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Bump for those That May Have Miss The sequel is up and just finsihed so if you read this PLEASE do check it out something not to be missed

SPECIAL THANKS to those that got me up to 9700 READS

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GRAND FINALE 4/12/2014

Hello My name is Janice Marie Belford, and i'm a Media and Comunications expert for MTV, I have a masters in Public Relations... and I HATE my job, I'm looking for a Change of pace and The story that will Give my life mean and my Career the big Break I desire

Janice Belford is look for that big thing to change her life but what happens when the story she looking for Falls in her lap well not really she needs to go get it But when Michael jackson is accused of Child sexual abouse janice know EXACTLY what she wants to do... She know HE will be the thing that will get her out of her rut

she goes on a wild goose Chase to New Mexico to catch him but what will she do when she does and what happend after they start working together NEITHER will have expected 

STRONG SEXUAL CONTENT


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Lisa Marie Presley: 1994, HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Song Fics, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Lisa Marie Presley, Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Emotional Abuse
Series: Tabloid Junkie
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 357621 Read Count: 17707
[Report This] Published: Nov 27, 2013 Updated: Nov 08, 2014
Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Jan 04, 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Part II (On The Run)

I love this story sooooo much, it got me on my toes. I wish everyone would just stay out of their budiness, and let them be. I love the way you have Michael being such as badass in this story. You are good writer, keep it up.



Author's Response:

Aww I apreciate that.... it takes so much time and emotions to write these chapters it make me feel good to hear how much Love is out there for my work it's that love that keeps us writters writting

No story should be predictible 

yeah they do need to stay out there busness but on the other hand they mean well... they ar adults they can make there own decisions and a love like there is destented to burn if they don't start treating it better

Michael is bad in a sexy way though 

Thanks for the complement I will

Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Jan 29, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Next Move

Poor Janice, she is going through. Lisa is a bitch and she is not a real friend to Michael; if she was she wouldn't being doing all of this. If I were Janice, I would have not let Lisa stop me from loving Michael. I would come up with a secret plan to get Lisa back; it would involve everyone who was on my side including Michael. Janice is smart, she needs to use her brain and fight this situation. Can't wait for the next chapter, you are doing wonderful.



Author's Response:

Yeah Janice is... But Don't Give Up on Janice just Yet 

as I said Yes Lisa is a Bitch, No she isn't a Real Friend Michael knows that Now and he is ONLY useing her to his advantage for right now

Oh No one can stop Janice from loveing Michael But hey she has to tread Lightly... you can't say to HELL with a Threat like that when it Effects SO many, Janice is lost right Now she needs to get her head back on Straight believe me when she comes back she WILL most definately Teall Lisa Where she can PUT her BULLSHIT  

Rebel by LouieLlama Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

Michael Jackson is Brooklyn's top bad ass. He smokes and sells weed, cuts class, steals, drinks, and has been with probably every girl in the entire school more than once. Nobody can lay a finger on him. He thought he had it all when all he was missing was love.

Angel Medina on the other hand, is the complete opposite. She is very kind hearted and will help anyone in need. But when she moves to Brooklyn, she finds out that not everyone is as accepting as they were back in her hometown.

When destiny brings these two together, it brings a world of pain with it. Will they get through it?


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Adventure, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Drug Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6937 Read Count: 3813
[Report This] Published: Dec 15, 2013 Updated: Jun 24, 2014
Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Jun 24, 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I love this story!!!! Update when you can honey!!! 



Author's Response: Thank you!!!

Summary:

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"The day you came inside, I felt band new."
"So what am I to do now?"

We all know 1993 wasn't the best year for Michael, and the same could be said for Lena. When the love of her life, and father of her twins, walks out on her with no excues, she's left to pick up the pieces of her shattered world alone. That is, until she befriends Michael.

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Thank you guys for the 2000+ views & 50+ review I know it's not much but I do appreciate the love, even from you silent readers, thank you :)


Categories: Adult, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42408 Read Count: 7470
[Report This] Published: Dec 27, 2013 Updated: Jan 16, 2016
Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Apr 23, 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I love this story!!!!! I also like your other ones too. Please keep updating on all of them!!!!! You are doing a wonderful job!!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and likeing them, I really appreciate it :) I'm working on an update for Burn right now. I have no clue when I'm gonna make another short for KINK tho.

