Penname: DajahMykal [Contact] Real name: Dajah Nicholson
Member Since: Jan 30, 2010
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Age: 18-21
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Summary:

This unique fan fic takes place beginning in the pre Jackson 5 era, and leads you all the way through current times, the story begins at 2300 jackson street, and leads you through the chemistry share between Tasha, and a young michael, and shows that no matter how far away they go, love will always reunite them.


Categories: Adult
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2049 Read Count: 116
[Report This] Published: Mar 30, 2011 Updated: Mar 30, 2011
Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed
Date: Jun 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is sooo cute!!! I love it already!!

Summary:

What happens when MJ meets a fan at his album signing...

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of giveintothefire. The original characters and plot are mine and should not be used without my permission.  I am in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Adult, Humor
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6650 Read Count: 1117
[Report This] Published: Dec 17, 2012 Updated: Dec 17, 2012
Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 06, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: She Knows I'm Watching

Really enjoying it so far!!

Author's Response:

Thank you honey. This was just short story so it was only chapter but thanks for reading!

Summary:

UPDATED OCTOBER 18, 2018!!

 

 

 

 

I could never imagine Michael doing a show like The Bachelor, Flavor of Love, I Love New York, etc. no matter how hard I tried, I just couldn't. But if he did, I imagine it'd go something like this...

 

 


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Adventure, Humor, Parody, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Graphic Depictions of Violence, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 92 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 489836 Read Count: 25576
[Report This] Published: Jul 19, 2013 Updated: Oct 18, 2018
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Date: Jun 10, 2018 Title: Chapter 81: Episode 17 part f ELIMINATIONS

Why is that the golden question?! How many times did you eff so and so? Lol, why make it worse than it already is? My heart is breaking for Ava already. Totally glad that the air was cleared, but babayyyyyy Ava went awf! And Michael is a whole fool! ‘I feel like I’m being slut- shamed’ !!!!

Robbie Michaels III is funny as hell (and a real G)! Michelle definite has the advantage over all the other girls, but she needs to pull herself together. She also needs to play it safe! Mr. Peter Pan (lmao) can’t exactly give Michelle the kind of relationship she wants from him cause he’s not exactly hers yet (and it would be counterproductive to foster that kind of relationship and she’s not chosen in the end, IMO)There’s too much at stake if she doesn’t put SOMETHING out , especially with all these other girls here. Ball is definitely in her court though.

Of course Sasha lied about her age 😂

My stance on Rocky stands. She’s boring and definitely not here for Michael as I’ve read. And her interaction with Zane before elimination? She’ll be a-okay if she isn’t chosen! And she think she know everything!! Get out girl! All them bitches do!!

Michelle was literally sick cause Michael was with these other women. If she really knew the reason behind Ava’s breakdown, she’d understand. She can’t talk.

Great episode!! I totally agree with Michaels elimination. I still want Sasha gone though!!! The way she threw Rocky under the bus was not cool (but this is an eliminated after all)and the other girls need to watch out! She’s only gonna play dirtier as the competition dies down! Let us hope that more of Sasha’s skeletons come out to play! Lying about something as trivial as age (and be super convincing at that) is a huge red flag; who knows what else she is hiding.

Author's Response:

Yes, Ava definitely went TF awf and I'm glad she did!! Letting it out is SO much better than holding it in. 

Chilllld, MJ ha the nerve to feel indignant about being slut-shamed. Outchea laying it low and spreading it wide!!

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I'm so glad you liked Robbie! It was fun writing him in. He's definitely an OG. The one that taught these young ones a thing or two. Michelle's family couldn't have came at a better time. Being around them and having those deep conversations with them really helped her to dig deep so that she can put her best foot forward the rest of the competition. You're right, the ball is in her court as far as her&MJ are concerned. He wants that girl BAD. Remember, when he had sex with Dulce he started picturing Michelle at one point. Mess, lol. 

Yes, Sasha definitely lied. When I was rereading this story and looking at the girl's pics, I said "ain't no way Sasha is twenty-damn-seven." That needed to be addressed ASAP.

Your last comment definitely provided a lot of insight into Rocky. Like Michael said, she's one of the few girls that hasn't given him a headache, BUT she hasn't exactly made a big impression either. Yes he liked her, but in comparison to the other girls, it wasn't enough. Arguments, drama, and whatnot can be good for a relationship, because it helps it grow and can bring two people closer together. Rocky struggled with being putting her whole heart out there and what she was willing to give just simply wasn't enough. 

Yea, all the girls were confused as to why Ava wouldn't accept their crowns. In their minds, they're thinking "girl you just called 1rst. Why aren't you going?" But if they knew, especially Michelle, they'd be much more sympathetic!

Thank you for reading, Dajah. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Just added another update. Have a good one! :D 

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 29, 2018 Title: Chapter 84: Episode 18c

Why they gotta ‘hear each other out’? Fuck that!

When you point your finger, Sasha , just remember that three are pointing right back atcha! Look at the pot calling the kettle black! And she’s so dumb! Of course, the more time you spend with each other , the closer you get! We get that! We just can’t stand you!

Michael is slick with it though! I’ll give him that! Let’s see how this date goes! I’m low key tight lmao.

And her true colors start to show... extremely jealous, possessive over someone she doesn’t even have yet, crazy! All warning signs Michael, tread lightly; or just don’t tread at all and kick that crazy chick to the curb! That behavior is just gonna transfer over to your (possible) relationship and once it does, it’s a wrap for you buddy!! Sasha reminds me of those crazy ladies you see on Snapped or something! Things don’t go her way and next thing you know, the KOP has gone missing. She’s too anxious and a control freak.

Definitely think she has an agenda. She’s getting older and thinks her time is running out so she gonna try to trap him with a baby, so she can have her fathers and Michaels money, hahahahaha

And she’s managed to disgust him. Damn shame! Go Sasha!

No Michael is a mans man and he will call most of the shots! He doesn’t need you to make decisions for him! She’s certified crazy!

Lol Michael and Michelle sound like they been together forever! Calling her bougie and shit! Lmao, and they are acting so cute!! All these sexual innuendos and flirtiness going on! And what a surprise! Laurent’s wedding and he has a fine ass brother AND Bill Bray is their dad! Lots of surprises ! I think Michelle was the perfect choice for his date!

Juicy as hell. All of it! Laurent and Chelsea are too much for me! And the tables turn! Adrian and Chelsea.😂 this is too much for my heart to handle.

I love what he had set up for them! I’ve always wanted to go to a medium and healer; it’s on my bucket list!!

Seems to me that Sasha really needs to go now. Hopefully Manish speaks her absence into reality . She’s so uncouth lol


LOVED THIS CHAPTER!! You’re so incredibly talented and I appreciate you!!!

Author's Response:

First let me say, I love how you comment as you read. 

Girl, yes. Sasha is extremely neurotic, jealous, and possessive and all of that came out on the date. Poor MJ was so uncomfortable! She views her and Michael as a power couple, so I wouldn't be surprised if she was desperate to secure the bag. Can you imagine a mini-Sasha? 

YES!! Michael is an alpha. Like Manish said, what Sasha really desires is a submissive beta, but she's set on MJ. 

I lovvvve writing Michael&Michelle. When writing their scenes, everything seems to flow a lot more easily. I almost understand when MJ would say that he didn't write his songs, God would use him as an instrument, that the inspiration would just flow through him. Not comparing myself to MJ (lmboooo heck no), but that's how I feel when I write for Michael&Michelle. In comparison, writing out a date for Michael and another girl (Sasha for example) is a lot more challenging. Michael's scenes with Ava and Mari seem to flow easily too. And you're gonna hate this, but Valeria too. Don't drag me. 

That wedding was a dramatic mess!! I picture Adrian looking like Charles Michael Davis's tasty self. If there's a wedding special for Michael&whoever he chooses, we'll definitely be seeing them again!! Especially Laurent, such a fun character.

You should definitely go to a medium/healer!! I've been to one before, but they're retired :(.

 

THANK YOU, DAJAH!! You're amazing and I absolutely adore your reviews!!

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 23, 2018 Title: Chapter 92: Episode 20d THE CROWNING ~The End~

Nawwww, I need a redo! My girl Ava didn’t deserve to go out like that! And the negro has the nerve to want her to still be in his life after he just dumped her! Lmao, I always knew he would choose Michelle over Ava, but I wasn’t ready for it!!’😭

She deserves something out of this Lolol I’m so hurt for her ’

I loved the ending though!! Yaassss get him tested girl!!

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Date: Jun 12, 2018 Title: Chapter 82: Episode 18a

I was about to go to bed ; lol thanks a lot!!

The queen this; the queen that... girl shut the hell up!

Yo this challenge was three much! I laughed so hard! Each girl is way different and has her own way of getting the job done! I guess you gotta fight hella dirty now! From the boobies , strip dancing and tongue flickering I’m surprised the boy didn’t fall out!

I appreciate Sasha’s dedication(can’t believe I just said that XD), but girllllll she just annoys the hell out of me! She was kinda knocked off her high horse this go round; but hey, why goes up must come down!

