Penname: mjsplaything [Contact] Real name: Tianna
Member Since: Feb 05, 2015
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Summary:

A young, non-traditional Catholic priest battles his own personal conflicts of controversy, love, and lust in his vocation.

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Banner by: Lorry

Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Angst, Crime, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense, Thriller, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Physical Abuse, Racism, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33290 Read Count: 2510
[Report This] Published: Sep 26, 2015 Updated: Jul 28, 2016
Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Nov 19, 2015 Title: Chapter 2: โ€ Chapter 2

Poor Michael, he is so bombarded. I would be nearly frightened and feeling trapped if you asked me. Lol at the young female spectator that thought he was hot...on the inside, I probably would have said the same thing!



Author's Response: Exactly! Being a young priest, especially a non-traditional is taxing and on top of that, he's getting some celebrity for it so he is feeling bombarded. And I laughed then entire time I wrote the female spectator referring to him as hot!

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Nov 19, 2015 Title: Chapter 3: โ€ Chapter 3

Michael to the rescue!!!!!! Get him, Michael! He still has a hint of bad boy in him! Don't let the priestness fool you lol!

And I loved what his mother said, IRONIC BUT TRUE! “Your more like a pop superstar than a just a mere priest of a parish,” Katie commented to Michael also noticing the stares and chatter. 



Author's Response: Lol 1986 is the beginning of the Bad era so I had to throw in some badness! Also, I'm glad you notice that ironic quote!

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Nov 19, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: โ€  Prologue-Chapter 1

Looks like we have a handsome and honorable priest at that! Haha, the ladies came to the church in droves lol, but I loved your description of him.

 

A thunderous applause broke throughout the crowd, giving the new priest a respectful standing ovation. Many spectators and observers especially the female ratio enamored by the priest’s nontraditional look. He was a gorgeous man to look at, bright, intense eyes, head full of soft curls, high perfect sculpted cheekbones and a jawline that made any woman swoon, and a toothpaste ad smile that lit up any room. 

So far, great start!



Author's Response: Hi New Reader! I'm glad you enjoy the storyline! It was pretty tough making Michael into a priest even though he has always deemed himself a religious and spiritual man!

Summary: Past Featured Story


On June 27, 1999, Michael Jackson was performing in a charity benefit concert in Munich Germany. Towards the end of his performance tragedy struck when there was a malfunction with a cable snapped causing him to fall 50 feet. After sustaining serious injuries, he was stabilized then transferred to the States where he had multiple surgeries to mend his battered and broken body.  In his depressed state he has become the patient no one can handle.


Jo Quinn is a traveling, tough as nails, Physical Therapist who has been assigned the hardest cases across the country because of her take no prisoners attitude. She jumped at the opportunity to return to where her roots are, move back to New England and take on the special case that no one in the agency wanted. 


Will she be the one to finally fight back and help him help himself? Will he finally heal his physical and mental wounds? Can she be the one to finally see him for who he really is and allow him to be himself and get the care he needs? Afterall, he's only human and has his faults just like everyone else. Join them on their emotional journey and find out.


Categories: Award Winning, HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 77 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 386644 Read Count: 33086
[Report This] Published: Oct 20, 2015 Updated: Oct 28, 2016
Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Oct 21, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it so far, keep going!!!! and i died when he said, "my knee is stiffer than a new groom's cock"---bahhhaaaaaaa! love it! i'm gonna use that one!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it.  Sometimes I dont know where I come up with these one liners.  I promise there will be more in his future.  Thanks for taking the time to review.

Summary:

Michael Jackson is a nerdy college freshman with one thing on his mind: losing his virginity. Almost as soon as he steps foot onto his college campus, he lays on eyes on Bianca Jefferies, a sexy and sultry senior. Within seconds, he is determined to lose his virginity to her and have her teach him everything she knows about sex. After much reluctance, she agrees to do so. But what can a fun, rendezvous possibly turn out to be? Find out in Teach Me.

