Penname: superbowlbaby [Contact] Real name: Paige
Member Since: Oct 28, 2010
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Summary:  Amy is a Twenty six year old single mother of two year old Identical twin girls named Jillian and Lillian. She wants to change her life for the better. Change comes in the form of her Aunt Elizabeth who is friends with Michael Jackson. She finds out that Michael is going to open Neverland Ranch and needs some workers. She jumps on the opportunity and heads to California with her two little girls. 

 


Categories: Romance, Adult
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6503 Read Count: 920
[Report This] Published: Jul 28, 2010 Updated: Oct 26, 2010
Reviewer: superbowlbaby Signed
Date: Oct 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This story is a masterpiece. I cannot wait for thee next update. Keep up the good work!

Summary:

Plot: Michael is an out-of-control troublemaker.  Before the judge can sentence him, he is given a second chance. Will he have to choose between his new family and his crew?

Character:

  • Michael Jackson- in his mid 20s, BAD era appearance
  • Elizabeth Taylor- late 60s
  • Tatiana Thumbtzen (She’ll be related to Elizabeth in this story)
  • Michael’s friends- Blade(Wesley Snipes’s character), Roderick( Rod for short), and Max

 Type of story:  Comedy/Drama/Romantic

Setting: Atlanta, GA


Categories: Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16532 Read Count: 3797
[Report This] Published: Jun 28, 2011 Updated: Sep 13, 2011
Reviewer: superbowlbaby Signed
Date: Aug 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story is great. Update please! :)

Summary:

[ Just to let you know, this is based off a real story. The author's name is Zane. I didn't want to pass it off like it was mine. So, I'm giving her credit (: ]

Brooke Alexander, a waitress who has self-esteem issues regarding her lackluster existence and her fluctuating weight, is in love with Patrick Sterling, one of the most prominent attorneys in Washington, D.C. On his good days, Patrick is the man in every woman's dream. On his bad days, Patrick's behavior is demeaning and he is angry at the world.

         Michael Jackson, who's been married to Carleigh for four years, is one of "the last good men"- compassionate and honest, he worships the ground his wife walks on. But Carleigh treats Michael like a trophy husband, allowing her friends to salivate over him and disrespect their happy home. Michael has dreams beyond his six-figure corporate job, and Carleigh views his life aspirations as a joke. Her selfish nature makes Michael wonder if he made the right decision when he asked for her hand in marriage.

                 When a tragic event causes Brooke's and Michael's lives to intersect, truths unfold as they reflect on their own relationships.

                   In this provocative tale of love and heartbreak, I, MJsDessert explore what happens when you cater to your emotional well-being and discover the meaning of unconditional love. . or, rather experience a total eclipse of the heart.

 

 


Categories: Adult, Adventure, Angst, Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10351 Read Count: 674
[Report This] Published: Jul 06, 2011 Updated: Aug 04, 2011
Reviewer: superbowlbaby Signed
Date: Sep 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Part One | Solar Eclipse | Brooke Alexander

Pleaseeeeeeeeeee update :)

Summary:

24 year old Michael is looking for someine to trust. he doesnt have a friend or anyone else to tell his secrets to. one day he skips out of his house, and finds what he was looking for. But is she too much?

Dawn: 18, abused, and broken. all she wanted was to be loved. Fresh from running away from her father, alll she has left is her backpack and broken spirit. she scarred and is frightened of the world.

One is determined but hopeful, the other is broken and secretive. Pulled together by fate, will Dawn let Michael into her heart? or will her baggage be too much for Michael to handle?


Categories: Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Angst
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4552 Read Count: 906
[Report This] Published: Jul 22, 2011 Updated: Aug 23, 2011
Reviewer: superbowlbaby Signed
Date: Sep 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Hearing Music

Plz continue!

Summary:

The city of Brookyln, the home to all sorts of gangs, including the notorious "Rebels" led by Mini Max and his best friend, Michael Jackson. They stick together like a family, but one night when Michael is walking the streets alone, he gets outnumbered and jumped by men and left in an alley for death to take him away. Fortunately, help came his way and he finds himself falling for this beautiful stranger. Will his buddies kick him out of the gang because he isn't "bad" anymore, or will his love for his crush make him forget about them and the world denying his love?

*Based off of the "Bad" music video

PLEASE REVIEW!!! YOUR REVIEWS MAKE ME SMILE!!!

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The Rebels


Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 83462 Read Count: 159272
[Report This] Published: Jul 28, 2011 Updated: Oct 24, 2011
Reviewer: superbowlbaby Signed
Date: Aug 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

When are you going to update? I can't wait.

Reviewer: superbowlbaby Signed
Date: Sep 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Update please? :)

Reviewer: superbowlbaby Signed
Date: Oct 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Please update!

My Bully by AtMJsHouse Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 699]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Yahara

 

 

Yahara has always been a nerd in school. She has had many bullys and being teased is nothing new. But when she goes off to college she and her life starts to turn for the worst. Especially with the bully of all bullys picking with her. What happens when Yahara begins to fall in love with her bully? Will he love her back? Will it work between them?


Categories: Humor, Romance, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Hurt/Comfort
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Jazer's Library
Chapters: 84 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 121316 Read Count: 164279
[Report This] Published: Aug 02, 2011 Updated: Nov 07, 2013
Reviewer: superbowlbaby Signed
Date: Aug 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

More! More! More! Please.

Reviewer: superbowlbaby Signed
Date: Sep 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Yayyy!!!!!!! Yoga's gonna meet the parents! This is some serious stuff. I know this seems a little pushy you just can't stop there! Update pretty pretty please with sugar and sprinkles on top.

Reviewer: superbowlbaby Signed
Date: Sep 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Omg! Sad Michael is returning to his rude old assy state. Maybe twice as worst. He really is a monster but he's only doing it to get Yahara's attention. Chances are that Michael is going to mess with any guy that talks to Yahara. Eli might be next. I wonder long this is going to go on......

 

Please update! Please I'm begging you. I'm on my knees. Please update. Great job on this by the way. I am definately addicted to this story. Anyway, puh-lease update soon. :)

Summary:

Cameron Jameson has worked for Michael as his assistant for two years. They had grown close whether she wanted them to or not. Many aren't able to see Michael when he's truly himself. She's one of the only people who knows Michael in and out. From his womanizing ways to his occasional partying. But what happens when she's his next target?


Categories: Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Jazer's Library
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59025 Read Count: 55070
[Report This] Published: Sep 29, 2011 Updated: Jun 11, 2014
Reviewer: superbowlbaby Signed
Date: Oct 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story! May I ask what the name of the girl is in your picture.



Author's Response:

.....to be honest I don't know lol I just looked on the model search websites and found her. I thought that she was perfect for he story

 



Author's Response:

.....to be honest I don't know lol I just looked on the model search websites and found her. I thought that she was perfect for he story

 

Summary:

We want to thank everybody so much for all the support and everything you guys do for us and this story. We’re so thankful and honored. Thank you all sooo much. All the readers and reviews, 1900+ OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH, WE LOVE YOU ALL!!!!!

A house full of 23 girls are trying to win over Michael. He must date and choose the right girl and test their so called ‘Love' for him. Taking the girls out one by one. Hopefully, he'll find the right girl for him to be with for the rest of his life.

Be ready for some Drama, Romance, Drama, Romance, and more Drama

Now tell me, Who has Love For Michael?!

 

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Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 122 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 160591 Read Count: 48425
[Report This] Published: Sep 30, 2011 Updated: May 04, 2013
Reviewer: superbowlbaby Signed
Date: Oct 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Introducing Part 2

I am luvin this so far. This shud be interestings. Update ASAP!



Author's Response:

thanks

Reviewer: superbowlbaby Signed
Date: Oct 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Introducing Part 1

When the girls kept screamin I was like shut the hell up and let him speak. I'm eager to see the girl's one on one time with Michael. :) Great job. Let the drama and romance begin!



Author's Response:

thank you :D

Reviewer: superbowlbaby Signed
Date: Oct 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Introducing Part 1

Sigh. Kim has got to go. Update please.



Author's Response:

:))))