Penname: BabyGirl123 [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: May 25, 2014
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If you read my stories please leave a review I put  a lot of work in my stories and I answer to every review 


 


 


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Reviews by BabyGirl123
Summary:

Have you ever wonderred what it would be like to be the woman in Michael's life? Imagine what it is like to have him make love to you all through the night.  Who knew that he was so schooled in fulfilling the female sexual desires? 

Michael finally finds the love of his life  join him on this journey of how he meets this woman and the ups and downs in their budding love. Cassie is a massage therapist who goes to California for a work vacation.  While out for some r&r she meets a young security guard and becomes friendly with him.  She ends up being asked to work on a mysterious man who ends up being Michael Jackson.  After several days the mystery is revealed and their polar attraction turns quickly into a relationship.  Their relationship is filled with deep passion that is rooted in true love.  Has Michael finally found the woman that makes his life whole?  Will he finally have a real family with a wife, children and true happiness?

 

Your feedback is welcome as your opinion motivates me to write more.  

 

I hope you enjoy reading this as much as I am enjoying writing it.

 

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Categories: This Is It: 2006-2009, Adult, Mystery, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 128 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 305304 Read Count: 51095
[Report This] Published: Dec 28, 2013 Updated: Jul 05, 2014
Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: May 25, 2014 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

So sad those last two chapters 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: May 31, 2014 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

Im.so glad their is finally an update to this story 

I so hope this will not destroy their marriage

Can't wait to see what's in those envelopes



Author's Response:

Still working on it...

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jun 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

Curioue about those letters and to answer that question I hope to never be in a position like that but no leaving would be the easy way and if they really love each other no matter what they will get trough this together 



Author's Response:

Working on Cassie's letter right now hope to have it up tonight.

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jun 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

Then I would be reading it tomorrow or well later today since its 1 am here 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jun 02, 2014 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119 Cassie's letter

That's a beautiful letter

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jun 02, 2014 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120 Michael's letter

Hopefully Cassie accepts the baby and will eventually see her as her own



Author's Response:

Still not sure where I'm going to take the story yet.   Leaving my options open at this point.  Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jun 05, 2014 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

Burning those letters actually that's a great idea 

Still curious about if she's Michaels or not 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jun 09, 2014 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

Don't leave us hanging too long 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jun 09, 2014 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

Oh can't wait to see what's in that room 

 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jun 09, 2014 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

Omg obsession in the worst case definitely did not see that coming 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jun 16, 2014 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125 diary of a sick woman

Woah can't believe she really ignored Cassies pain good thing she managed to save her 

And wow a suicide and cancer that would be karma 

(Btw the story from the stalker that's really good almost felt real) 



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I was trying to try a unpredictable angle starting with the miscarriage to the dr Val baby to stalker Val...tried to be different

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jun 18, 2014 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

Aww so beautiful and aww that's so wonderful wanting to adopt the child she deserves a home where she's loved 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jul 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

Really enjoyed this story but ok its understandable there is end to every story hope you won't give up writing when all stories are finished 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jul 05, 2014 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

Beautiful chapter and ending loved this story hope you won't give up writing once all the stories are finished 

Summary:

Michael always had a Fear of Flying. While on a business trip something goes drastically wrong while flying on a commercial airline throwing two complete strangers together sealing their fate forever.

award winner


Categories: Award Winning, Invincible: 2000-2003, Adult, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Drug Abuse
Series: Fear of...series
Chapters: 112 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 371836 Read Count: 51742
[Report This] Published: Feb 02, 2014 Updated: Aug 29, 2014
Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jul 14, 2014 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 124

Its great the way the delivery is described wow