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Dreams by midnight musings Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

A one shot story. A perfect day with Michael


Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 652 Read Count: 1258
[Report This] Published: Jul 17, 2010 Updated: Jul 17, 2010
Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 10, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*sniffle* aaaaawwwww that was such a sweet story! the ending made me sooooooo saaaaad! so beautifully written though!

Summary:

Michael was a less than average kid. He wasn’t cool, or popular. Hell, he was probably the polar opposite of both of those two words.

So why would Logan Zim ever even consider adding him on Facebook?

Well, turns out they’ve got more in common than they thought...

 

**LOL it's been like a year and half since I last updated this story... or ANYTHING for that matter, but I'm back for a little bit, probably just gunna finish this story because I like it haha and I felt bad about abandoning it a year and a half ago lol so yeah haha**


Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Adult, Angst, Trigger Warning!, Slash
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Domestic Abuse, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30315 Read Count: 3886
[Report This] Published: Feb 23, 2013 Updated: Oct 30, 2014
Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed
Date: Oct 26, 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

What...the...helllllllllll!!!!!!!!! Oh, crap Michael's in for it! Dammit, Tom, you sure got a sense of bad timing!!! And poor Logan. Well, since that cats out of the bag, is Joseph gonna bar Michael from seeing him again?? And has Tom ruined everything?? Can't wait to find out!



Author's Response:

Hahaha xD Tom definitely knows how to stir the pot ;P wether he means to or not haha :P

Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed
Date: Oct 31, 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Holy shit! Trouble just keeps finding poor Michael! I wonder what's going to happen to Logan and Tom? Hell, what's going to happen to Michael???

btw, crazy, freaky story about your MMA class.



Author's Response:

Haha its a rough life for those three right now 

 

Yeah!! I mean if it was at an actual gym I would be less surprised, but in a high school PE course it was pretty shocking! Haha guys will be guys though ;P

Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed
Date: Oct 25, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lol! 

OMG A WRITER WHO'S AS PASSIONATE AS ME!

lol well you've got me hooked :) I just love a good slash story! (For one thing, they're a lot more creative than the typical "Michael-meets-girl-they-fall-in-love-etc-etc" - which is a good chunk of them, I've discovered! I'm sure they're good stories, but it's basically the same thing over and over. Slash tends to have a lot more leeway and room for variety!) my favorite stories on here are slash and I tend to find them quite a bit more believable and interesting. I know you don't mean any harm to Michael by writing these - besides, love is love and if Mike can be happy with a man just as much as he might a woman, more power to him! Lol I'd love to see where you're taking this story and even moreso that you've started it up again! :) As long as you keep posting, I'll keep reading and leaving feedback. I WONT LET YOU DOWN, EITHER, YANAgirl07! 

Good luck, Hun!



Author's Response:

I can tell I'm gunna like you a lot already ;D haha 

I totally agree with you!! I LOVE slash stories!! Andrew writes really good slash stories from my memory and jacksonfan's story Only Professional is also AMAZING!! I dunno if you've read any of those or not but they're great!!

Haha thanks girl ;) <3

Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed
Date: Oct 25, 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Hey! I just started reading, but I'm all for it! Do continue! <3



Author's Response:

OMG A NEW READER

To be honest I was worried about whether people would actually read this story or not because I wasn't sure if the original readers were still around or even interested and I didn't know if knew readers would have the motivation to read it through and catch up haha but I'm glad to see someone took the shot to read it :P haha

I WONT LET YOU DOWN SMOOTHMOVE!! :D

Stolen by HistoryGirl Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 47]
Summary:

Michael Jackson, as innocent as can be, taken away from a world that he knew to somewhere of which only the evil live.


