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Categories: Romance, Humor
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13981 Read Count: 968
Date: Apr 15, 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Brownie Boy
so cutesy! I love the beginning where michael's being his quintissential self and playing with the flour. HAHAHAHA the 'defective turkey' comment made me laugh out loud! and the shower scene was just beyond lovely! overall it was a sexy, yet casual declaration of two people madly in love - and it's not unrealistic. there's irritation and taunting and ungracefulness. i like that it shows a hint of all that, not just the good stuff. awesome job! when's the next one coming out?
<3 xoxo
Author's Response:
Yeah, I don't know where that defective turkey thing came from. My mind works in weird ways sometimes! LOL!
Date: Apr 09, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - My Man
Yay!! Thanks so much; I'm so happy! You did do an excellent job and I'm so glad you'll let me do another!! XD
well, honestly, my favorite part was when Michael and I were yelling at each other, so for the next one...would you be willing to write michael and I in an established relationship? And during the story we're in the middle of a big fight (I'll let you decide what it's about). Neither one of us are going to cave, I try to walk away, he doesn't let me, I slap him, he slaps me back - that kind of thing. Overall, I would really like it to lead to a very violent, fight-for-dominance, angry sex ending. Feel free to throw anything along the lines of jealousy, possessiveness, protectiveness, or something of the sort into the mix. Even play around with the alcoholism, if that's the route you wanna go, picking up from the first one shot. :) either way, by the end of it, I think it would be quite endearing if we acknowledge that yes, we're both angry and we drive each other crazy sometimes, but we'd never truly hurt each other and we're still in love...
it isn't too complicated is it? You just got my muse and imagination running wild with what you've written so far! :) if you need a broader ranger of suggestions, please don't hesitate to let me know! I'm so excited to see more!! Lotsa love! Xoxox
Date: Apr 09, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - My Man
Yay!! Thanks so much; I'm so happy! You did do an excellent job and I'm so glad you'll let me do another!! XD
well, honestly, my favorite part was when Michael and I were yelling at each other, so for the next one...would you be willing to write michael and I in an established relationship? And during the story we're in the middle of a big fight (I'll let you decide what it's about). Neither one of us are going to cave, I try to walk away, he doesn't let me, I slap him, he slaps me back - that kind of thing. Overall, I would really like it to lead to a very violent, fight-for-dominance, angry sex ending. Feel free to throw anything along the lines of jealousy, possessiveness, protectiveness, or something of the sort into the mix. Even play around with the alcoholism, if that's the route you wanna go, picking up from the first one shot. :) either way, by the end of it, I think it would be quite endearing if we acknowledge that yes, we're both angry and we drive each other crazy sometimes, but we'd never truly hurt each other and we're still in love...
it isn't too complicated is it? You just got my muse and imagination running wild with what you've written so far! :) if you need a broader ranger of suggestions, please don't hesitate to let me know! I'm so excited to see more!! Lotsa love! Xoxox
Date: Apr 09, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Never Alone
*sniff*
wow!!!
I...honestly don't know what to say! My god, that was incredible! You wrote me incredibly well, actually. And I love the way michael scolded me for drinking so much! It was cute in a very humorous way! And that's actually how I would imagine the scene playing out...
also, very lovely and sexy scene at the end! I like how no words needed to be said at the End. Oh! AND the comment where I said that I want to have children if he's the father! Yeah... I WOULD say that!
Overall, a very beautiful job! I was so excited to see you uploaded my one shot! And I'm soooooo happy with it! Thank you, thank you SOOOO very much! I can't wait to read what else you have coming out!!
(p.s. Can I do another one some time?)
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you liked it, Randi! When you wrote write down your personality, I immediately saw the drinking scene in my head, as well as the argument. I saw it playing out in my head, and I'm so happy that you're happy! Of course you can do another one!
Date: Apr 07, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - My Man
Heeheeheeheehee! This was a cute read! I'd say you probably gave her just what she wanted!
i also like the quick post! Now that I've read the cutesy sexiness here, I can't await to see what you have in store for me! You're pretty good at this. And you got yourself a fan! I'm keeping a lookout for more! We'll done!
Author's Response:
Oh my gosh, thank you, Randi! You're making me blush! Considering this is the first story about Michael that I've written for this site, it means a lot! Thank you for your kind words! As soon as I posted Destiny 's story, I started brainstorming for yours, so hopefully it will be up no later than Friday....maybe even earlier ;)
Date: Apr 15, 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Surprise
HEEHEEHEEHEEHEE!
ahem. i meant to say....
