Penname: NotUrAvgLadi [Contact] Real name: Um
Member Since: May 31, 2014
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Summary: Past Featured Story

Zaria Graham is single parent who works as an assistant to Greenwood Elementary School's prinicpal, Mr. Hampton. In addition to working for her obnoxious boss and taking care of her toddler son, she also has to deal with her ex boyfriend, Rashad, and his stalkerish friend, Terell. But what happens when Michael Jackson comes along? Will he be able to earn her trust and protect her from the people of her haunting past? Come along on the journey to find out....

By the way...Dreamer and I had a bet on whether or not my story would go over 50 chapters. *le sigh* She was right. So as a part of the deal that I made, I want to dedicate my story to her. :-) *hugs*

And a great big hug to all of my readers out there...I never thought that SGI would make it pass 500 let alone 100 reviews!!! You guys are the best. <3 I love you all. 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of giveintothefire. The original characters and plot are mine and should not be used without my permission.  I am in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Graphic Depictions of Violence, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Attempted Suicide, Death, Drug Abuse, Racism, Rape, Sexual Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 166 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1016447 Read Count: 185362
[Report This] Published: Dec 23, 2011 Updated: Jul 29, 2018
Reviewer: NotUrAvgLadi Signed
Date: Oct 13, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Get It Together

What ever happened to her friend Aaliyah?



Author's Response:

Nothing's happened to her. 😯😯😯 

Summary:

I decided to come out of retirement for a little while, and write a sequel to the previous Mike/Keisha story Rocked Worlds.

Michael Jackson and Keisha Devin-Jackson have everything they've always wanted, but what does change mean for a couple who thrives on consistency?  What happens after marriage and kids?


Categories: Adult, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131032 Read Count: 44017
[Report This] Published: Nov 04, 2012 Updated: Jul 04, 2014
Reviewer: NotUrAvgLadi Signed
Date: Jun 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow great story! Its very realistic

Reviewer: NotUrAvgLadi Signed
Date: Jul 05, 2014 Title: Chapter 57: Keisha and Michael's Epilogue

Soooooo Rocked Worlds 3 is out of the question right? lol wonderful story, hate to see it go

Reviewer: NotUrAvgLadi Signed
Date: Jun 28, 2014 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 54--The Worst

Dang I hope Michael's ok. Ugh and I don't even know what kind of logic Keisha is using with the whole ''he's not perfect anymore so i'm not going back.'' I hope this gives both of them a wake up call and I also hope Keisha doesn't get too worked up when she finds out, we all know her past with being pregnant and all.



Author's Response:

Ki's point was not about Michael being perfect. It's that she let his problem go on for so long because she didn't want to believe that the man that she loved SO much wasn't perfect.  She's not going back because she doesn't want her children thrown into MORE chaos...but I guess that shiip has sailed, huh? LOL

Reviewer: NotUrAvgLadi Signed
Date: Jun 18, 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 52--The Moon Song

I was right!

Reviewer: NotUrAvgLadi Signed
Date: Jun 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 51--Sugarcoating

Oh wow! It would be interesting if Keisha happens to be pregnant again

Reviewer: NotUrAvgLadi Signed
Date: Jun 11, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hm depends...would family values be based off of rocked worlds or are you going with a fresh start with Mike and Keisha?



Author's Response:

Fresh start. REALLY interesting (and plausible) scenario.  Michael will be Dangerous era...like 33 or 34. Ki will be younger than him.

Reviewer: NotUrAvgLadi Signed
Date: Jun 11, 2014 Title: Chapter 50: A Note to My Awesome Readers...PLEASE READ AND RESPOND

Yea I really love Keisha's character, I think you should stick with her lol



Author's Response:

Haha thanks! I love her so much, I feel like writing for anyone else would be "cheating." LOL.  Granted, I could create another protagonist, but...why? hahaha.

 

So, should I plow on through 'I Was Made To Love Her', or should I start Family Values after this?

Reviewer: NotUrAvgLadi Signed
Date: Jun 07, 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47--Baby Steps

How old is Aubrey and Roxy? I'm curious



Author's Response:

In my mind, Roxy is 35 and Aubrey is 34, same as Keisha.

