Penname: mjsplaything [Contact] Real name: Tianna
Member Since: Feb 05, 2015
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Summary:

“You didn’t have to get me anything, Michael. This must have cost a fortune,” I smiled as I brought my hand up to the diamond choker around my neck, my fingertips brushing against the precious stones.

He grinned and leaned back against the headboard, aimlessly brushing my tresses off my shoulders, “I just wanted to get you something special.” His hand trailed down from my shoulder to my arm and then to my hand resting on the satin sheets. His skin was warm, but I instantly stiffened as the metal ghosted over my skin.

I ignored it and looked up at him through my eyelashes, my cheeks rosy, “You make me feel special just by the way you look at me.”  It was true, more than he’d ever know. With him, I felt like I mattered. That I wasn’t a complete failure.

 

I also could pretend that he wasn’t married.

 


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Lisa Marie Presley: 1994, HIStory: 1995-1999
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Attempted Suicide, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77909 Read Count: 24230
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2015 Updated: Feb 02, 2017
Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Jul 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Happy Birthday to You

I just hope he doesn't flake on her in Las Vegas. But aye, I'm digging this so far, girl!

Summary:

A collection of your favorite kinky stuff along with your era. Come on, ladies, Mikeybear is waiting for you. 

 

WARNING: I'm not responsible for wet panties.


Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, HIStory: 1995-1999, Invincible: 2000-2003, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, One Shot, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Neglect, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4310 Read Count: 1307
[Report This] Published: Jul 02, 2015 Updated: Jul 06, 2015
Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Jul 02, 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Surrogate Free Of Charge (P2)

ooooooh child! that is ironic and messed up at the same time! How r u gonna name ur baby after the man you had an affair with lol damn...once the husbad finds out, it would be insult to injury!



Author's Response: Hee hee. Don't worry, James is more naive than you think. He ain't never gonna find out, girl. XD

Summary: Past Featured Story

Hello to all the MJFiction Authors, Readers, and Reviewers!

yay!

 

Winners announced September 5th!


Categories: Award Winning
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1186 Read Count: 44313
[Report This] Published: Aug 03, 2015 Updated: Sep 05, 2015
Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Aug 03, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Nominations - CLOSED

Question, can we vote on ourselves and if so, how many times?



Author's Response:

Yes, though I'd discourage it as it doesn't show appreciation for your fellow members. Quite the opposite, really. You can only nominate one person/story per category.

Summary:

"What are you?" she whispered she tried to keep her fear subsided and looked at him.

                "I'm a vampire." Michael said seriously.

                Michael was shocked when she looked at him and laughed which caused him to look at her and raise his eye brow. It wasn’t the reaction he was expecting and he hoped that this situation didn't turn ugly.

**formally titled: Atlantean's Lust**

 


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Adventure, Romance, Thriller, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Graphic Depictions of Violence, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Death
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2815 Read Count: 322
[Report This] Published: Aug 18, 2015 Updated: Sep 12, 2015
Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Aug 20, 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh my, so seductive! What is Michael going to do next?



Author's Response:

haha very seductive indeed lol. thanks for reviewing

Summary:

 

After breaking up with Lisa Marie Presely, Michael Jackson decides that he needs to get away from Neverland for the weekend. So he agrees to go on a road trip with his best friends Chris Tucker and Usher Raymond to Las Vegas. Enter Gabriella Hernandez, a beautiful Domencian girl who is a student at UC in Berkely, CA. Michael and Gabriella meet and there is an instant atttraction in between them. After a night partying together,Michael wakes up with a new wife. Will Michael and Gabriella stay married?  Will Lisa Marie try to get Michael back?  How will their family and friends react to their marriage?


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Drama, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Lisa Marie Presley, Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30643 Read Count: 880
[Report This] Published: Sep 17, 2015 Updated: Nov 29, 2015
Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Nov 30, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Blurred Lines

Ayyeeeee...they were too turnt up! and Lisa and her almighty chin done broke Michael's heart. I think we all can agree that she needs a swift kick in the ass. And ooh, this is juicy...a little alcohol and a little sex can stir up more than just a party! Sounds juicy! Keep it up, girl!

 

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Nov 30, 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Author's Note

Awwww, well you and your mom are in my prayers and even though I didn't read your story yet, I'm excited to see what you have so far! Looks interesting! And for someone who is studying mental health and psychology, you have my full support! Just keep your head up and keep the faith, okay? Your mom and all of us want you to be strong :-)

Summary:

A young, non-traditional Catholic priest battles his own personal conflicts of controversy, love, and lust in his vocation.

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Banner by: Lorry

Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Angst, Crime, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense, Thriller, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Physical Abuse, Racism, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33290 Read Count: 2652
[Report This] Published: Sep 26, 2015 Updated: Jul 28, 2016
Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Nov 19, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: † Prologue-Chapter 1

Looks like we have a handsome and honorable priest at that! Haha, the ladies came to the church in droves lol, but I loved your description of him.

 

A thunderous applause broke throughout the crowd, giving the new priest a respectful standing ovation. Many spectators and observers especially the female ratio enamored by the priest’s nontraditional look. He was a gorgeous man to look at, bright, intense eyes, head full of soft curls, high perfect sculpted cheekbones and a jawline that made any woman swoon, and a toothpaste ad smile that lit up any room. 

So far, great start!



