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Michael Jackson became the biggest super star on the planet with his music. What happens when he desides to walk away from it and tackle his other passion? He meets a young tattoo apprentice and the chase ensues...Will it be love or pure regret?
•Warning:Strong Sexual Content and language.•
This is an AU story. The timeline of Michael's success has been altered to fit the story. This is all a work of fiction.
Categories: Award Winning, Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Angst, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 152372 Read Count: 29071
Date: Feb 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 44: Crossing The Line...Made It Home Safe...
"I'm not going to calm down Michael. Wait…did you wash your dick? Go wash your dick." She pointed to the shower stall. <<<< I laughed a little too hard at this.
I really need to stop reading updates from you and Teddy while I'm at school because I look like a freaking weirdo at the lunch table laughing my ass off, but I'm sorry it was funny because I don't blame Pen that was just straight up DISGUSTING. But yaaaassss She's pregnant, I'm really happy but I'm also a little scared for her also after reading Redone's review. Now, I don't know the route you're going to take for it but I hope every thing is going to be just fine with the baby even with Pen undergoing surgery.
ooohwee I can't wait until Dirty Diana see's Pen and Michael still together AND finds out that she's pregnant. I'm ready to laugh my ass off at all of that.
Great update Tut!
Author's Response:
Thanks bb!! Pen is a TRIP!!! In the middle of all that she had to say that. Michael couldn't help but laugh too. Yup it was nasty how you just gonna put you lips on somebody without their permission. Her Nast saliva ass. Lol. Happy and scared are the exact emotions that come to mind with her being pregnant. As for the surgery in keeping my lips zipped. Lol. It will all be revealed. It will be hilarious when Diana sees her little plan was faulty. Trust me on that. <333
Date: Nov 27, 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Nothing But Surprises...
Randy is asking for an ass whoopen and it aint even funny yo!! Lol at Pen explaining to ol girl about the engagement. They always gotta think you pregnant if you aint over 30 or somethin lmaooo. Anyway great chapter girl! My review would've been longer but im on my phone! But I hate to see this end! DDDD: but can't wait for an update!
Author's Response:
Randy has an allergy to life it seems cause he's just begging to be done away with. LMAO. That's Cali and Pen get them together and it's pure MESS!!!
There's like maybe 7 or 8 Chapters to go. Unless I extend it.
IT's all good girl. I'm just glad you got to catch up with the story!! <333
Date: Oct 08, 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Cry...
Girl I have been itching to read this for some time now. And now with some free time I have tomorrow my ass will be all up in your reviews. and i mean ALL UP in them. Can't to read girl! Continue on !
Author's Response:
I hope you enjoy the story once you're able to get to it. I love your stories!!! Bring it on hun. Be all up in here. Looking forward to the thoughts. :)))
Date: Feb 23, 2015 Title: Chapter 45: Doctor Doctor...Baby Makes Three...
I thought I had reviewed everything I needed to review but it's obvious I have not. Anyway, glad to see that you updated and it was well worth the wait. I don't really have much to say that I'm glad dirty Diana is getting handled and also that Pen and Michael are having a baby, and it's confirmed! I love it and I can't wait to see what happens between these two. It's really nice to see Michael all lovey-dovey and respectable of Pen, especially when he declined a drink. It's cute he doesn't want to do it since she can't... really cute, LOL. Anyway let the Michael's Shield of Protection come forth, hahaha. Can't wait until you update again girly.
Author's Response:
Yup Dirty Diana got served lets hope her delutional ass stays in the past.
Lmaoooo Michael's Shield of Protection is a real as hell. You'll see just how strong it will manifest.
Michael was always a sweetheart beneath all that bed hopping. He found a girl finally that got his complete heart. <333
Date: Nov 04, 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Refurnish...
I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT YOURE ABOUT TO DO BUT I DONT LIKE THE FEELING IM GETTING. But girl this story is bomb as shit and I dont know why it took me so long to read it but im finally here. Pens character is the shit and I aint lying. I love how you make her act . Strong, confident, and she aint sorry and weak which is a major pull in for me. But anyway, I wonder whats wrong with her. Is she sick with some sort of incurable disease? You need to let me know ASAP. Meaing ima be waiting on that next chapter like I wait on food. SERIOUSLY. May I also say your sex scenes are magnificent ima have to take notes but anyhoo , im rady for the next chapter .
Oh and FUCK elardos ass.
Author's Response:
Yaayyyyyy welcome to the story. I'm glad you finally got a chance to read it. Thank you so much for the compliments!! As you know I love your stories. The road is going to get a little bumpy in the next few chapters is all I'm going to say. Working on the new chapter RN!! Thank you again for reading!! <333
Date: Nov 16, 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Uhm...I Don't Think So...
First, Michael shut shit down with Joseph real quick. Throughout the entire time he was havin him in shut down mood I was screaming hallelujah and clapping because damn... he was just too damn rude but im glad Michael defended his mama. Lol about that deed shit. Sorry Joseph but yo name ain't on SHIET. So get the fuck onn!!
Secondly, lol at Randy! That nigga swore that Michael was gon let a jackson Train be ran on Pen. FUCK OUTTA HERE. Michael shut that down real quick. "You're not jermaine and I'm not you" lol he said fuck that sharin shit im stingy as shit. God, I love this Michael. He is funny, sexy, and masculine at the same time. I prefer that over a timid and shy Michael anyway, i dont know why tho. Its just my preference.
Thirdly, the whole Michael and Pen this close to fuckin thing was funny. Its cute that he calls her mama and lol at the the hipster and thuggish type stuff. I don't know but ima agree that the NYC can change a nigga.
Finally, HE'S PROPOSING! Ain't that cute!!!
Author's Response:
Michael read that ass like it was a novel LMAO. Joe had nothing to say at ALL. As for Randy he's a piece of work bu he aint done yet.
I love a strong confident Michael too. I think it's because I feel that he was that way in real life with the people he knew and loved. He showed his true self and from watching Vids of him being candid that's what I saw. So I know what you mean!
Him and Pen was too salty that their session got disturbed and Michael more so because it was for bullshit.
Michael is a hipster thug LMAO. Hipster in dress Thug in actions and attitudes.
Yessss he's about to pop the question girl!! <333
Date: Mar 10, 2015 Title: Chapter 46: Closure...Well In A Way...
Awww, you got me on my toes Tut! I'm ready to know what happens next.
I've prepared myself for the worst though, so if anything bad does happen to Pen during this time then I'm already somewhat prepared. Although I PRAY she has a safe surgery and a good recovery no complications but life isn't all peachy-keen. I know that.
Ahhh, I'm ready for the next chapter now! I can't think.
And Lol, Michael and Pen are some freaks but they are married and in love and that is totally A-OK. Anyway, loved this chapter. Looking forward to the update.
Oooh also LMAO @ Michael being sprung over Pen while she was away with Cali. The boy's got it hard. He's so in love.
Author's Response:
You will be on the edge of your seat the whole time. It's all planed out and I hope it will come off like I want it too but mostly I hope it won't disappoint. Hold on to your emotions cause I will be taking them on a ride. That's too are head over heels. They make me smile all the time!! More coming soon! <333
Date: Apr 15, 2015 Title: Chapter 50: Forever...Neverland
Hey, Tut!
I'm glad that Pen finally came around. It broke my heart when it broke Michael's heart because he felt like she didn't like it. I knew she would come around eventually. I understand her feeling of losing control, but she should always know that Michael is going to allow her a say so in their relationship. This isn't no boyfriend/gilfriend or fiancees, no... this is a marriage. Michael was just trying to surprise her, I'm so glad they're at Neverland, though! And I'm glad that Pen really likes it and that Michael knows it.
I fear but also can't wait for the two chapters you have coming. I'm just curious as to what is going on in your mind.
More soon, please.
Author's Response:
Hey hay hiegh!! Lol Pen finally relinquished her stance. She just wanted a little control but as you see Michael gave her something she never thought about and she LOVES it. He always wants her input. As you can see her not being on board really threw him off his game. Like he said, home is where ever she is. Nohing to fear my dear all will go well. <333
Date: Mar 15, 2015 Title: Chapter 47: Falling Down...
TUT, noooo! I'm screaming! This is a dream, A DREAM!
Author's Response:
I'm sorry B!!! Hugs and a Blanket. Get through this with me bb!!! HUGS!!!! <333
Date: Jan 26, 2015 Title: Chapter 43: Crossing The Line...And Getting The Boot...
DIANA IS DOIN THE FUCKIN MOST, I SWEAR. This ugly ass, rat ass, wrinkled ass, physco delusional hoe is getting on my nerves.
She is due for a MAJOR ass kicking.
I think Pen is pregnant too forreal, forreal, her feeling sick and stuff. But she seriously needs to hear him out. It wasn't his fault at all... Diana is just seriously going to extremes right now to get what she wants and its not happening. If Pen wants to really hurt the witches feelings then she needs to let Michael explain what TRULY happened and move on with their lives while Diana watches... or better yet throw her in a mental asylum. That is much better for her... maybe there she'll find the mind that her ass lost all that time ago. Lord Jesus Christ, I CANNOT DEAL.
Please please please please let him explain. If they break up I am never gonna get in a relationship, because i will have NO hope lmao. Cant wait for the update!
