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This passion burns inside of me.
Burn is loosely based on the songs ‘In the Closet’ and ‘She Drives Me Wild’, true stories and my very active imagination.
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A love story that takes place after a few months after the Bad Tour has ended.
On her way home from a boring day at work Kayden runs into Dorien, a criminal from her past. John, an old acquaintance, comes to her rescue and is forced to remove his disguise revealing himself as Michael Jackson. Michael has an obvious attraction to Kayden and can barely control himself around her. At first all she wants is friendship, but when a friendly trip to Las Vegas turns sinful, she finds herself in a steamy secret relationship filled with adventures in love and lust.
But like any other couple, they hit a rough patch and just as things are starting to look up, secrets from Kayden’s past threaten to ruin her life and sanity.
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I hope you guys like the new banner !! I finally figured out who I originally used to represent Kayden, so I hope you like it. And thank you guys for the support and positive responses to this fic, I really appreciate it.
Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 70970 Read Count: 14169
Date: Jun 04, 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 | Not Yet
A shout out AND a sexy MJ gif? 
This chapter is just...
And when Michael and Kade talked about 'love'? 
When I resort to gif-speak, it means you left me speechless :) Your prose has evolved beautifully, and that is saying a lot as you started this story strong. I wish half my students could write like you do!
Author's Response:
I was trying to out do chapter 5, i hope i succeeded. Thank you, I've noticed that too especially when I read some of my old work. Plus it's gotten much easier to write now, than it was a year ago.
Date: Jun 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 | Kadeland
Noooooooo! I'm caught up. That wasn't supposed to happen
You were right when you mentioned how you felt like the last several chapters were really starting to show off your skills. You've hit your writing groove, so to speak. And it is only your first story!
Author's Response:
I quit writing this a few months ago, but when I started again I found my writing process and what works for me. Which I'm glad for, because I really wanted this story to be good, even though it's my fun/experiment story. But don't worry I have another chapter coming soon. Probably tomorrow or way later today.
Date: Jun 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 | Off Limits
Stop hatin' all over yourself. It was a corny ending, and sometimes chapters need to have corny endings. They are best used on special occassions, such as this chapter ;)
Author's Response:
Yeah, but sometimes I don't want the scenes to feel too corny, like they're not possible.
Date: Jun 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 | S-L-E-E-P
That's what he gets for not listening to her.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're invested in my characters lol one of my goals when writing this, is to have people call Kayden, Kade.
Exactly, if he woulda just got out his feeling for a minute there wouldn't have been an arguement in the first place
Date: Jun 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 | I Cut The Wrong Cord
How can he expect her to call him first if he doesn't even answer the phone when she called him OR call her back before coming?! pffft. Girl, you are getting me emotionally invested in these characters....
Author's Response:
The logic of a man is something I'll never understand lol but I know his pride was hurt. , so he acted an ass lol
Date: Jun 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 | Shit
Well, I knew that whatever happened, the rest of the day was going to have to be downhill after that wakeup call. Still, 
Good thing she switched cars!
Author's Response:
If Michaels Rolls Royce would have gotten messed up, that would have been the end lol
Date: Jun 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 | Mystery Trip
Sorry, took a break from commenting while I read. Still reading, though :)
Kayden sure chose the worst possible time to nap.
Author's Response:
Oh don't worry about it.
she really did though. But in her defense she was running on E.
Date: May 23, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | Unmasked
Woah - you are alive! Glad to see you back
Date: May 26, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | Unmasked
Great start! It's an interesting premise and you've definitely got me caught by the end of this chapter.
Side note: I think you meant Hayvenhurst ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you I'm glad you like it !!
You're probably right about the Hayvenhurst thing, thinking back on it that makes more sense than Neverland but.... oh well lol
Date: May 26, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 | The Hangover
I think you have a great dialogue going and lots of action. I'd like to read more about their thoughts and the settings, too.
I can't believe she blew in his face. If that wasn't a facepalm moment, I don't know what is.
Author's Response:
Bare with me lol. This was the first fanfic I've ever written. I think it's gotten better though. But thank you for telling me, I've been dying to have someone really critique my writing. I'll keep that in mind when i write my next chapter.
Date: May 26, 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 | Just Friends, Right?
LOL. A book on abstinence. Nice.
I notice that you are adding more descriptions of their actions here and there. I like it; it makes the scene more vivid.
That was an awesome prank. I love your creativity!
Author's Response:
Honestly I have the most random thoughts and sometimes I try to work them into my chapters, and that prank was one of them.
Date: May 26, 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 | What Happens In Vegas...
What makes it feel cheesy to you?
Btw - love your tumblr
Author's Response:
I just feel like I could do better with their conversation about Michael's skin.
and thanks, which blog is yours?
Date: Jun 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 | Stay
Hehe. I love creative license.
I like how you have some cliffhangers, but you also include the more "minor" moments. It adds depth to the exchange
Author's Response:
Thank you, I really want to protray them as a believable couple and not just two random people put in a story together, so I'm really glad you noticed it.
Date: May 26, 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 | The Girls Are Talking
He's amazingly nonchalant about her friend being in his space without his permission. Though, I guess with what she just went through, he's priority is making sure she has some comfort.
The phone call: 
I don't have a blog. I just look at other peeps' stuff.
I think you did a good job talking about his skin. I guess it could have been more drawn out and emotional, but that wouldn't feel consistent with everything else I've read in here thus far.
For your first, second, third, fourth (get the point?), this story is great. Head and shoulders above a lot of the stuff I've seen. You are a strong writer and I'm looking forward to watching you develop into an even stronger one :)
Author's Response:
Well you gotta keep in mind thaat he know who Rose is and how close she and Kayden are. I think he'd have a different reaction if it was someone else.
If you ever make one, let me know and I'lll follow you back.
Thank you, I rewrote that scene a couple times but I'm still not completely happy with it. But I'm like that with a lot of my chapters.
I'm glad you like it and thank you for giving it a chance, I really appreciate it. I can't wait for you to cathch up on all the chapters because they get better lol I really think writing this made me a better writer because the story I started after this one is more put together as a whole.
Date: May 26, 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 | Back To Reality
Damn. This story just go real. Favorite chapter so far. It feels like your writing style, the plot, and the characters are really coming together.
I'm hooked.
Author's Response:
