Penname: Ohhthatsjordan [Contact] Real name: Jordan McDonald
Member Since: Oct 25, 2013
Membership status: Member
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Age: 12-15
Gender: Male
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Summary:

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Diana is your everyday woman. Except for one MINOR problem. She is as beautiful as a rose in the spring time. But her soul can be as dirty as the bottom of farmer's shoe. She can be so malicious that she makes the Devil appear like Mary Poppins. When she demands her way, she will get it,no matter who or what she harms. From the very first time she meets Michael,she knows she wants him, for Diana will not rest till her wish is fulfilled.

Michael has the world in the palm of his hands right now. His Thriller album is at an all-time high, he has just won 8 grammys, knocked down so many records, its criminal, and he is on his way to recording another best-selling album. But most importantly,he has somebody special to share this glorious time of his life with. Annie. She has been his rock for the past 5 years. Their relationship is a match made in heaven. But all that may come crashing down the moment Diana slithers into the perfect picture.

 

*I know many stories hae been made with "Dirty Diana" because of the compelling song, however, each unique and creative in their own special way, mine is no different. This a twisted, dark, complex story about Diana and if she actually came to life. Fair warning. Please understand that this story is strictly inspired by Dirty Diana, which some real events; I just manifested it into a story. Reader's discretion is strongly advised. On a brighter note, Please ENJOY!!!!!!!

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This story takes place over a period of years. We shall begin in late 1985. Post-Thriller Era;Pre-Bad Era


UPDATE: The ORIGINAL PROLOGUE is now been posted as of 10/07/2013!! This will help to understand the story better!

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Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Adventure, Angst, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Song Fics, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Self-Harm
Series: None
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 146911 Read Count: 34461
[Report This] Published: Oct 05, 2013 Updated: Aug 21, 2014
Reviewer: Ohhthatsjordan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34- Takes a Bitch to Know a Bitch

Man I'm sorry Annie cool and all but I'm team Diana , she a woman you don't wanna mess with and to me she's prettier : ) 



Author's Response:

Hey there:) I see Diana getting the votes after this chapter lol. We will see how everything works out or how everybody's opinion will be throughout this story! And yea, Diana is a tough cookie! 

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Date: Jan 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47- Not If She Stabs You First

Lmfao when michael goes crazy for that chicken though,X) nice way to add comic relief in this chapter , keep it up : )



Author's Response:

Thanks!!! Tried to bring some humor into it!

Summary:

Michael and Jessica have two beautiful children Prince and Paris. They are living in a beautiful home Neverland, Michael has a successful singing career and just completed the movie Moonwalker and Michael and Jessica are engaged!! Life is perfect for them!!

 

Until one day a Accident changes the Jackson life dramatically

 

Find out what happens to this Family's life  

Warning!: This Story does contain very strong Domestic Abuse but it will be based on a Medical Mental Illness which can happen so if you don't like a out of Character Michael do not read

you have been warned 


Categories: Horror, Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!, Angst, Crime
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Mild Violence, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Anorexia, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Physical Abuse, Rape, Self-Harm, Sexual Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35835 Read Count: 11085
[Report This] Published: May 31, 2014 Updated: Aug 31, 2015
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Date: Jun 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Rape Child

ewww she kissed frank X( , and even though baby was conseived from rape i think she should keep it, it wasn't the baby's fault it was michaels



Author's Response:

I was grossed out myself, I think she should too lets see what happens

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Date: Jun 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Trouble starts here

Okay ima start with this. 1. friends don't say i love you to eachother like what jessica and frank did, i suspect something happened between them that we don't know . 2.even though i think tatiana is a bitch and rude i hope her and the baby is okay. 3. they needa keep michael's raging ass in the hospital is anger is not under control yet. That's just what i thought about while reading lbs but anyways so much is happening in one day i can't wait to see what happens next : ) keep it up



Author's Response:

Excaulty what I want you to think Thank you!!! :D

New chapter is up 

Reviewer: Ohhthatsjordan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 15, 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Michael lose it

now this story is reallllyyyy getting interesting, keep it up : )



Author's Response:

The next chapter is up :D

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Date: Jun 11, 2014 Title: Chapter 17: The Hospital Appointment

I'm sorta confuse on what michael is doin to her like i know he's hitting her but i dont understand the ball thing ???