Like Mari makes it known that she so badly wants a date without being super obnoxious or annoying about it; I like that! That girl got damn near naked ! Okay Mari , go in with your bad self!

Michelle showing out with the touch test! Go head girl! He could’ve atleast gave her some points for rapping though! No other girl did that. Hater.

Of course Ava managed to keep it sweet and classy; a true class act and beauty. If you can’t tell already, she’s my number one :)

Author's Response:

Good, I wanted you guys to have a nightcap! :-p

On the reunion, we’re going to have to ask Sasha what exactly she’s the queen of :-/.

Lol yes, the girls are all so different from one another so they each approach every situation differently. It’s the top four so they’re REALLY feeling the pressure.

Sasha is definitely getting a dose of karma this episode. 

Mari did not come to play, Mama came to slay.

Yess, Michael did not appreciate Michelle’s creative efforts!

I absolutely love when you all tell me your favorites. Ava’s definitely more low key compared the the rest of the girls.

Thanknyoi for reading, Dajah. I always enjoy your input!

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Date: Dec 29, 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Episode 12

OMG!!!!!!!!! Why haven't I been reading this?!?! I stayed up ALL night to read this story and my emotions are ALL over the place!! I have no comments on the girls who have already been eliminated, but let me TELL you!!! I DO NOT like Valaria; maybe its because she's sleeping with Michael..... no scratch that I KNOW it's because she's sleeping with Michael. She think shes so important just cause she's getting some dick..... and Michael, he's blinded by the pussy; typical male. Now Michelle.... that's my girl! Followed by Mari; those are the only two i can stand along with a few others. I will love you forever if those two are the last two standing. Everyone else can go kick rocks!!!

Author's Response:

I'm soooo glad you like my story. Hearing that NEVER EVER EVER EVER gets old. EVER. I don't blame you for not liking Valeria right now. She really fucked up last episode. She was his top girl even after that lie detector test of hers so all she had to do was remain calm and continue being her usual charming self but she fucked it up. Big time. Hasn't she ever heard of that quote, "If it ain't broke, don't fix it"? Seriously! 

As for Michelle and Mari, they try to stay out the drama in the house, but when dragged into it, the beast comes out. THANK YOU DAJAH!!!

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 30, 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Episode 12

I'm back. My min has been running crazy all day because of this story. GAH, I really love it! I've been reading a lot of the comments and I agree with most of them, lol my first review was just totally done high off of my emotions. Anyone but Valeria.....(and Sasha, lol)....aannnnndddd maybe a few others to win. I personally feel that one of the girls is gonna step up BIG time and give everyone a run for their money. I also feel that Valeria is going to LOSE her mind somewhere down the line fighting for Michael... I can almost feel it. Something's gonna snap and.... I personally feel that Michael should bring Shante back. She may not be competing for his heart anymore (hypothetically speaking is she was to make a comeback) this time, so she can really be his eyes and ears. She did royally fuck up, and if SHE was eliminated then VALERIA should have been eliminated. And THAT'S real!!!!! Mannnnnnnnn, I'm still heated with that female, but I need to calm down because this is just a fiction story..... A DAMN GOOD ONE, but a fiction story non the less. Woo-sah.... Woo-sah.... Woo-saw.

Author's Response:

To hear that you were thinking about my story all day is a huge HUGE compliement :D. Thanks, love. As for your "emotional" review, I loved it! 

You're definitely right about one of the girls stepping it up BIG time, you'll see who and how in the next update (part C). 

As for Shante, even though she was one of the most hated, that was my boo :(. It feels weird not being able to right from her perspective. I MISS HER RATCHET ASS!!! Though she was one of my biggest bitches in the house, she was also one of my more realer girls. She was completely honest (to a fault) and I just... ugh miss her! (Hint: The girls who tend to show up more in the story are my more dynamic personalities, I love writing from their POVs because they give me life!)

THANK YOU DAJAH!!! :D 

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 30, 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Episode 12b

YOU have made my damn night/morning and i haven't even read the dang chapter yet. I'm too excited right now!!!

Author's Response:

LMAOOOOO! I'm glad I could make you happy girly! 

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 30, 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Episode 12b

Like I had a feeling that Valeria was gonna use her physical attributes and of course her/their sexual relations/persuasion. She just seems like the kind of female to use sex to solve everything or to distract; just my personal opinion. Like literally the chick IS crazy insane! Don't be blinded by the P, Michael.

I really like Marisela and Michael's connection. They're too cute for me.

Dulce is messssyyyy, lol!!

