Penname: mjsplaything [Contact] Real name: Tianna
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Now Or Forever by eaw112 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

She is rich...he is from the other side? What happens when they decide to get together?


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990
Characters: None
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 124910 Read Count: 2657
[Report This] Published: Feb 28, 2016 Updated: Jul 03, 2018
Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Aug 01, 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Blue

Awwww. Mike is sprung on Gina. I loved the ending when he knew her favorite color. Lol at the guys teasing him too but might have to call Mike "Popeye" because the way he was lookin at Sidney's ass lol all that peach cobbler lol but great chapter as always!



Author's Response:

You already know, he been sprung lol and yeah Drel and Terry are a mess. They need to back up off our boy sometimes, they be straight disrespectful lol. And that definitely needs to be his nick name lol He definitely needs to stop entertaining these women but...atleast he's trying tho. And you're funny "all that peach cobbler" haha. Luckily no one will have to worry about Sidney, she already  has a man lol. She and Mike are just old friends from High school.  And thank you, I finally feel like the story is getting somewhere now that they are getting to know each other more intimately and are actually doing stuff opposed to just his house, eating and dodging bullets lol. But anyway, I will see you next chapter!

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Jul 30, 2017 Title: Chapter 22: For now?

Girl.... the plot thickens. Michael better watch his back. D is straight up rubbing me tge wrong way! And Mama and Kenny are on the outs. Awwww. Though I forgot what Kenny looked like. And I loved how you picked Blair Underwood for Henry. He fits perfectly. But Mama Huntley better chill. She spying on Michael and Gina but got enough drama of her own. She better quit before shit hits the fan. But girl, this is awesome! I love how the story is heating up. Keep up the good work! And damn, when we gonna get a full blown erotic chapter between Michael and Gina?! Bout time these two knocked boots....and remember it lol!



Author's Response:

Lol You're too much but it's always great getting a review from you though! And I agree with everything you said: Michael needs to watch his back and Elaine...I don't know what to say about her. And as far as the erotic chapter, I'll think of something *wink* 

Thanks for reviewing boo!

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Mar 01, 2016 Title: Chapter 2: After math/ Liberation

i love love love! Michael told that police officer off! I was like dayyyuuuuum lol but that comment that the black police officer made was foul tho, and aww Michael felt as if the shooting was his fault, but he had no right to act out on Gina. And I sense the feels going on between those two lol sending early apology texts and teddybears and what not....good good love! 

 

By the way, I don't know if you know that I have a story on here. It's called "Remember the Time", If you haven't, feel free check it out, but if whether you did or not, let me know what you think about it so far!



Author's Response:

Thanks and I thought the teddy bear thing was cute too but, I'm sure there will be some bumps in the road. Oh, and no, I haven't read it but I will definitely check it out...see ya!

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Feb 29, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: How am I gonna live through this Pt1

Oh shit, who's shootin lol when the guns blow, get low lol but hmmm...pretty juicy so far, I'm already interested. Love it already! But dang she done baptized him in that strawberry lemonade lol and now he actin right lol



Author's Response:

Lol, you got me over here crying. She baptized him lol but yeah, I guess that's how you gotta do em sometimes . I'm glad it caught your attention, I really appreciate it! More to come so stay tuned!

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Oct 15, 2017 Title: Chapter 27: The party

Haha. Felics tryin to get the digits. He ain't slick! 🀣 I could see Michael grilling his ass hard. Plus, where  is the steamy sex scenes for Mike and G?! I'm waaaaaaaiting lol! Girl, I'm so glad ur back. I missed this story and ur writing. I also came out with a lil something new called "Intimate Stranger". Feel free to check it out boo! And keep it up. I'm sipping slow on this tea! 🍡🍡



Author's Response:

Hey boo! And you know I gotchu, soon as I can and thank you, I appreciate it. And I already plan it girl!!! I know Intimate stranger is gonna be lit! And thanks,I will. See you next chapter!!