Categories: Horror, Adult, Slash
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13311 Read Count: 5256
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2013 Updated: Jan 24, 2014
Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed
Date: Jan 25, 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This is pretty intense. Poor michael!! I wonder if he gets to escape? Take the chance and get punished? Back out completely? I can't wait to see!!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'll update soon!! :D

Summary:


IN THE GARDEN

copyright: celestia

 


Categories: Adult, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Slash, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Domestic Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Self-Harm
Series: In the garden - The next chapter
Chapters: 130 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 166239 Read Count: 70839
[Report This] Published: Aug 25, 2013 Updated: Apr 17, 2016
Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed
Date: Sep 05, 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Hello, dear! I just wanted to let you know that I recently began reading your AWESOME story - and I'm trying to get caught up, lol. But I can't stand being a silent reader - especially since you're updating fairly regularly - so, I wanted to let you know what an amazing job you are doing with this story. I'm enjoying myself very much and I love how realistic the characters are, especially where Michael is concerned. I will get caught up as soon as I can.

But, AWESOME job; you're a very good slash writer - and writer over all. Thanks for making good effort to write a good story. You are very appreciated!



Author's Response:

Gosh, thank you so much, sooooo glad to hear that you're enjoying my story! I just noticed I've written for about a year now so hopefully you'll get caught up soon, lol. I truly appreciate your review and I'm so happy that find my story awesome. Thank you once again! xx 

Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed
Date: Jan 14, 2015 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112 - Matters

Whoa! I didn't realize chapter 111 was up until I saw this! My apologies... Well, I got to read two updates in one! I'm so happy Michael and Morgan are back together! Although I do agree with Morgan that immediately moving back in was a bit rushed, it's still wonderful to see them moving forward. I got a feeling that there's some things that Michael is still dealing with internally, so I hope he doesn't repress it to the point of blowing his cork. I am very curious as to what it is though. Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Awe that's okay I'm glad you reviewed! Interesting to read your thoughts regarding Michael's health. He is struggling. I'll try to update sooooooon. Thank you so much again! xx

Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed
Date: Jan 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110 - Sensible turmoil

WOOOOOWWWWW!!!

lol I was just finishing up the last few chapters, and WHAMO! Chapter 110 is up! That was a pleasent surprise!!! :D

sorry it took me so long to catch up. But I love the continuous drama, here! I about cried when Morgan moved out and they divorced... And I squealed when Michael found him and Morgan agreed to talk - of they'd have talked... I was a bit disappointed at that. And now they're at each other's throats again. :( What's going on with Michael? The thing with Justin threw me for a loop, beating him and all, but I wonder if something else went on and that's why he's acting so strange? Even for him. I understand he's upset about the Claire thing and all, but...this is...I don't think there's a proper term to give it justice. 

I couldnt imagine Michael laying a hand on ANYBODY. What's gotten into him? I must find out! I want things to be better between them! They obviously still love each other. 

i hope they figure this thing out. I hope Michael finally really talks to Morgan and settle everything. I hope Morgan can understand once he sees everything that's happening with Michael. Something tells me it's more than Michael being different and conversationally inept...

like I said, I just LOVE this story! And I'm finally caught up! Yay! Expect to hear from me when you update! Loves, and I hope to see you again soon! Xoxoxo



Author's Response:

OoOoo loved this lengthy review! Thank you, I appreciate it a lot! <3

Michael suffers a great deal, to a greater extent than Morgan's really aware of. Morgan's always been very openminded so hopefully he'll be able to see this through, too. Thanks soooo much for your thoughts and inputs and I'll look forward to hear from you again. xx 

Maestro's Dance by Dante Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Darren's life takes two unexpected turns that draw him into the Maestro's dance. Maestro/OMC, Slash, Oneshot. Edited "Dance of the Ghost Master." Based on Michael Jackson's short movie "Ghosts."


Categories: Supernatural, Adult, Romance, Slash
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4036 Read Count: 613
[Report This] Published: Nov 01, 2013 Updated: Nov 01, 2013
Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed
Date: Mar 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Maestro's Dance

wow....just....wow! very beautiful and very well-written. it was very mysterious with a dash of romantic. well-balanced. and it left some detail to the imagination. i enjoyed this very much! <3

Summary:

Done by Androclese! Thank you!

 

This story is complete!  Thank you MJFiction readers for all your support!  I love you!

You never know as much about yourself as you think you do. That's what Michael Jackson discovers when what he thinks will be an ordinary pizza dinner reconnects him with someone he thought he'd never see again.

