Penname: Beatit777 [Contact] Real name: Mary
Member Since: Apr 16, 2017
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Hello all...I'm a life long fan of Michael's who loves writing fan fiction, and sharing my love of Michael with others
Gender: Female
Age: 21+
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Summary:

 

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After being cheated on by his long term girlfriend successful (mostly behind the scenes) producer/ editor (for movies and TV shows) Michael Jackson decides to leave New York behind him and continue his work In Los Angeles where he meets Ariel Moore a broken hearted girl about to take her own life 

Will he help her find happiness again? 

Will she be able to let him trust women again?  

Will these two ever find true love or happiness? 

 

Find out in: A New Beginning 


Categories: 1993-1994, HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Attempted Suicide
Series: None
Chapters: 105 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133323 Read Count: 13376
[Report This] Published: Aug 19, 2016 Updated: Aug 11, 2017
Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 27, 2018 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93 A whish come true

Wow...in labor more than thirty hours 😮
Sometimes babies take their sweet time...and then when they come...they COME!!!

Happy birthday, little Michaela :D...Sounds like she'll be raised in a supportive, loving family :) (on the Jackson side that is) :)...

Author's Response:

Yes babies have their own time 

 

 

 

Yes little Michaela will have a loving family 

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Date: Jun 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I love those twins :D. Especially Jamy :D

Author's Response:

Me too :) she's something alright lol

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Date: Aug 01, 2017 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Hm...Richard could use a little compassion where Ariel is concerned, impo.

Hopefully the thought of being pregnant (or possibly being) will take Ariel's mind off her father's attitude. :)

Author's Response:

Yes agree 

 

We'll see ;)

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Date: Jan 27, 2018 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Oh that Richard smh :(. That would be cool if the private investigator turned out to be a friend of Michael's who helped keep Richard away from Michael and Ariel :).

Sweet scene between Maria and Jasmine :).

Aww...Michael surprising Ariel with a trip to Hawaii :)...and having made all the arrangements :)

Author's Response:

Yes smh at Richard smh 

 

 

Yes they're a cute couple :) 

 

 

He's sweet like that :) 

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Date: Oct 09, 2018 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Well, Michael's gonna have a lot of little ones to be daddy to :D...

It's nice that both families are accepting of all the relationships...especially Jaz and Maria's :D.

Author's Response:

Yes he's made to be a father :) 

 

 

Yes they all accept their relationship :) 

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Date: May 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Sweet of Michael to make up for the night before :).

His interactions with his niece and nephew are adorable. Maybe Jamy would like ice cream ON her pancakes?... LOL

Rebbie's lucky her brother likes kids, and loves his neices/nephews :)

Author's Response:

Yes he's sweet :)

 

Lol 

 

 

Yes Rebbie is lucky to have such a wonderful brother who helps her 

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Date: Nov 21, 2017 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Maybe someone should try to convince Michael that age is just a number... lol :).

Hmmm...having Jasmine babysit...maybe that will help her not feel so bad if she and her girlfriend aren't able to find a 'love juice' donor :)...

Chicken wings and rice...sounds yummy :D

Author's Response:

Lol 

 

Yes let' hope so 

 

 

Ikr?

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Date: Nov 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Hm...sounds like Maria is feeling insecure about her relationship with Jasmine, maybe she should let Jasmine know how she's feeling, and see if she has anything to worry about... which I'm guessing she probably wouldn't... Maybe John should do the same...ijs

Purple is one of my favorite colors :)

Hope they find someone willing to donate a little 'love juice'

Author's Response:

Yea she should tell Jasmine how she feels 

 

Same here :)

 

 

We shall see ;)

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Date: Jul 19, 2017 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Seaworld

Yay, a story where they go to Sea World...one of my favorite places :).

Hm...seems Jamy was being a bit of a handful...lol. Can see her point though...lol :).

Maybe if they'd let Jamy feed the dolphins she would have been more interested in them :)

Author's Response:

Yes it's great place to go to :) 

 

Yes Jamy is a handful lol 

 

 

Maybe lol 

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Date: Nov 19, 2017 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

I can imagine the scene between John and Sally ;).

Fortunately Michael had an extra car, and John and Sally didn't live that far away...

Author's Response:

;)

 

Yes Fortunately Michael had the extra car 

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Date: May 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

LOL :D, reading this made my day :D.

Michael is so good with kids...

Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear that :)

 

Yes he is :)

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Date: May 14, 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

'Sleeping buddies'...LOL I love it :)

Wonder what Katherine will say when she meets Ariel

Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response:

Yes actual sleep lol 

 

 

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Date: Dec 21, 2017 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

lol...Sally and John's discussion about blank and red pram colors as opposed to pink and purple...

How lucky to have Michael and his creative talents living right across the street :D... lol

Author's Response:

Lol it's important to pick the colors right lol 

 

Ikr? Lol

 

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Date: Aug 17, 2017 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Awww...always love it when Jamy and Jayson visit :D... They are always so cute with their uncle and 'auntie elfie princess :D.

Sounds like Richard and Ariel have patched things up...Good for Michael explaining his stopping Ariel from committing suicide.

Author's Response:

Yes they're adorable :) 

 

 

Yes they did a little

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Date: Oct 01, 2017 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Oooh...triplets, more little cousins for Jamy to play with...lol :D.

Latoya and her baby fashion sense LOL

So, Sally and Ariel are both pregnant, and having mood swings etc...poor John and Michael LOL

Looking forward to more :D.

Author's Response:

Yes triplets lol 

 

Lol yes Toya and her fashion advice :)

 

Uh huh poor guys lol