Author's Response:

I am sorry you confused but basically he making her like a ball you know that use in sports and with balls being treated like their are he treating jessica the same 

hope this help you understand 

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Date: Jun 08, 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Decisions Decisions

i don't think she should trust. he's just probay blackmailing her so he can get what he wants



Author's Response:

I totally agree 

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Date: Jun 06, 2014 Title: Chapter 12: What bring you here?

I hope the doctor can find a cure to michael's dickheadedness .

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Date: Jun 05, 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Totally out of it

Omg what the hell is wrong with michael ?! something big must've happened to his head to treat jessica like that and frank is a creep like that's nasty but i'm likin this story , it's different from others i've read, keep it up : )



Author's Response:

Thank you I though no one has not written a story like this so I do it I am poroud of it :D

Summary:

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Michael and his group of loud, obscene friends enter their senior year of high school, vowing to make it their best year yet. As the year progresses on, they get into the wackiest, most unlikely situations, and along the way, new relationships blossom. Junior year was okay, but Senior Year's going to be even better!

 

 

~DISCONTINUED~


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Adventure, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9671 Read Count: 5157
[Report This] Published: Jun 09, 2014 Updated: Jul 07, 2014
Reviewer: Ohhthatsjordan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 09, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: First Day;1

So far so good , this story already has the good sorta funny feeling to it , I can't wait to read more , keep it up : )



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Summary:

improved

Semaj is 17 with big dreams and goals but meeting 21 year old drug dealin', shit talkin', trouble makin', Michael Jackson was not planned. Her life turned a full 360 after the night she met him.

 

Not your average bad boy meets good girl story but see for yourself!

 


Categories: Award Winning, Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Neglect
Series: The Gangsta Lovin' Series
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 238258 Read Count: 62228
[Report This] Published: Sep 07, 2014 Updated: Nov 04, 2015
Reviewer: Ohhthatsjordan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- Confessions Pt. 2 Remix

Don't be too hard on ya self its a really good chapter , it helps give us a better understanding on how bad Michael was hurt by Lonnie and why its so hard for him to open up to semaji . I just can't believe Lonnie treated him like that then had to nerve to act like things fine like no trick , she really irritating .

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Date: Sep 08, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Saving Grace

I say keep going with the story , I like it : )



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

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Date: Sep 25, 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- Turned Tables

Yesssss I think they should give it a try , and keep telling the story in Michael and semaj's point of veiw



Author's Response:

Alright! And we'll see about them trying ! 

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Date: Sep 13, 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Askin' For Trouble

Dang Michael starting to fall for her this quick , I thought it would take a Lil while longer for him to see any interest in her 



Author's Response:

Hmmm.. is he actually falling for her? Or does he just feel bad? We'll see. 

Summary:

 

Chivonn's a girl in her mid-twenties working a mediocre job struggling just to get by. Her brother Bryan is a father of two young children is also struggling after his baby mama kicked him out and sliced his paychecks up with child support. The two siblings realize they are better off living together than struggling on their own. Chivonn feels safe with her brother and the living arrangement is working out perfectly....

....until the day Bryan's childhood friend Michael Jackson, gets released from prison and becomes the roommate from hell you just can't get rid of. He's bad, he's dangerous, and often lets his pride get in the way of doing what's right. There are a few good things about him, though. He's got a secret soft spot for children and just so happens to have one of the rawest talents the world will ever see.

 

But will the world get to see it? Or will his talent be wasted... Forever lost to the streets...

award winner


Categories: Award Winning, Adult, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Domestic Abuse, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142404 Read Count: 36878
[Report This] Published: Sep 09, 2014 Updated: Sep 20, 2015
Reviewer: Ohhthatsjordan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 09, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Can he stay for a couple days... maybe a week?

Yes girl I'm liking this story , can't wait to see what happens next : )



Author's Response:

Thank you!