Penname: Ohhthatsjordan [Contact] Real name: Jordan McDonald
Member Since: Oct 25, 2013
Membership status: Member
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Age: 12-15
Gender: Male
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Summary:

Flo

Flo and Michael both share the same problem. Thanksgiving is coming up and their folks are expecting them to bring a date home. They make a deal that they'll pretend to be in love for thanksgiving break. But in reality they hate each other. What will happens when the act starts to become reality for Flo?


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Jazer's Library
Chapters: 74 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 123487 Read Count: 75399
[Report This] Published: Jun 01, 2011 Updated: Dec 17, 2012
Reviewer: Ohhthatsjordan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 31, 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Soooooo I just read all of these chapters and I feel inlove , now I'm gonna have to suffer the wait for an update , keep them coming : )

My Bully by AtMJsHouse Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 699]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Yahara

 

 

Yahara has always been a nerd in school. She has had many bullys and being teased is nothing new. But when she goes off to college she and her life starts to turn for the worst. Especially with the bully of all bullys picking with her. What happens when Yahara begins to fall in love with her bully? Will he love her back? Will it work between them?


Categories: Humor, Romance, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Hurt/Comfort
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Jazer's Library
Chapters: 84 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 121316 Read Count: 164232
[Report This] Published: Aug 02, 2011 Updated: Nov 07, 2013
Reviewer: Ohhthatsjordan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 26, 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

I don't usually do this but This story was so nice I read it twice , you really have a gift in story writing : ) , keep it up and I bet ya probAly busy but aye can't wait til chapter four 

Reviewer: Ohhthatsjordan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 26, 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

I don't usually do this but This story was so nice I read it twice , you really have a gift in story writing : ) , keep it up and I bet ya probAly busy but aye can't wait til chapter four 

Reviewer: Ohhthatsjordan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 18, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Man you should've saw my face when I saw that you updated ^_^ , my happy ass , now I gotta wait again but aye it's worth it : )

Summary:

7 year old Michael is now dealing with fame at a young age, now that the Jackson5 are big! As they attend school, they have a hard time having a normal life, but there is one girl willing to treat Michael like a friend. Her name is Margie and even though she loves the Jackson 5, she sees Michael as a normal kid, but as a crush too. Until one day, they meet by accident, she turns out to become one of Michael's first friend, and Michael also becomes her first friend, but after that day, they don't see each other again for a long time. 16 years pass, what will happen between them? Will Michael remember Margie, or will it take him a while?


Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: First friend, First love
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32144 Read Count: 32872
[Report This] Published: Sep 25, 2011 Updated: Jan 03, 2014
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Date: Mar 12, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: INTRO

She finally told him , dang took her long enough haha but i'm really enjoying this story so far , it's different from others that i've read (different in a good way incase you're wondering haha) keep up the good work can't wait for the next chapter : )

Summary:

Skyler was a small time girl who landed a job at a new york bank. One day her whole world changed. It was the day she met F.B.I's most wanted. Michael Jackson

WARNING! THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE AND GRAPHIC SITUATIONS.  

THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH FOR GIVING US OVER 600 REVIEWS! WE ARE SO GLAD YOU ARE ENJOYING THIS STORY. YOU GUYS ARE AWESOME!!!


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 145091 Read Count: 134102
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2012 Updated: May 11, 2016
Reviewer: Ohhthatsjordan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 12, 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

 

i've read many stories on here but you guy's story is by far the best. I love it ! I'm obessed now with what happens next. I'm literally checking everyday just to see if yall updated lbs but i hope ya'll make chapter 50 soon

 

From yo new #1 fan lol



Author's Response: Lol thank you! We really try to work hard on this story and an update is coming really soon by michaelfan90 so you wont have to wait long

Reviewer: Ohhthatsjordan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

YESSSSS ya'll finally updated ^_^ I can't believe motuh in love with sky ! Ya'll doing a really good job keep it up : )



Author's Response:

thank you darlin. we only aim to please. More will come soon. Thanks for the review hun.

Reviewer: Ohhthatsjordan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 20, 2014 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I MISSED YA'LL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But anyways i think her ex husband wrote i , he a lil crazy in that mind ya know

You Found Me by LoveHeart Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 51]
Summary:

Michael and Layla were friends in high school, but one day Layla leaves school and moves to a different state with her boyfriend Austin. Michael always wanted to be more than friends with Layla, and spends years after she leaves wondering how things would have been if he told her how he really felt. When Michael moves to a new town years later, will he take an unexpected second chance at lost love with Layla, or will he find himself torn between two women?

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All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers ofany media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.   