Reviewer: NotUrAvgLadi Signed
Date: Jun 13, 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50--Untitled

Dang I didn't see that coming. I'm just...Wow...i'm speechless



Author's Response:

;-)

Burn by PeaceShanice Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 88]
Summary:

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This passion burns inside of me.

Burn is loosely based on the songs ‘In the Closet’ and ‘She Drives Me Wild’, true stories and my very active imagination.
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A love story that takes place after a few months after the Bad Tour has ended. 

On her way home from a boring day at work Kayden runs into Dorien, a criminal from her past. John, an old acquaintance, comes to her rescue and is forced to remove his disguise revealing himself as Michael Jackson. Michael has an obvious attraction to Kayden and can barely control himself around her. At first all she wants is friendship, but when a friendly trip to Las Vegas turns sinful, she finds herself in a steamy secret relationship filled with adventures in love and lust.

But like any other couple, they hit a rough patch and just as things are starting to look up, secrets from Kayden’s past threaten to ruin her life and sanity.

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I hope you guys like the new banner !! I finally figured out who I originally used to represent Kayden, so I hope you like it. And thank you guys for the support and positive responses to this fic, I really appreciate it.


Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 70970 Read Count: 14169
[Report This] Published: Jun 01, 2013 Updated: Feb 22, 2016
Reviewer: NotUrAvgLadi Signed
Date: Jun 04, 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 | Not Yet

Wow great story!



Author's Response:

Thank you !!

Summary:

"You will never be safe, Scarlett."

 

 

Scarlett Campbell, is a twenty five year old college student who recently returned to her home town where she grew up in the streets of Las Veags, Nevada. To find out when she returns that her whole family has been killed and she also has her eleven year old sister, missing. Being raped, drugged and beaten, Scarlett also has the help of Mr Officer Michael Jackson to help her through her way of recovery and to try and help her find her sister before it is too late. 

 

Their relationship blossoms as they begin to help each other find love in deep down inside their deep big hearts. Find out what happens in this adventure of love, death, murder and also sexual incounters in; Blood Drops.


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Lisa Marie Presley: 1994, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Song Fics, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Anorexia, Death, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Racism, Rape, Self-Harm, Suicide
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2523 Read Count: 4483
[Report This] Published: Jul 02, 2013 Updated: Nov 08, 2014
Reviewer: NotUrAvgLadi Signed
Date: Jul 19, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Loveeee and all that shitttttt!

Great story!

Summary:

UPDATED OCTOBER 18, 2018!!

 

 

 

 

I could never imagine Michael doing a show like The Bachelor, Flavor of Love, I Love New York, etc. no matter how hard I tried, I just couldn't. But if he did, I imagine it'd go something like this...

 

 


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Adventure, Humor, Parody, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Graphic Depictions of Violence, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 92 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 489836 Read Count: 27228
[Report This] Published: Jul 19, 2013 Updated: Oct 18, 2018
Reviewer: NotUrAvgLadi Signed
Date: Aug 27, 2014 Title: Chapter 73: Episode 17

Great chapter! Ava getting sneaky and it seems like Marisela is falling off. I wanna see what the parents and siblings have to say lol



Author's Response:

Ava's the worst kind of "sneaky." She's soft spoken and sweet, so when she stings you, you never see it coming. Michelle is very perceptive, however, so we'll have to see what happens. The parents and siblings are coming in the next update! 

Reviewer: NotUrAvgLadi Signed
Date: Sep 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 74: Episode 17 part b

Dang at Ava lying

photo: I was rooting for you, we were all rooting for you! How dare you?!



Author's Response:

 

That's exactly what I did when I saw this review! Was this inspired by the Miss Jay gif? Lol I remember watching that episode live and being like ooooooh! lol Thanks for the review, gorgeous! 

Reviewer: NotUrAvgLadi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 08, 2018 Title: Chapter 80: Episode 17 part e

Wow, I forgot how much I missed this book!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I've certainly missed writing it. For the past few weeks, I've been jotting down ideas as they come and can't wait to show them. Thank you for your unwavering support, you're the best :D.