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Age: 18-21
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Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Michael Jackson is an award winning screen writer who has just written a book called Cradle To The Grave.  Though it is published as a work of fiction the subject matter mirrors events in his own life.  He grew up poor in Gary Indiana with his best friends Kenneth Bertrand Grave and Kamaria Bello. As they grew older distance and time eventually made them drift apart.  When Michael reunites with Kamaria it's bitter sweet.  Love lost and found, betrayal, lies, deceit and eventually death steps in to rule the day.  How will Michael cope.  Will he move on with his life or will he be haunted and emotionally trapped forever by his past.

 

This is a story of pure fiction I do not own any images used in the dipiction of this story.  No copyright infringment intended.

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Categories: Award Winning, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Physical Abuse, Rape, Sexual Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 124143 Read Count: 15332
[Report This] Published: Nov 17, 2014 Updated: Jun 12, 2016
Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 17, 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chocolate Pudding And Paint It's All Creative

I just got all the feels from this chapter and I don't even know why. I started reading this but I stopped but I'm back now! I feel bad for Michael and I'm so angry that Ria died, ahhh, but I'll have to see whats in store. Baylee is so cute. Moving on, next chapter!



Author's Response:

Welcome back to he story Brandy!! :)) There is so much in store. Baylee is a cutie pie. Such a smart little girl.<333

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Date: May 13, 2015 Title: Chapter 17: The Give That Takes

This trick. Hoes get down and dirty nowadays. Im disappointed.

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Date: Mar 17, 2015 Title: Chapter 8: The Officer Or The Gentleman?

Okay.... maybe I'm feeling #Michley idk yet...

I feel like I betrayed Ria!



Author's Response:

Lol. Look at you switching sides. #Michley get really cute!!! <333

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Date: May 30, 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Secrets So Untold...

I don't think my hurt can take the next chapter right now. This story is not to be read in one setting. A girl needs to take a break. I know this shit ain't real, but damn, it's hittin' home. 



Author's Response:

Awe man this is the tough chapter too. It's going to get better then worse then better then worse and finally better but it all had to unfold. :( <333

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Date: Mar 17, 2015 Title: Chapter 9: The Chances We Take The Mistakes We Make

I had already read this chapter but I had to go back and review for the last chapter but now here I am... Rhoda gave me a headache, she's already a pain to me and I hate hate hate Kenny. Can we say he's a drunken bastard or no? And Michael no no no Rhoda is not the route honey. If all else fails I'll be his baby forever!



Author's Response:

The two antagonists here will make your head hurt. So much hurt happening needlessly. If only they had made the right choice. <333

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Date: Mar 17, 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Heart Of Gold

I felt bad when Kenny showed up Michael's gifts until I read that Ria cherished Michael's more.

This is so cute and I love Baylee.

I'm actually Team Ria right now though. Marley has yet to win me over but maybe when her and Michael have more private dialogue I'll feel better about them being together but for right now im all for Kamichael.



Author's Response:

Lol Kamichael!! Marley was never really impressed with Kenny's wealth. The locket was her heart. <333

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Date: Mar 17, 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Watching Eyes And Baby Cries

#Kamichael

I feel Baylee, I lost my mom when I was 5. Its hard thats very true, when she grows up she'll understand. 

Anyway, I hope Michael heals some more. I can still tell how its an open wound.



Author's Response:

Awe I'm so sorry to hear you lost your mom!:((( and so young too. :(((I can't even begin to imagine what things would be like if I lost my mom. I feel so strongly for Baylee especially since she's come to know Marley as her caretaker since she was a baby. She wants so bad to call Marley mommy. :(( HUGS!!!! <333

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Date: Mar 17, 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Scattered Daises

I couldnt even leave a review for the last chapter to get to this one.

Giirrrrrl, im dying.

#Kamichael , but i feel bad for Marley, I wonded who broke into her apartment. I'M WRAPPED.



Author's Response:

Still #Kamichael. Lol. <333

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Date: May 30, 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Soft Then Vile

You can't put shit passed this nigga! What is wrong with him?! 



Author's Response:

Girl this man is insane and blood thirsty now. There's nothing that can keep him from doing the worst!!!<333

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Date: Aug 19, 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Bye Bye Love Hello

Don't want you thinking I abandoned you, I'm still here, lol. I just started school so it's sort of back to the books and projects. I will catch up soon though. 



Author's Response:

It's all good BB. Whenever you can catch up is good. Take your time. School is important and I know it gets hectic. <333

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Date: Jul 05, 2015 Title: Chapter 26: When A Stranger Calls

Can I just say that the whole Marley and Michael scene about not losing each other has me in my feelings? I have the feels Tut and you did this. They are so cute together. Btw im sorry I haven't been revieweing. With working and stuff I find it hard to have time to read and update my own stories but girrrrl I'm back and I'll try and be more consistent.

I think Mars forgiveness was expected, she loves him. I just hope Michael is more open and honest and not try and hide things and lie. Its not good for him. Actions speak louder than words right? So we will definitely see.

Kenny is... God he's... i dont even know!

Loved the chapter though girl.



Author's Response:

It's all good BB. Read when you can. I'm just glad you're still enjoying the story!! Michael will have to tell it all now. Things are going to be heating up now with the new revelations. 

Kenny is...is right lol. He's a price of work!!<333

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Date: Nov 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The Interview...

Im so ready. You're writing is so smooth.  I love it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!! *hugs* more to come!

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Date: Mar 17, 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Sad Math, Add And Subtract

TUT. My heart, its dying. I'm losing life.

I love me some Usher, why you had to do this? Its cool though but I'm still with #Kamichael for now.. even though shes forcing herself to love Kenny when that should NEVER be done. Just because he was there don't mean nothing girl. Buy him a cake, give him a kiss on the cheek and a thank you and keep it pushing. Smh.



Author's Response:

Ria was so lost here. I know Michael's heart died with how things turned out after he came back from school. Things could have been so different. <333

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Date: May 30, 2016 Title: Chapter 26: When A Stranger Calls

I remember reading these chapters a little but reading them over won't hurt because I need a refresher. lol. 

 



Author's Response:

Take your time Hun. It's a lot to swallow I know.<333

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Date: May 30, 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Unintentional Lies

Damn. Damn. Damn. Damn. Damn.  

I hate peopl that don't mind their business