HEE-HEE!
Fun, kinky, naughty sexiness! Loved it! <3
Oh, and the icing on the cake - no no, the ICE CREAM to go with the icing to go on the cake...A BABY! We all know that puts it over the top for our angel!
well done! this one was fun as well! Onto the next one! WHEEEEEE!! XD
Author's Response:
LOL! Thanks, Randi! I almost gave myself a Mikegasm while I was writing it......had to keep fanning myself and everything.....
Follow Michael and his love(s) through varies of one shot stories that are lustful,kinky,loving and even romantic
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Categories: Romance, Adult
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4649 Read Count: 1206
Date: Apr 10, 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Request
Ooh! Yay!
name: Randi
age: 22
discription: burgundy hair with black streaks, brown eyes, Caucasian with tanned complexion, petite, 34D, 5'3"
personality: spunky, outspoken, kind, not shy, cute, fun, devoted, artistic, passionate
era: Dangerous/HIStory
plot: Michael and I haven't spoken for weeks. We're married, but after the day we ended up in a car crash after a date night, we haven't been the same. I'm upset and feel guilty (I had been driving that night) and try repeatedly to get michael to acknowledge me, talk to me, anything, but the most I get is a scattered word or phrase here and there. Not even eye contact.
Eventually, I discover he has a bouquet of flowers ordered and he goes out to our "spot" (where we had our first date, first kiss, etc), not even inviting me but I follow him anyways. I become upset, thinking he's seeing somebody else, having the nerve to meet at our special place. It doesn't make it better when he has the good grace to shed a tear, but he keeps going.
When he finally arrives at our place - me demanding the whole way that he at least LOOK AT ME and say goodbye to my face, but I stop and realize there's a headstone in front of him - with my name on it.
The accident comes rushing back to me: me driving us home on a rainy night After a great anniversary, something happens to make us flip and tumble off the road, Michael pulls us both out, I have a major injury and Michael has to carry me, trying to stop me from going to sleep. I try, but sadly I give in to the fatigue that I can't shake.
I'll leave it up to you how it ends. I hope I wasn't so specific that I've made it difficult. It doesn't have to be EXACTLY how I described, but I would like something along those lines. Fell free to wander off into any direction your muse takes you! :) Pretty please? I can't wait to see what you come up with! Xoxox
Author's Response:
Of course and I love the plot by the way and I'll do my best of making that happen
When You Are LACKING IN FAITH, Others Will Be UNFAITHFUL TO YOU
Disclaimer :
Story is mine, characters are mine, of course any mention of namebrand products--i.e. sodas, foods--are not mine. And any resemblance to actual situations is totally coincidental.
Categories: Trigger Warning!, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Adult, Slash, Angst
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14050 Read Count: 1475
Date: Apr 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Whoa! Michael wnet to prison? HUH?!?!?! O_o
Very nice chapter. I like the tender connection between Michael and Sebastian. I'm curious as to what's up with the family, though. i can sense lots of angst coming up! looking forward to it!
Author's Response:
Yes, that's right. There's a dark secret in Michael's life. I'll give you details soon.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: Apr 15, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Sounds great so far! But pretty PLEEEASE don't abandon the other stories!!! Alternate if you have to, but I wouldn't be able to take it if you didn't finish The Executive Decision. I do want to see this one move forward, but don't give up on the others! PLEEEEEEEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Im on my knees right now!
*puppy-dog eyes*
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing! I appreciate it VERY much.I won't give up the story of Executive Decision, not yet. TRUST ME!!
Disclaimer:
This story is totally mine. Copying is entirely unacceptable and illegal. So just read it, and enjoy it only. Okay?
Categories: Adult, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Slash, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Anorexia, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Racism, Rape, Self-Harm, Suicide
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22723 Read Count: 3824
Date: Jun 02, 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Oh, no!! Michael! My poor baby!!! I'll readily bet that Cutlis had something to do with it! I hope Max kills him! God, I hope Michael will be okay after this. I know it's not easy in The slightest, but... :,( Damn it, and Max had something so wonderful planned and now this! How are they going to deal with this? How is Michael going to cope with what happened? As I said before, he's just not emotionally stable enough for something like this. I hope that fucker didn't get him pregnant; that would be BEYOND terrible!!