 


Categories: Humor, Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, Drama
Characters: Lisa Marie Presley, Michael
General Warnings: Erotica, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Financial Abuse, Physical Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8206 Read Count: 758
[Report This] Published: Jan 10, 2016 Updated: Mar 25, 2016
Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Mar 19, 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Congrats on being a new mommy! 😊 Please tell us what ur having when u find out! Awww 😊

Now back to the story! Poor Mike! He's a virgin 😊 Hey that's rare! Not too many guys r nowadays n that's a precious thing! But anyway, chile I think slowly Bianca's gonna start warming up to Michael. Shoo, I wonder how Trina's gonna react! Great story girl this is the bomb.com!



Author's Response:

thank you doll 😍 I'm gonna have a loooooooong pregnancy since I found out so early! but of course you know I'm gonna tell you guys what I'm having when the time is right 🙂. and yes any guy over the age of 16 being a virgin is so rare nowadays ! but with Michaels charisma he may be losing it soon 😝. Bianca is just being difficult rn lol with her stubborn ass 

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Mar 19, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh I'm hooked so far! Digging ur writing style! Let's see if Michael is gonna get him that ass lol...will Bianca let her guard down? Will Michael become cool? only time will tell! 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it baby! and thank you! I try to implement a "different" type of writing style, you know? and hey, who knows? Michael just may progress of stay the nerdy band geek he's always been lol

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Mar 19, 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ayeeeeee! Now we gettin somewhere! Yo....Michael is too hyped I'm dying! 😊 See you in the next chapter!



Author's Response:

lmao! 😏😏😏

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Uh oh, looks like Diamond is starting to move in on Michael. Wait, isn't she Bianca's friend? If she is or not, I think trouble is about to start brewing 😟 Great chapter tho, boo! 😎😊

Summary:

Neverland was a little less than a two-and-a-half-hour drive away and that was depending on traffic. So, Kenya was weaving in and out of lanes trying her best to shorten the time. She had wasted time in her kitchen pacing back and forth trying to decide if what she was going to do was the right thing. Yes. Her hands gripped the steering wheel of her car in anxiety. She had to make it to Neverland before he left. She had to make it there to tell him she loved him. She had to make it there to stop him from marrying Lisa. She pressed her foot onto the gas and prayed that time would be on her side.

 

Kenya is interning for infamous Entertainment Lawyer, Johnny Cochran, when what could be the largest case of the 90s lands on Mr. Cochran's' lap: 

Michael Jackson has been accused of child molestation.

It's easier said than done to keep personal feelings and opinions from interfering with her work even after the conclusion of her internship. It become's even more complicated when she finds herself falling for the man behind stage lights. To make matters worse he seems to develop eyes for her as well, but there's a few obstacles standing in the way. 

Tensions are high, nerves are bare, and skin is thin.

Can she handle it?

Previously Titled: Year 93

 

**This story has been slightly altered.**


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, 1993-1994, Lisa Marie Presley: 1994, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Lisa Marie Presley, Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Drug Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55086 Read Count: 5812
[Report This] Published: Jan 25, 2016 Updated: Aug 02, 2018
Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Mar 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww man I could only imagine what Michael went through especially in real life 😞 We all know he didn't do it and he had to endure this boy once but twice. People are so cruel n would do anything for money. However, I do like the way this is starting! Great job girl! As a fellow write on here, I like ur writing style already.



Author's Response:

Thank you girl, I appreciate it! 

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Mar 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yasssss Johnny Cochran! Whoop this getting even better!

Now Or Forever by eaw112 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

She is rich...he is from the other side? What happens when they decide to get together?


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990
Characters: None
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 124910 Read Count: 2657
[Report This] Published: Feb 28, 2016 Updated: Jul 03, 2018
Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Mar 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Secret scripts and unwanted suspects

Like this, girl <3 I think he would make a perfect Damian lol


Like this <3



Author's Response:

I hope you don't mind if I steal this one from you because I hadn't really thought about him yet so thank you!!! He's perfect! If you see something else on these characters, let me know! You the bomb for that😍😘

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: May 13, 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Plans/ All alone pt1

Gina better not tear up ol boy's apartment! I don't know but I feel like she either gon straighten it up or find something she might not wanna find. Can't wait till the next chapter and girl RTT ch. 30 is still underway!