 

Chris was an clumsy, pimply, hopelessly romantic 18 year old when they last met. But 30 years does a lot to change someone, and Michael can hardly believe that gawky teen turned into the handsome, charismatic, fashion-designer he now knows.

 

Harder still to believe is that Chris still remembers the one night that a condescendingly straight Michael said yes to the world's most awkward date. He swears he fell in love all those years ago, and never got over it. Now he's back for a second chance, which makes no sense to Michael at all.

 

Why would the world's up-and-coming star of fashion still be head over heels for a aging, traumatized, needy, demanding, and straight pop-star?

 

Michael has no idea. That's why he's so surprised when Chris' gentle strength and presence begins to turn his life inside out. Never has he found someone who could accept him so completely and make him question everything he thought he knew about not only sex, but also about love.


Categories: This Is It: 2006-2009, Adult, Romance, Slash, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 152148 Read Count: 31624
[Report This] Published: Jan 07, 2014 Updated: Dec 22, 2014
Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 29, 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Yikes! I'm with Michael!! Damn this is frustrating! I do see Chris's point though, and boy he's doing a damn good job at getting his point across to him. It's about time these two get time to work on their relationship. Yay! A real date is coming up!! I'm glad Michael's finally getting comfortable with everything. But wow, I'm feeling his frustration from here! Lol I'm so glad I'm not a man! Anyways, I'm so happy these two are finally moving forward. I can't wait to see how they continue to build. :) this will be good for both of them! Excellent work, as always! Looking forward to the next piece!

p.s. I'm kind of afraid of the answer, but...just what did happen to Carlos? After the photos got released and everything? Something tells me he didn't take that lying down...

Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 03, 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Awwww! I hate to admit it, but I really like Jackie right now!! That's so awesome and somehow I know she can be trusted with everything mike is sharing with her and going through.

lol boy did I enjoy the beginning of this chapter! Ooh-la-la indeed! I can't wait til things REALLY start happening; both Chris and Michael deserve some happiness already! Something tells me this is far from over, though! Ooh, I'm getting chills just anticipating what's to come. I'm so excited for the next chapter! You have no idea how awesome you are! Loves! <3 xoxo



Author's Response:

Update coming soon!  I always look forward to your reviews!  <3

Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 26, 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Gggaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh! WHAT DID CHRIS TELL HIM???? IT'S NOT FAIR! I wanna see what's next!!! PLEEEEEEEEASE!!! Things are getting better! Chris is back, Kevin is handled, I HOPE we've seen the last of Carlos...it's time for Michael and Chris to be happy!! When's that gonna happen?? PLEASE TELL US!!!!!! Xoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

hehe!!  Don't worry!  It won't be too long until you find out!  ;-)

Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 13, 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I HATE KEVIN!!!! That little twat has GOT to be up to something!! I'm willing to bet that he's Carlos's little pawn/protege/minion or whatever and he's been fuckig with Chris all those years on Carlos's orders. And now that Chris is involved with Michael, he's using that to torture both of them! I think it's just a little TOO perfect that Kevin was the one to deliver Carlos's package and that he's the one offering suggestions to michael about how to handle it! And please, he 'likes' michael? Ha! I'm sure that's all just a ploy to get michael somewhat comfortable with him so he can really stab him in the back. Repeatedly. With a heated blade. But I also think he's jealous because in messing with Chris on Carlos's behalf, I think he fell for him and he knows he can't truly have him. 

God, and michael's getting back on whatever drugs so he can CONCENTRATE? Come on! And he's trusting KEVIN to get him something? WTF??? Oh, man this is soooo not going to end well! Poor Michael! My poor baby!

As much as I'm loving the suspense and the angst and the drama, this is also so painful to endure! Please send the next update soon! I can't be left wondering like this for long!!! GAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 11, 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Okay this can't be good!! An envelope from Carlos?? How the hell did Kevin get it?? And is michael going to be okay? He really REALLY doesn't seem like he's doing very well. I hope Chris comes back in time before something bad happens! And I got a baaaaad feeling about Kevin. And something tells me we haven't even begun to see the last of Carlos... Can't wait to see what's next!! Update soon, please!