Penname: Beatit777 [Contact] Real name: Mary
Member Since: Apr 16, 2017
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Hello all...I'm a life long fan of Michael's who loves writing fan fiction, and sharing my love of Michael with others
Gender: Female
Age: 21+
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Reviews by Beatit777
Summary:

Amber and Michael free from the clutches of Gary, head off to the sunny side of L.A hoping to follow their dreams but amongst the mix of finding where they belong...

they are blessed with a child and unknown shores of drama drop into their life which wasn't expected..

How will they cope?

Can they sustain their relationship though it all juggling with a child and their own dreams?
Find out in..

in the sequel to 'I Found that Girl'...

'California Dreaming'


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Adventure, Drama, Family, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: A/M Adventures
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83200 Read Count: 111807
[Report This] Published: Mar 04, 2016 Updated: Aug 22, 2017
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Date: Jun 08, 2018 Title: Chapter 32: Ch 32

Hm...clearly Amber regrets her behaviour.

Ik Michael is hurting right now, but let's hope it won't be too long until he is able to find it in his heart to forgive Amber.

Author's Response:

At last her eyes are open and she regrets her actions. Let's hope mike comes around and choses to forgive her. Time can only tell 🙏. Thanks Mary! 

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Date: Dec 04, 2018 Title: Chapter 49: Ch. 49

Hm...so LaToya is willing to apologise and patch things up...we'll just see how sincere she really is...And if Michael believes her

The exchange between Michael and Marlon...lol

Author's Response:

I agree it is a start buut knowing her in this story it might be a good or bad thing..if mike decides to believe her and welll those two I doubt will ever get along lool. 

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Date: Sep 25, 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Ch.16

Sweet family reunion :). lol :)

Good to hear Katherine hadn't been 'in the dark' about Joseph's mafia activities.

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

I'm glad you thought it was sweet lol. Of course she wouldn't be in the dark but makes you wonder why she didn't think of trying to stop it 🤔.

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Date: Feb 03, 2019 Title: Chapter 52: Ch. 52

"You walking bag of helium"...LOL XD

Right from the discussion to the make-up sex...;)...you go Michael...lol.

Author's Response:

ah will the two hot heads ever get along? by that statement you quoted I doubt it and mike using sex to get Amber distracted smh XD. thanks mary <3

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Date: Jul 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: ::Ch. 5::

Uh oh...wonder who took their van?...good suspenseful segment, btw :).

Whew...at least they're able to afford a taxi :)

Author's Response:

whoever stole their van isn't a nice person smh but thankfully like you said they can afford a taxi lol.

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Date: Jan 06, 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Ch.23

I agree with Amber... Michaela was clearly in the wrong having bumped into Marlon, knocking his hot dog out of his hands...And she is little too into herself...smh

Author's Response:

Indeed her pride wouldn't allow her admit in the moment at least she bought him another hot dog lol. Well let's hope she becomes decent in Amber eyes eventually but we shall see as time goes on lol. Thanks Mary! 

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Date: May 10, 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Ch.30

Well, at least once Michael and Amber are moved to their new place, Amber won't have to see Marlon with Michaela...unless Marlon and Michaela decide to drop over.

Enjoyed picturing Michael and Amber having breakfast together, and then shopping for baby furniture :)...

Author's Response:

Yep At least there is one good reason they are moving away lol. You can tell Amber hasn't warmed up to Michelea yet lol. Thanks Mary! 

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Date: Jul 27, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: ::Ch. 6::

Well, good they were able to get jobs. :)

Hopefully they'll earn enough to hold them over, and help them get out of town quickly if Joseph figures out where they are and comes looking for them.

Am enjoying the suspense of this story, btw :)

Author's Response:

thankfully they would have enough to maybe move on or stay in this town who knows what they will decide mary lol. i'm glad your enjoying it so far plenty more for you to read ;p

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Date: Aug 10, 2017 Title: Chapter 9: ::Ch. 9::

Of course it was...dad betrayed the family.

Interesting backstory. Not all women would be as forgiving as Cherri seems to have been.

Author's Response:

Sadly yes Andy betrayed the family and that's true no one would be so forgiving but Cherri was. 

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Date: Jul 14, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: ::Ch.1::

I always enjoy a story where the characters go on the road together :).

Maybe Michael can return, and visit the horses from time to time...when the coast is clear :)

Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response:

We shall see if he does or not knowing Michael lol. I'm glad your liking it so far. Plenty more for you to read.

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Date: Jul 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 4: ::Ch. 4::

Oooh... Good suspenseful chapter, btw :)

It's brave of Marlon to keep quiet even after being pummeled by Joseph.

Hope someone won't spill the beans about Michael and Amber being in Las Vegas... from what I've heard, there's a lot of mafia in that city...

Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response:

Because he cares more about them then he does for Joseph but let's hope no one finds out or they are doomed. 

Summary:

 

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After being cheated on by his long term girlfriend successful (mostly behind the scenes) producer/ editor (for movies and TV shows) Michael Jackson decides to leave New York behind him and continue his work In Los Angeles where he meets Ariel Moore a broken hearted girl about to take her own life 

Will he help her find happiness again? 

Will she be able to let him trust women again?  

Will these two ever find true love or happiness? 

 

Find out in: A New Beginning 


Categories: 1993-1994, HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Attempted Suicide
Series: None
Chapters: 105 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133323 Read Count: 13376
[Report This] Published: Aug 19, 2016 Updated: Aug 11, 2017
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Date: Jun 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Well, that's good...Cindy's baby isn't Michael's...

Hmm...so Danny's a womanizer who doesn't really care about Cindy or their baby...let's see if he keeps his promise about making child support payments...Cindy just might have to REMIND him about that responsibility...

Author's Response:

Yes it's a good thing the babies not Michaels 

 

 

Yes that's Danny, let's hope for the sake of the child he pays child support 

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Date: Jul 14, 2018 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Good for Ariel, defending Michael and keeping Joseph from making the family believe Michael had been unfaithful to Ariel with the IVF & Jasmine.

Always love the twins :D. Sounds like their mommy will be having the 'where do babies come from?' talk with them pretty soon... :) 'Did you eat a baby?"...Too cute :D.

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

Yes Ariel will tell them how it really went 

 

 

Yes they're really curious lol

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Date: Jul 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Well, you know I LOVE Jamy...and Jayson...they are just too cute.

They sure do love Ariel...and Michael

Maybe Ariel will give Jamy and Jayson a little 'cousin' before the year is over

look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

They're adorable aren't they? 

 

 

We shall see ;) 

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Date: Aug 31, 2017 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Awwww...I always love scenes with little ones helping out :). Can just imagine Jayson sitting on the counter with the eggs. And of course Jamy perking up and joining in when the family had breakfast together...TOO CUTE :)

It's always hard for gay couples to start families because of the prejudice that exists. Hope the donor Maria has in mind is willing to help them out.

Good to see the willingness to let Jasmine be the godmother of Michael and Ariel's baby :)

Author's Response:

Yes those two are adorable :) 

 

Yes it's sad. Let's hope so

 

Yes she deserves it