Author's Response: Hi New Reader! I'm glad you enjoy the storyline! It was pretty tough making Michael into a priest even though he has always deemed himself a religious and spiritual man!

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Nov 19, 2015 Title: Chapter 3: †Chapter 3

Michael to the rescue!!!!!! Get him, Michael! He still has a hint of bad boy in him! Don't let the priestness fool you lol!

And I loved what his mother said, IRONIC BUT TRUE! “Your more like a pop superstar than a just a mere priest of a parish,” Katie commented to Michael also noticing the stares and chatter. 



Author's Response: Lol 1986 is the beginning of the Bad era so I had to throw in some badness! Also, I'm glad you notice that ironic quote!

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Nov 19, 2015 Title: Chapter 5: †Chapter 5

Boy, I wouldn't know how to act if Michael was my priest lol but for real Brooke got no home training. It's always the THOTs lol...great story girl! I like it and must admit that I'm a fan already especially with you using the beautiful Lark Voorhies of Saved by the Bell!



Author's Response: Lol Brooke was being thotty! Seems like she doesnt like rejection either the way she reacted when MIchael rejected her. I used Lark Voorhies because the Blythe character had to appear young and have girl-like features, and Lark was perfect for it. She also has the look for the 80's since the story surround the late 80's! Most of my leading ladies in my story are very youthful because Michael was very youthful.

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Nov 19, 2015 Title: Chapter 4: †Chapter 4

Awww...isn't he such a hero! Hey, some of that street did help him with that mugger lol and I like where this is going so far. I hope Blythe can trust him. Rape is a scary situation for anyone.



Author's Response: Yep, Rape is scary. Luckily, she wasnt rape thanks to Father Jospeh!

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Nov 19, 2015 Title: Chapter 2: †Chapter 2

Poor Michael, he is so bombarded. I would be nearly frightened and feeling trapped if you asked me. Lol at the young female spectator that thought he was hot...on the inside, I probably would have said the same thing!



Author's Response: Exactly! Being a young priest, especially a non-traditional is taxing and on top of that, he's getting some celebrity for it so he is feeling bombarded. And I laughed then entire time I wrote the female spectator referring to him as hot!

Summary: Past Featured Story


On June 27, 1999, Michael Jackson was performing in a charity benefit concert in Munich Germany. Towards the end of his performance tragedy struck when there was a malfunction with a cable snapped causing him to fall 50 feet. After sustaining serious injuries, he was stabilized then transferred to the States where he had multiple surgeries to mend his battered and broken body.  In his depressed state he has become the patient no one can handle.


Jo Quinn is a traveling, tough as nails, Physical Therapist who has been assigned the hardest cases across the country because of her take no prisoners attitude. She jumped at the opportunity to return to where her roots are, move back to New England and take on the special case that no one in the agency wanted. 


Will she be the one to finally fight back and help him help himself? Will he finally heal his physical and mental wounds? Can she be the one to finally see him for who he really is and allow him to be himself and get the care he needs? Afterall, he's only human and has his faults just like everyone else. Join them on their emotional journey and find out.


Categories: Award Winning, HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 77 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 386644 Read Count: 37287
[Report This] Published: Oct 20, 2015 Updated: Oct 28, 2016
Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Oct 21, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it so far, keep going!!!! and i died when he said, "my knee is stiffer than a new groom's cock"---bahhhaaaaaaa! love it! i'm gonna use that one!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it.  Sometimes I dont know where I come up with these one liners.  I promise there will be more in his future.  Thanks for taking the time to review.

Summary:

Michael Jackson is a nerdy college freshman with one thing on his mind: losing his virginity. Almost as soon as he steps foot onto his college campus, he lays on eyes on Bianca Jefferies, a sexy and sultry senior. Within seconds, he is determined to lose his virginity to her and have her teach him everything she knows about sex. After much reluctance, she agrees to do so. But what can a fun, rendezvous possibly turn out to be? Find out in Teach Me.

 


Categories: Humor, Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, Drama
Characters: Lisa Marie Presley, Michael
General Warnings: Erotica, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Financial Abuse, Physical Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8206 Read Count: 795
[Report This] Published: Jan 10, 2016 Updated: Mar 25, 2016
Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Mar 19, 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Congrats on being a new mommy! 😊 Please tell us what ur having when u find out! Awww 😊

Now back to the story! Poor Mike! He's a virgin 😊 Hey that's rare! Not too many guys r nowadays n that's a precious thing! But anyway, chile I think slowly Bianca's gonna start warming up to Michael. Shoo, I wonder how Trina's gonna react! Great story girl this is the bomb.com!



Author's Response:

thank you doll 😍 I'm gonna have a loooooooong pregnancy since I found out so early! but of course you know I'm gonna tell you guys what I'm having when the time is right 🙂. and yes any guy over the age of 16 being a virgin is so rare nowadays ! but with Michaels charisma he may be losing it soon 😝. Bianca is just being difficult rn lol with her stubborn ass 

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Uh oh, looks like Diamond is starting to move in on Michael. Wait, isn't she Bianca's friend? If she is or not, I think trouble is about to start brewing 😟 Great chapter tho, boo! 😎😊

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed
Date: Mar 19, 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ayeeeeee! Now we gettin somewhere! Yo....Michael is too hyped I'm dying! 😊 See you in the next chapter!



Author's Response:

lmao! 😏😏😏