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: May 13, 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Plans/ All alone pt2

Baby it was a rocky chapter! I thought Mike was gonna get popped something ridiculous but yes he made it and he saves Bonds. And girl that kiss tho d84;a039;d84;a039;👍🏾 aye! Now we getting somewhere! Gina know she enjoyed that kiss cheesin like a Cheshire Cat lol I woulda been cheesin too! Anyway excellent chapter doll face!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I don't know why she tryna front lol But thank you very much babe, I will see you next chapter 😘

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Aug 23, 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Pick Your Battles

Loving itttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks boo! Get ready, it's about to get crazy really soon

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Aug 23, 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Game On PT 2

Yay! They finally made it official! Michael's family is gonna love it I'm sure. Mama Huntley however... hmmmpf! We shall see. Sippin' slow. Bomb chapter and I'll be sure to have your tea nice and hot! Wink wink*!



Author's Response:

Girl, you can never tell with her trifling butt but yeah, the Jackson are definitely more accepting. And you do thatπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Jul 07, 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Walmart

Hey girl! My comment section been dry lately! Where you been at?!!! And trust and believe, I've been having serious writer's block too and just like you, I don't wanna pull up any crap either. I miss your comments. Hopefully, we will go back and forth like we used to. Keep it up girl! Btw, this chapter was cute: the Huntleys face off with the Jacksons lol



Author's Response:

Hey! And just going through life lol. I feel you, it's so hard to keep stories going correctly and consistently. And I hope we can too. Thanks for the support boo! I'm glad you liked it because I wasn't feeling it as much. See you next chapter!!!

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Mar 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 5: I know I asked but, should I go?

Awww Gina is so nervous 😊 But yeah when u got fine ass Michael Jackson at ur doorstep my panties would be damper than a Florida hurricane 😆😅😂💦💦💦c28; Can't wait for this date! Awesome once again girl!



Author's Response:

Lol, you kill me! Thanks for reading and reviewinga86;😘

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Mar 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Hell Nah/ Maybe just maybe

haha! That scene when Micharl was watching the football game he was fantasizing about Gina! Yo I died lol and Michael almost caught himself some vertigo when he saw Joseph at the table to I thought he was gonna start snapping for a second! I'm also glad Gina texted him back! Now this shall really be interesting! Great chapter, girlie! 😊



Author's Response:

Heyyy, so nice to see you back at the party lol. Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Mar 02, 2016 Title: Chapter 3: You gon call or naw?

Uh oh...look at Mike Mike puttin the moves of the ladies lol..I bet he used his signature pelvic thrust on her lol but we all know baby boy is sprung on Gina so ol' girl didn't have no shot past a one night stand...come on Gina, call him back...Call him back girl! Great job, girl. This is my new guilty pleasure next to IHOP pancakes lol



Author's Response:

LOL you killin' me and yeah, he need to stop playing his self on that and I hope you're right about him and the girl.  But you know what, now that I'm thinking about it, Gina's kinda playing herself too because one minute she wants him and the next she doesn't I mean, make up your mind girl...dang! And I hope she calls him too but you know she said she like to make the brothas wait so....mmm. But anyway, thank you so much...I really appreciate it! I'll be sure to keep this one around then since you like it so much and you had me rolling with the IHOP pancakes lol They are the bomb though. See ya next chapter!

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Apr 15, 2016 Title: Chapter 13: The questions you seek pt1

Shit... Michael better be clean! I was bout to smack him lol and I knew that this was lyin! Heifer ass and whoo trouble in paradise for Elaine and Kenny...let's see how this plays out! Great chapter girl! Had me at the edge of my seat!



Author's Response:

Great thank you lol But why didn't you tell me that I was lacking in the typo department huh? Lol👀 Just kidding.  But yeah, let's see how this plays out. See you next chapter girl

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Apr 15, 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Why don't you come over?

Uh oh, she done came over! I feel like some draws r about to drop or maybe I'm wrong and Michael's lil crib is cute but bruh him and that speed limit...come on Michael, I felt like I was bout to die n I wasn't even in the car lol great job tho girl!



Author's Response:

Thanks lol

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Apr 15, 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Why don't you come over pt2/ Mama's Baby, Michael's Maybe

Oh my god I hope Amber is wrong or lying ....oh shit....



Author's Response:

We'll see lol