Penname: Gottobethere [Contact] Real name: Bianca
Member Since: Oct 08, 2010
Membership status: Member
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Gender: Female
Age: 21+
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Summary:

Rocked Worlds from another perspective.  Michael and Keisha have a history....a very long and extensive history...but will the past affect the present, and more importantly, the future?


Categories: Romance, Adult
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 119136 Read Count: 20585
[Report This] Published: Aug 24, 2010 Updated: Nov 09, 2011
Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Bahahaha!!! You have GOT to be kidding me Ms Emma! x'D
Wow she really got her whole thing together. I can't believe she's making these poor kids do that! x'D
That'll sure kill the mood, I'm afraid..
Damn mama knows how to keep her children tamed .lol!
Please update soon? This should get interesting, once again ;D

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Date: Oct 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Well... that... that was...
Damn girl I think I'll just start crying tears of joy right now! x'D
That was beautiful! I love how her mother helped her realize and understand her feelings for Mike weren't anything to run away from.
On the contrary! Damn. It sure was great to read that she came back to him!
I am so happy right now!!! Yay! Go Michael and Keisha!! Time to get it on x'D
Thank you so much girl!
Twas about time these 2 got over their fears and took that 'leap' together!
Now let's hope things may stay this way....I rly believe this is true love! x

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Date: Oct 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Awwww no way in hell! This story's worth a gazillion stars, dammit!!
So there you go! I could only give you 10, I'm afraid xD
But I never would rate even half a star under 10! This story rocks!
I was so happy to see you'd updated!
Girl you have no clue how it just makes my day to see you've updated and that you're doin so more frequently!!
I'm in love with Ki and Michael and this whole story and your writing is just perfection!
Thank you so much for sharing this x

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Date: Oct 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh Boy! I get a feeling something terrible happened back there..
I mean what is up with Mike's brothers? A hooker? A freakin hooker? How could they do that??
That's his virginity we're talking about here! After Michael treat it respectfully they just go n ruin everything like that?! ;o
Marlon is just a jealous asshole! Just bcuz he couldn't get Keisha back then he tries getting back at them both like this. --Cruel!!
The beginning was very romantic tho with the roses and promise ring n everything. So beautiful!
Oh how I love the two of them together!
Their separation is killing me!! Lol. I reaaalllyy hope they'll meet up soon!!
Really really really hoping you'll update the next one just as quickly, lol.
This story is so addicting! Thank youu x



Author's Response:

Don't worry, girl...I got you!  :-)

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

OH MY GOOOOODDDD GIRL! You killed me now, I swear yadid!!!
Wow, what an instense and emotional chapter... I'm still shaking from it xD
I really hope Michael rlly didn't do it tho, with that hooker..
And I really hope that they'll make love tomorrow night at 9 but only if it feels right.
I can't even put into words how intense this was, girl.
I planned to leave a really long comment and explain all my feelings but I'm just speechless..
Wonder why Mike acts so strangely tho.. He doesn't rly sound like himself.
He must really be confused after what his brothers put him through.
He really should talk to Keisha about it, it would do him well.
But hey if they make love...that might as well be better ;D

BRILLIANT update girl! Thank youu. Please update the next one soon? xxx

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

OH MY GOOOSHHH YEAH!! They finally made love!!
*Sigh* nd oh how sweet it was.. & romantic. With the rings n roses and everything!! Awww.
Really beautiful! And he really wants to marry her, that's adorable!
Well, it was until Joseph came along and ruined the whole thing..
That was really brave of Michael tho, the way he stood up for Keisha against his heartless brutal father.
Too bad he only ended up hurt. I am so pissed at Marlon for telling, too!
Damn I just hope Michael willkeep standing up for Ki instead of letting Joseph's words and actions get to him and go back to ignoring her.
Please do update soon. This story & your writing is so wonderful x

