Penname: Beatit777 [Contact] Real name: Mary
Member Since: Apr 16, 2017
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Hello all...I'm a life long fan of Michael's who loves writing fan fiction, and sharing my love of Michael with others
Gender: Female
Age: 21+
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Summary:

 

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After being cheated on by his long term girlfriend successful (mostly behind the scenes) producer/ editor (for movies and TV shows) Michael Jackson decides to leave New York behind him and continue his work In Los Angeles where he meets Ariel Moore a broken hearted girl about to take her own life 

Will he help her find happiness again? 

Will she be able to let him trust women again?  

Will these two ever find true love or happiness? 

 

Find out in: A New Beginning 


Categories: 1993-1994, HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Attempted Suicide
Series: None
Chapters: 105 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133323 Read Count: 13376
[Report This] Published: Aug 19, 2016 Updated: Aug 11, 2017
Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 15, 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Hm...LaToya forgetting her passport in Asia...can't take that girl anywhere LOL smh

Love how Michael and Ariel are spending more time together :)...

It's interesting to have a gay woman's perspective...or is Jasmine bisexual? Still it's interesting to get her opinion about things :)

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

Yeah smh at that girl lol 

 

Yes more time for them together :) 

 

 

Jasmine is not bisexual, she only ever had girlfriends not boyfriends

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Date: May 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Glad to see they made up...and they're working on understanding each other :).

Typical coworkers...'eyeroll' smh...LOL

Author's Response:

Yes they made up :)

 

 

Yes typical lol 

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Date: May 13, 2018 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Well, good to see they made up...I knew they couldn't stay angry at each other for too long... :)

Oh the assumption of the check out clerk... smh lol

Aww Ariel fell asleep...that's okay, Mike has the condoms on hand for the next time ;), lol

Author's Response:

They love each other too much to be mad :) 

 

Ikr? Smh 

 

 

 

Lol yes he does :) 

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Date: Jul 23, 2018 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Sometimes it takes impartial observers to give insight into situations.

Michael and Ariel are lucky to have Jasmine and Maria to point things out and (hopefully) smooth things over :)

Hopefully Michael and Ariel will take their friends' advice

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

Yes sometimes you need someone else to help you understand the situation 

 

 

Yes they're very lucky to have Jasmine and Maria 

 

 

 

Let's hope so 

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Date: Apr 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Michael and Ariel's exchange made me LOL

Will be interested to see if things change between Michael and Ariel...and if they start liking each other...though something tells me they already do...their egos just won't let them admit it... ;)

Author's Response:

They're something else lol 

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Date: Mar 02, 2019 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Wow...sounds like Ariel has her heart/mind set on getting the new place built as soon as possible.

Good to hear Christian was willing to contribute the needed money

Look forward to reading how this will all turn out :)

Author's Response:

Yes what Ariel wants Ariel gets lol 

 

 

He had to it's his daughter and grandchild too 

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Date: Jul 06, 2018 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

The dinner Michael and Maria made sounds good...hope they saved some for us...lol XD

Sounds like Jasmine's pregnancy is successful so far...yay :)

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

I hope so too lol 

 

Yes it's going so well :) 

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Date: Jul 01, 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

The perfect end to a perfect night... ;)

Author's Response:

Yes ;)

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Date: Jun 05, 2018 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Aww...The interactions of the triplets while Michael is holding them while he's working. The little guy playing with his toes...and the curious expression of his brother...and his sister sleeping...too cute :)

Hm...Ariel's offer is very generous...wonder what Michael and Maria's responses will be

Author's Response:

They're adorable (so is their daddy lol) :) 

 

 

We shall see what they think ;) 

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Date: Jul 03, 2017 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Michael and Ariel's friends kidding around with them about their night together... am picturing Ariel: "Hey everybody, t.m.i. okay" LOL

Wow, a romantic day at the beach...wonder if they'll invite us? :D. lol

Author's Response:

That's what friends are for lol 

 

I'm sure they would invite us too lol 

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Date: Nov 11, 2018 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

I'm sure it's difficult for Ariel to tell Michael about the miscarriage, but I agree she should tell him (when she's ready) so they can clear the air.

That image of Michael holding Michaela...too cute :.

Author's Response:

Yes it's difficult but agree she should tell him 

 

Ikr? 

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Date: Jun 23, 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Wow...talk about bad timing...Cindy and Danny showing up when they did was the last thing Michael needed...poor guy.

And their attitudes...smh...talk about CLUELESS...smh...tbh, they DESERVE each other (no one else could stand their arrogance and their stupidity...lol)

Author's Response:

Yes it's the last people he needed to see 

 

Agree lol 

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Date: May 04, 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow...Ariel had an EVENTFUL day...whew! lol.

It's good Michael is there for her...perhaps later (or whenever he's ready) Michael will let Ariel be there for him...

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

Yes she had lol 

 

Let's hope he will let her be there for him when needed 

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Date: Aug 06, 2017 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

YAY...Ariel and Michael are pregnant :D...lol

So...they sell pregnancy tests at THOSE places too...hmmm...;)

Wonder what Jamy will say if her new cousin is a girl :)...looking forward to finding out

Author's Response:

Yes they are :) 

 

I don't know lol but In fiction they do lol 

 

We will see what Jamy had to say :)

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Date: Jun 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I love how Jamy enjoys seeing Michael and Ariel together :D...

Michael playing Santa with the twins...I agree he and Ariel would be good parents :)

Look forward to reading more

Author's Response:

Yes she's adorable :)

 

 

Yes they will be :)