Attention: I have edited the chapter 'Right Where I Want You'. 

The chapter 'Hands All Over' has also been edited.

Thank you all for 7000+ reads!


Categories: Adult, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26280 Read Count: 9585
[Report This] Published: Aug 14, 2012 Updated: Jun 30, 2014
Reviewer: Ohhthatsjordan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 05, 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Just To Let You Know :)

I just read your story today and i'm completely hooked to it now . i can't wait for whats goin to happen, youve just earned another loyal reader : ) , keep it up ! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I love to hear feedback from my readers,  it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside to know your enjoying it :) Again thank you so, so much, your reviews mean a lot!

Summary:

 

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In a Differnt Time 

What if Michaels Kids at the age they are now were transported back in time to the Most influentual time of Michaels Life, The Thriller Era the bad era and the Dangerous area only to get to live othe the mass histera that was there fathers life at the time.

how would his life have been different 

Who would get in the way

How would his Life have been the same 

would his life bee the same when they returned to there time or been different. how would theres.


Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, HIStory: 1995-1999, Adventure, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 284947 Read Count: 10547
[Report This] Published: Jul 24, 2013 Updated: Oct 22, 2014
Reviewer: Ohhthatsjordan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 12, 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50 Welcome To HIStory

Man it took me forever but I've finally caught up with this story , ivengot to say I'm very impress with the way you made this, this story is truly uderrated and I think many others should read this story cause its just that good.it really kept me on  toes with the drama that's been hppening and I can't wait to read more : )

Summary:

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Diana is your everyday woman. Except for one MINOR problem. She is as beautiful as a rose in the spring time. But her soul can be as dirty as the bottom of farmer's shoe. She can be so malicious that she makes the Devil appear like Mary Poppins. When she demands her way, she will get it,no matter who or what she harms. From the very first time she meets Michael,she knows she wants him, for Diana will not rest till her wish is fulfilled.

Michael has the world in the palm of his hands right now. His Thriller album is at an all-time high, he has just won 8 grammys, knocked down so many records, its criminal, and he is on his way to recording another best-selling album. But most importantly,he has somebody special to share this glorious time of his life with. Annie. She has been his rock for the past 5 years. Their relationship is a match made in heaven. But all that may come crashing down the moment Diana slithers into the perfect picture.

 

*I know many stories hae been made with "Dirty Diana" because of the compelling song, however, each unique and creative in their own special way, mine is no different. This a twisted, dark, complex story about Diana and if she actually came to life. Fair warning. Please understand that this story is strictly inspired by Dirty Diana, which some real events; I just manifested it into a story. Reader's discretion is strongly advised. On a brighter note, Please ENJOY!!!!!!!

(Graphic video made by an awesome designer)

This story takes place over a period of years. We shall begin in late 1985. Post-Thriller Era;Pre-Bad Era


UPDATE: The ORIGINAL PROLOGUE is now been posted as of 10/07/2013!! This will help to understand the story better!

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Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Adventure, Angst, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Song Fics, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Self-Harm
Series: None
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 146911 Read Count: 34461
[Report This] Published: Oct 05, 2013 Updated: Aug 21, 2014
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Date: May 23, 2014 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55- Trepidation

oo i'm anxious to know what they finna see ...

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Date: May 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54- Impending Doom

YES you're back !!! I missed you soo much ^_^ ,

 

 

but anyways , i hope annie doesn't die , she was soo sweet, i hope diana and her ex get caught for this that would really be something



Author's Response:

Aww, I missed you too. I never forgot about the story, school/work got hectic!!!!! But I'm back!!!!! Thanks for reading. Stay tuned!!!!

Reviewer: Ohhthatsjordan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 30, 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 - Toxic Passion

I'm sppeechless man ... like you got that gifted brain cells to come up with a chapter like this it's just wow ...



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks:) I apperciate that. I really tried to take a different twist to the story so it is not so cliche lol. But thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: Ohhthatsjordan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 14, 2014 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45- Anni(e)hilation

YES THAT'S MY GIRL ! : ) God Micheal and his emotions, they change like a channel lol . I wonder what she's gonna do to Annie , she better watch her back ^_^



Author's Response:

They sure do change like a damn channel. It is always the cute ones with all the issues lol. We will find out what Diana is up to. Yes, please tell Annie to watch her back lol. Di is randomly up to no kind of good lol. Thanks for reading:)

Reviewer: Ohhthatsjordan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47- Not If She Stabs You First

Lmfao when michael goes crazy for that chicken though,X) nice way to add comic relief in this chapter , keep it up : )



Author's Response:

Thanks!!! Tried to bring some humor into it!