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Date: Nov 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Oh Damn looked like I missed 2 chapters already..
Roxy did WHAT? I can't believe her! That's just heartless..abortion..Damn!
And now Ki's flipping out again cause she had to see that happen.
UGH! When will the drama ever wain?
I hope Aubrey wiill find it in her heart to forgive Roxy once even tho it sure is messed up what she did!
But if this all has to affect Keisha and Mike's relationship.. that's just wrong!
Keisha needs to let go and let her friends make their own mistakes.
It was Roxy's choice. Btw, she and Mike are being safe.. right? So why worry?
And even if something like that ever does happen, Michael def wouldn't leave her by herself like that!
He's a good man! She should realize that and stick to him instead of pushing him away all the damn time.

Doesn't get any better than Michael Jackson after all ;P

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Date: Oct 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Awww, he's moving out? No way!

But I loved how they were neighbors and would climb through each other's windows whenever they felt like it..

Damn, I don't even wanna believe this!

I'm with Ki here tho that Mike should've told her sooner but I get that it was hard for him.

I just really hope with all my heart that this won't be the end for them.

Just when things were going so well, at last. After all the drama they'd already been through.

Damn you Joseph! How could one outgrow a house anyway? What's that even mean? lol

Please update soon? xxx

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Date: Dec 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Damn...

WTH Keisha? Michael already said he didn't even care for those girls!

When is she ever gonna learn? She's actin dumb right now. I hope she gets over herself soon.

Or what did all those conversations with Michael, Roxy, her brother and so on not teach her a thing?

 

Damn...

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed
Date: Aug 31, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oww :( I can't take this anymore...i been readin this same story over and over again and still hoping for an update thats never here :(

Girl PLEASE come back and finish this wonderful story?



Author's Response:

LOL. I'm working on Rocked Worlds 2 right now. so this one is on hold for a little bit.  But I'll be back to finish!  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww girl..

I miss this story so much!

Please tell us you'll be updating again? xxx

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Date: Dec 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Well if that ain't trouble than what in the entire world is??

Poor Keisha and Mike! It's gotta feel like they have the whole world against them now.

I can only imagine how they're both feeling... or where they're gonna go from here.

It's like always something wit these two and it's so sad. They love each other so much. That should be enough...

But with all this trouble I can imagine how messed up everything must feel in this moment.

Of course it'll all get better in time but they're miles away from any recuperation right now.

I'm just glad they have a place to stay at that’s not the streets but I'm sure of it that Joseph won't take long to find out and get them for this.

Ugh, poor babies! This is terrible. What should've been a happy moment turned out to be so tragic...

Even Kenny acts like he hates their guts right now. It's true that they have no one but each other and hopefully,, HOPEFULLY,, that's enough for now!

I Love this story so much girl! I hope you'll update soon!

Really really REALLY SOON! x'D Thank you xx

 

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Date: Dec 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

All I can say right now is:

 

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!

 

She's PREGNANT? Oh God! If only this goes well... She has to tell Mike though! and her momma... Not her friends. They obviously don't understand their situation and have to keep out.

As Much as I do love em, this is something Michael and Keisha have to figure out together. That's all that rlly matters.

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Date: Dec 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Oh my God! Engaged? That's crazy , they're only seventeen ;D
Well, I am rly happy for them. Thy're so in love. I just hope nothing's gonna go wrong like it always does..
There's just so much going on for them right now... I hope they continue to stand strong together even when apart.

Thank you so much for yet another beautiful update. x

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Date: Oct 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Uh-oh! Figures Roxy'd get in trouble eventually...it just had to happen!!

Hopefully if she is rly pregnant and keeps the baby( which I kinda hope she will cus I'm against abortion , lol) this will help her grow up some.

Girl could really use that.

Too bad that had to come in between Mike and Keisha's make-up lovemaking session tho x'D

I love these 2 together! You have no idea how glad I am tht they made up!

Keep it up girl! I'm lovin this sory so much!