Sasha is just too full of herself! It's disgusting. I don't know what to think with her. It's obvious that she's a pretentious bitch. I'm not impressed with her. She's spoiled rotten, too spoiled. She knows all the right things to say to Michael.If she reacts like that to Michael taking the other two girls first, something MINOR....ugh.

DAMN!!!! He just ditched Rocky like that. It's not funny, but at the same time it IS!!!!I'm so dead!!!! Step ya game UP girl, Dulce is NOT playing any games! I'd be pissed! A COUPLE days.... negro.... no words!!!
He could have atleast let her go to her room, he straight LEFT ole girl... dammnnnnnn

This is me being spiteful........ I hope Dulce fucks it up.

Lmao, this is nuts!! It's a competition though.... Step your game UP ladies.

I always thought that the eliminations were VERY biased with Michael.

The power of the P****.

I really LOVE this and am currently sitting on the edge of my seat..well bed.

Author's Response:

I was about to go try to make myself fall back asleep so I wouldn't be up the rest of the night/early morning and respond to all the reviews when I woke up but I had to respond to this before saying goodnight lol. 

Valeria's smart and she's realized that her tears can only work so much with Michael, especially now since she's being perceived as "weak," so her new tactic is to try and lure him into bed but hopefully she'll realize that even if that did work, it would only last so long. Even though he occassionally thinks with the wrong head, Michael will make the ultimate decision in the end because he knows that in order for a relationship to be successful, much more than a physical attraction is needed. 

I <3 Michael and Mari too :). 

Dulce do have some messy in her; someone needed to give Valeria a wake up call.

One thing Sasha is not lacking in is CONFIDENCE. That girl has plenty of it for herself and everyone on mjfiction! She's can be very manipulative, but her feelings for Michael are true. The one thing that's scary with Sasha though is how fast she's falling already. 

No you're right, when Michael leaves Rocky sitting at the dinner table, it's priceless LMAO. She was like "WTF?!" What's funny is that at the beginning of the day when they first arrived, it was clear that Michael was leaning more towards Rocky, Dulce stepped her shit up and was the one to leave on his arm. The deal with Rocky is that her and Michael have their own special little connection and to be truthful, she hasn't had to try all that hard. She knows she's a beautiful woman and is used to men catering to her not the other way around. She's a french black girl with a sultry voice, french accent, and hypnotic eyes. She knows she's a catch! But I think she's realizing that she's actually gonna have to put in work if she wants to be the only one on Michael's arm. He's a catch too. Clearly. 

And something tells me that things are going to get very interesting between Michael and Dulce in that hotel room.

It's funny that you say they need to step it up because that's exactly what one girl is gonna do in the next update! THANKS DAJAH!!!

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed
Date: Dec 31, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Episode #1 Part a

I SO agree with Linda!!!

Author's Response:

Lol I got you Dajah. Later on today! 

 

 

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Date: Jan 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Episode 12c part 1

Heart is beating so fast, lmao; I haven't even started reading yet.

Okay, this was one of the hottest scenes I've ever read! Great description; made me feel like I was there watching,lol! I for sure thought that Michael was going to call out Michelle's name, though. I was waiting for and laughing at the fact that Michael was picturing/fantasizing of her while fucking Dulce.

So she's crying because she feels guilty about being in love with someone else, and he's feeling guilty because he thinks that Dulce knows that he was fantasizing about Michelle. When I read that I was like what the hell, what stuff is Michael on to make him think that Dulce can read his mind.

Dulce should have thought this out. I think that she got on the show because she thought that it would help her fall out of love with her ex. Now she feels guilty because she sexed another man and she's STILL in love with this other man.
She is in deep.

I wonder how Michael is gonna take this information. It reminds me of when Ben was on the show and he found out that she was married from Sasha,(I think it was). Difference is that even though Ben was married, it was to her gay friend. There was no real relationship there. Dulce however is still in LOVE with someone else whom she was most likely in a serious relationship with. That's a big load on her shoulders and a HUGE load to drop onto Michael's shoulders/conscience.

Great add!!!!!!! You never fail to amaze me........(especially with that visual at the end!!!!)

You're awesome!

Author's Response:

Glad you liked the description, Dajah. I really did want you to feel like you were there! 

And girl, YES, they're both some guilty freaks right now. 

You hit it RIGHT ON THE NAIL with Dulce! She explains in the next update (will be uploaded tomorrow morning) but you definitely hit it.

Michael's funny acting. With him, you never know how he's gonna digest information. We've seen him give girls the silent treatment, act distant wit em, and go Joe Jackson on them yelling and cursing. I'm glad you pointed out the difference between this situation and Ben's situation though. Dulce is coming to him and being straight up about it, so even though he's most likely agitated but he's also a rational man so even if he doesn't right now, he'll eventually appreciate her honesty. 

THANK YOU FOR LEAVING YOUR FEEDBACK HUN!!! THANKS DAJAH!!! :D

 

 

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 02, 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Episode 12c part 2

Lordy. She wants the best of both worlds! lol, that had me feeling some type of way, but I am glad that she was honest with Michael and they have an understanding now.

Sasha just gets under my skin. Ava, I'm begging you.....should've hugged the LIFE out of him girl! Figuratively. Ava reminds me of myself being all quiet and reserved. My type of girl. BUt yes you do need to step your game up. Show that female Sasha that is not and will never be a threat.

Sasha reminds me of London Tipton from the Sweet Life of Zach and Cody in this add.....

You better steal that spotlight Ava, girl.

And that's why I don't like you Sasha. She really gets under my skin. She's one of those females who have like two different personalities when they're are around their man and their friends/acquaintances/non-friends. I feel she would be the one to embarrass him, personally. She has a quick temper and the way she went in on Laurent when she found out he was married (or engaged) to *GASP* a girl....smh. Okay Momma DEE; shut the hell up and deal with it.

OH SHIT!!! Go on Ava!! You're really surprising me tonight... and making Sasha super angry, but who cares about her?!

She's been a sex kitten, Sasha. And since when did virgins dress a certain type of way. And just because you NEED Jesus and Ava HAS Jesus doesn't mean that she can't be sexy.

You probably do have feelings Sasha. She'd go crazy if she didn't have his attention.

But I still don't like you.

Yes, find out girl! Take that step, but only if you're willing to.

You are phenomenal and I am waiting patiently for the next add.

Author's Response:

Yesss, Dulce had me feeling some kind of way too, but I was proud that she was upfront and honest as soon as she had her emotional breakthrough. 

For some reason, I was thinking of London when I was writing this add! Especially when Sasha clapped her hands and said "Yay!" lol. I tried to prevent myself from typing "Yay me!" 

I was very very VERY proud of Ava for not holding back at dinner. Either go hard or go home!

Yea Sasha seems to have stereotyped virgins. Virgins like to feel sexy too, Sash, lol.

Thank you for leaving your thoughts Dajah! YOU are phenomenal!!! :D 

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Date: Jan 04, 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Episode 12d ELIMINATIONS

Maaaaan, this add was cruh-aaaaaaaazy!!! Absolutely loved it!!! Ava knows that she would get hooked on the dick when Michael deflowers her. Lol, she frontin'.

Valeria is just pitiful. She wanted a pity party just because she hadn't seen her family in 2 years. BITCH!!!!! Instead of hopping on dick and being desperate(basically if you had not have done the show) yo ass could've seen your family. You's a stupid bitch Valeria and I can't wait for the day that you leave. Your priorities are ALL messed up. You could have been spending this time with your family. Ugh.

Dulce just might make things right with her baby daddy. She'll never know. Either way she'll be happy which is something that I can't say for the rest of these girls; at least the ones who do not get picked at the end.

Sasha is miserable . 15 pounds ?! She's an emotional eater. She talking about Dulce's gut...fix yours!! I can't stand Sasha and I'm glad that she got her ass handed to her AGAIN! Ain't nobody catch you off guard bitch, you just can't fight !!! And then you want to act all hard after Dulce wiped the floor with your fat ass. She doesn't know how to pick her battles..... And I believe that she's a bit unstable. Hell she doesn't care to make friends cause she's never had friends. She's needs to drop the front completely cause it's not working for her and it's beginning to crumble. She needs therapy , friends, something !

You continue to slay me with your adds!!! Thanks chica!!!

Author's Response:

Glad you loved the update hun! 

And honey yassss, Idk why Ava wanna act like she don't already know! She sees how it got Valeria trippin!

Yes, Valeria better give that man some space instead of running around like a chicken with its head cut off.

Even though Dulce was in love with another man, I think she's one of the most respected girls because she was the most real and straight up with Michael. 

Lol Sasha's a trip. Off to the gym she goes!  LMAO@ "She needs therapy, friends, something"

Just added an update for ya and another one will be here later tonight!

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Date: Jan 04, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Episode #1 Part a

Lmao!! All this going on in the house, the drama and stress, not having michaels attention. It'll come around ten fold when the last girl standing is with Michael and is surrounded with his life.... Sasha will be as big as a whale! Lol, but that's okay cause she got money..... Tuh, money isn't everything honey, and Sasha you are a prime example of that. You don't need a man. You need to find and fix yourself before you get with anybody.