Author's Response:
She was doing the most and she does deserve a good Beatdown. I can throw that in there for yall. Lmao. It would be the best revenge for Michael and Pen to live good and prosper and let Diana Rot in her delution. I'm zipping my lips for the rest. I'll update soon sobyoull see what happens. ;) <333
Date: Nov 11, 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Going Back To Cali...
TEAR HIS ASS UP, Mike.
It was all good until his donkey head ass wanted to walk up in there and why is Katherine so damn quiet? She betta not be lettin Joe talk to her like that. Ain't nobody got time for that but I hope Michael truly tears Joseph into pieces and gives him a piece of his mind for insulting Pen like somethin wrong wit him even tho it is. GOD, he irks me all the way down to my freakin SOUL i swear!! Girl, you finna have a chick have a heart attack with his dumb ass. Damn i can't wait until you update. Joseph needs to be read from head to toe ASAP. I'm jus waitin on it but brruuhh im ready for the next chapter.
Anway, on to lighter things, I love Michael in this and the way Janet acts. Yasss I love me some Janet Jackson, Tut, you just don't know! That "badunkadunk" lmfao.
Author's Response:
Joe has balls of steel girl only o an extent though and Michael is about to read him cover to cover. I love Janet too. I'll update soon so look out for it!! <333
Date: Jan 09, 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Delusional Conclusions...
Where have I been? I knowwwww right? Lol, anyway Pen so wrong but so right for what she did. I ain't gonna even lie Mike and Pen are some FREAKS! Jus saying but I love the bond between those two and lmfao at Diana, BITCH, flirt wit who? Not you *flips hair* she thought... WRONG, nigga. But Pen OWNED that bitch, showed her, her ring and all like bling bling MF. God, I love her. You named this chapter perfectly because Diana was a delusional chick! Anyway, I hate to see this end. Pen and Michael have grown on me and I love those two together. But I'm always down for anymore stories you have coming (which reminds me I have to catch up on the other) its been hectic but I'm getting around, anywhoooo... I think that's all I had to say... update soon!
Author's Response:
Hey hey hey. Lol welcome back girl.
Pen gave her ass a sneak peak as to how hurt she will feel when Michael shuts her whole shit down and Pen will be there laughing her ass off.
Yeah I hate for this to end too but I'm stretching it out a little longer. I haven't thought of another full length story yet but I will focus on Cradle To The Grave after I complete this. I might write some more short stories tho. Thinking of it. You know I'm here for all your stories! <333
Date: May 15, 2015 Title: Chapter 52: Family Life...All In...
"(I prayed for weeks for her cooch to tighten back up after that trauma. It's back though I can attest to that.)" <--- laughed so hard at that! Michael, smh, same old guy ten years later. Damn, shame.
But Tut, you did an amazing job with this story and even though I didn't start reading from the beginning, I'm glad I did! That little instinct that kept telling me to click it did me good or else I would've missed out on a pretty good story. I'm happy to see Michael and Pen have their happy ending. Is a sequel poking at your mind or no? Lmao. Either way, I'm glad you wrote this. Michael may have been a troll and a little ass at the beginning but it was nice watching him grow. It was nice watching Pen grow into the woman that she is too. It was nice to see them experience a relationship and take it as far as to make it to ten years of a wedding, I give them claps!
I really loved this, and I'm not sure if I added it to my favorites yet but I intended on it.
BTW, when I saw this updated I jumped for joy. Loved it!
Author's Response:
LMAOOO you know Michael would still be his same old crass self. The one we all know and love. He did grow so much from the beginning till now. They both did. Ten years and growing. Thank you so so much for sticking with me and following that little instinct and reading my story. Was happy to have you on the journey!! <333
Date: Mar 24, 2015 Title: Chapter 48: It Was All A Dream...I Use To Read Word Up Magazine...
YAY. It was just a dream, AMEN. I'm glad that everything is okay and i hope it remains but im doubtful. Update soon! Btw this would be longer but I'm on my phone, so sorry but i can't wait until the next update!!
Author's Response:
Don't worry about it bb. I appreciate any words you drop me. Yes it was a huge relief it was a dream. Things will be good from now on. Just 4 more chapters till the end. :)<333
Wini is just a normal beat cop and she is given the opportunety of a life time when she is assigned to a detail providing extra protection for The Jacksons. Michael is getting ready for a major life change, will Wini be a part of it?
Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 351606 Read Count: 36816
Date: Jan 29, 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
Oh my God, this is amazing. Im angry I overlooked this so much but now I'm so happy that I clicked on it! Im going to finish this up tomorrow. Im so happy its the weekend too so I can read consistently. Excellent job so far girly.
Author's Response:
Oh yay! I'm glad you found the story and are enjoying it! I look forward to hearing from you in the future!