I really can't wait to see what's coming next. I'm hoping to see Max going on a manhunt. Well, whatever happens, I can't wait to read! Loves!
P.s. I don't know if you got my last message, about The ED sequel? But just in case, my email is randideucelv@hotmail (dot) com. Let me know when you would like to start working on it! I'm so excited!
Author's Response:
Did I gave a hint already!! Oh NO!! Clever as always haha.
Something bad happened to Michael, and Max will not gonna allow those THANG. YOU'LL SEE ((:
Thanks for the love.
Ps. Of course, I got your las message. I still workin on it, still comprimising the sequel with my crazy mind. Maybe you could let me know. You knew my email, don't you? Shoot me something and I will give you credit for that. Anyway, I will email you soon though.
ILY
Date: Aug 08, 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
EEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Youre baaaaaaaaaaaack!!!
i have to admit that I was starting to wonder if you'd ever update again, lol!!
I'm so glad you're continuing this story! I would just be soooo saaaaad if you quit this one!
I just cooed when Max presented the rings, AND walked to Michael!!! *squee!* Max is going to be just fine! And he can take care of Michael just like he wanted! Watch out, Cutlis! You're days are numbered!
Speaking of which.............. I FKING KNEW IT!!! $75,000?? Yeah, that's real discrete! Michael is going to be a WRECK!! Ooh, I just HAVE to see what happens! Oh, PLEEEEEEEEASE update soon! I've fallen in love with this story as well!! (But I haven't forgotten about the ED Sequel lol!)
glad to see you're back! Don't be a stranger, now! ;)
Author's Response:
Hey...hey...Holla ^_*
Yes, It's been like ages that I abandoned my stories, my bad..I'm truly sorry. No, I didn't intend to quit this story...not yet and speaking of which...the new sequel of ED, tbh...I've really messed the story up.
Maybe you want to continue the sequel of ED?? You have my permission to do it and you can do whatever you like to write to the sequel :) Just let me know, 'kay.
Date: May 26, 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Ah, no!! Poor Michael! What the hell is win this Cutlis asshole? What's his angle? I'm glad Michael turned him down, but all the problems about to come his way! Poor baby! I hope there isn't too long a wait for the next chapter! You got me hooked.......AGAIN! Lol I can't wait for more! Til next time!
p.s. I LOVED the romantic scene between Michael and Max. I think it was much needed! Xoxoxo
Author's Response:
Haha..His Boss is such an ashole. Soon Max will do something about it, No worry.
TY darlin
Date: Apr 30, 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Oh, no! I ain't gonna pretend that I don't know what choice michael is going to make! My poor, poor baby! He just can't win! With Max's (even somewhat understandable) hostility, problems at work, and now his boss giving him an ultimatum that will have bad results either way, oh this just can't be good!! :( I can't wait to see how he handles this! Great job; I'm liking it!
P.S. Btw, will you be updating The Executive Decision any time soon? That one is my absolute favorite of all your works!! And I've been DYING to see what happens next and how Michael reacts to his newly-discovered information! Pretty please? I'm an addict and that story is my crack! (Ehm, okay. I admit that wasn't my cleverest analogy, but I hope it got my point across :P)
Author's Response:
Michael is a smart man, he will give the best choice not the fool one although is tough.
Date: May 18, 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
So the nurse is gay too. Okay. I didn't see that one coming, but cool!
lol I LOVED the flashback scene! Michael-And-Max cuteness!! Squeeeeeeee!
im curious as to what Michael says to his boss...today is the day to make a decision. What's it going to be? I hope he doesn't get hurt too bad! He's just not psychologically strong enough to deal with this!
As always, I'm anxiously awaiting your update. Much loves! Xoxoxo
Author's Response:
The new update is right up now. Go on check it out!!!
Date: Aug 12, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! You really mean it?? You'll let me write it??? *SQUEAL*
But, Aww, I wouldn't give up on it so soon. There's still things that can be done. I'll shoot you over my ideas that I've developed for it so far as soon as I'm done writing this lol. If you still feel like there's nothing that you can do with it, then I'd be more than happy to write it for you! :D But I might still refer to you for approval and such or if you have anything you'd want to add, etc. And would you like me to put you as a co-author? After all, this was your story to begin with :)
Well, thank you SOOO very much for entrusting this story to me regardless! It means an awful lot!! I won't let you down and I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoy YOUR writing!! Xoxoxo