Michael and Ariel have made up. How sweet they are with the babies :).

Good to see Michael was able to explain where the condoms came from...

Enjoy imagining the interactions :)

Author's Response:

Yes they made up and enjoy their family life together 

 

 

Yes he explained her 

 

 

 

Thank you i do too :) 

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Date: Sep 14, 2017 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

What a sweet thing for Janet and Latisha to do for Ariel...making her a maternity dress :).

Smh...Jasmine's parents...smh, typical...sad but typical :(.

Author's Response:

Yes they're sweet to do that :) 

 

Yes smh at them 

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Date: Sep 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Good to see things worked out with Ariel and her mother :)

LOL, Ariel and Michael's conversation

Janet's face must have been red when she walked in and heard what her brother and his fiance were discussing, lol :D

Author's Response:

:) 

 

Oh well Janet is used to alot with that many brothers lol 

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Date: Sep 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Aww... always love Jamy and Jayson when they visit :D...so darn cute :D

Author's Response:

Ikr?  I want kids like that lol (well maybe two pair of Jayson because Jamy can be a handful lol)