Author's Response:

Nah, she betta act right  or else me and you both are gonna whoop her butt lol And you'll be in for it the farther you get. Yeah but that chapter....Girrl, I can't wait! I'm biting my finger nails as we speak!  

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: May 16, 2016 Title: Chapter 17: None Verbal Communication

Girl, girl, and girl! First off let me say that YASSSSSSS! Some draws have been officially dropped. Yasss! I knew it.

Now onto business, I loved the sex scene but don't be afraid to get more detailed. I always suggest that writers should write their scenes according to the five senses---in other words, the readers should be able to see it, feel it, taste it, hear it, etc.

Okay, we will give Mike and G the benefit of the doubt since they had some of that jump-ya-bones juice. Cuz boy if they had tequila, it woulda been a wrap fo sho! lol but anyway. Make it as if we are in the bedroom with Michael or like a movie. What would you see? How would you feel? You could always reference back to ch. 13 (Break of Dawn) in my story RTT for an example or other stories if you want help with the sexual scenes.

But wait, what happened at the end? Don't tell me Mike forgot to put on a rubber or the shit done burst. Lawwwd, I don't know if I could take it lol (Momma voice) and what about his STD status on paper? Girl, you got me glued to my seat and I will stay tuned boo. Sorry for the lengthy review but I enjoyed it nonetheless!



Author's Response:

We'll just have to see lol. You're a mess! Thank you for the criticism too, I think I could have done better but at the time I got a little nervous about it; Anyway, I may even go back and fix that part if I think of something; I didn't wanna make it too detailed though because I had some other stuff planned but thank you so much girl, I really appreciate it. I'm still laughing at your response, I'm literally rolling;And don't worry about the length, I live for them. 

Thanks again and I will see you next time😘

Has college gotten any better btw?



Author's Response:

We'll just have to see lol. You're a mess! Thank you for the criticism too, I think I could have done better but at the time I got a little nervous about it; Anyway, I may even go back and fix that part if I think of something; I didn't wanna make it too detailed though because I had some other stuff planned but thank you so much girl, I really appreciate it. I'm still laughing at your response, I'm literally rolling;And don't worry about the length, I live for them. 

Thanks again and I will see you next time😘

Has college gotten any better btw?

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: May 16, 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Trying times/ the question part 1

Giiiiiiirl, i was nervous during that police bit but baby, that was an awesome chapter once again. Oooh Mike got some plans for Gina and Mama Huntley wanna meet him...oooh where my tea at?!



Author's Response:

Lol right!

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Aug 01, 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Game On

"Hell nah bro, don't neither one of us wanna go to your old busted out apartment. Shit done been shot up so much, the cops use your shit for target practice" Terry counters as Drel scoffs.

Girl, I fell out at that line! And girl, Michael done made her meet the fsmily? Why don't the two of them just hurry up and make it official. I mean damn! And u used Tianna as the baby girl! That's my real name spelled the exact same way!  ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„Not sure if that eas pure coincidence or not but hey, I love it anyway! ๐Ÿ˜Š and let's see how long Gina lasts with nosey ass Latoya (in Michael's voice) and u straight teased me in the chapter. Chile please! Thought they was gonna burn a mattress with that hot ass sexual tension. I'm still waiting for that chapter though! Anyway, this was awesome! Onto the next one!



Author's Response:

Girrl, I told you Mike's bros be trippin' lol And yeah they need to...we done waited long enough lol. And is it really??๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎDamn, I'm good. I must be psychic ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ just kidding but foreal, it was a complete coincidence, I promise. I had no idea ๐Ÿ˜Š And sorry for teasing you boo, she would have at least kissed him if he hadna pushed her on the floor lol That's what they both get for being petty lol. And I got you eventually, we shouldn't be too far away. I'll try my best to make it nice and steamy for you when we get there๐Ÿ˜‰ And thanks