Summary:

 

My life has been nothing but hardcore and dangerous ever since I can remember. Gangs, drugs, violence, and death were all I knew. But someone came into my life and showed me that there was a way out. I wanted that happiness. But getting to happiness means there will be pain . This is my story, the story behind my painful happiness.

 

 

 

This is my first story by myself. I'm very nervous. I hope you guys enjoy it.


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11304 Read Count: 691
[Report This] Published: Jan 10, 2014 Updated: Jul 14, 2014
Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Jun 02, 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This story is great so far!!!!! You should definitely continue it. Please keep going.



Author's Response:

I wasn't going to but because you guys are so freakin sweet, i will update soon.

Summary:

Michael Jackson is a young man who has lost faith within his self. His mother has disappeared and his father abuses him in more ways than one. He puts on different 'masks' to protect him but doing that caused him to lose who he really is. He has lost his true self and can't find his way back.

Unique Parker has had a horrible past, always holding this guilt inside that has grown stronger throughout the years. She decides to move to California from NYC to get away from it all. She is lost, hurting and vows to never fall in again.

Will they ever find their way out? Will they do it together and find love on the way?

 

 

  • This story contains adult, abuse, violence, rape, strong language, romance 
  • Michael will become famous

 


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9335 Read Count: 855
[Report This] Published: Jan 10, 2014 Updated: Mar 15, 2014
Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Mar 15, 2014 Title: Chapter 8: NOT A CHAPTER PLEASE READ

Your doing great, the story is awesome. Please continue.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

L I T T L E        W H I T E       L I E S

 

 

 

L O V E        I S        B L I N D,        T H E Y        S A Y

 


Categories: Invincible: 2000-2003, Adult, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 279803 Read Count: 40131
[Report This] Published: Feb 18, 2014 Updated: May 06, 2021
Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Mar 15, 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ohh Annie, you've done it again. I like the story already. Please continue!!!!!!!! OOOHHHH GUUURRLLL, How are you always so creative with coming up plots?



Author's Response:

Hey girllll! Yes, another story!! :) Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Jun 25, 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I am so damn conflicted, it ain't even funny. I want Tegan to be with Michael; they have a connection that is incredible, but Mike couldn't see that in the beginning; he was so blinded by looks and that made Tegan feel like shit. But Tegan should have used her picture in the first place.

Then there is TJ; he seems so sweet and caring. But I get a sense that him and Tegan don't connect well or a least not like Mike and Tegan. TJ really likes Tegan and he hasn't done anything to steer her wrong, and I don't want Tegan to get hurt.

UUUGGHH!!! Why Annie? You got me all up in my feelings on this situation. LOL 

Awesome chapter honey!!!!



Author's Response:

They are all wrong (except poor and innocent TJ :( ) Well, Tegan needs time to have this connection with TJ. It will either happen or not. Let's see!

Thank YOU for the review Neece :D

Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Jun 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

To be honest, I have no words. I aammm....speechless; that how this story makes me feeelll!!!!! LOL. 

Fantastic chapter Annie!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOOOOOL! you're so cute! Thank you for the review :D

Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Jun 19, 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

SMDH. Their relationship is o screwed up; it's sad. We all know that at least one person is gonna get hurt out of this; I just wish no one will. 

To be honest, I have a little hope that Tegan will end up with Michael, but whoever she chooses, I hope she will be happy. 

This is a fucked up situation. I was laughing at that Chris and Mike moment. I see what you did there Annie. LOL

I'm so glad you updated. Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Yes, it doesn't matter the decision Tegan takes someone is going to get hurt unfortunately :(

LOOOL! This skit is too funny, I love it!

Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: May 25, 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

THE TRUTH FINALLY COMES OUT!!!!!!! It's about time, I just wish Tegan would have told him, but that probably wasn't gonna happen.

Poor Michael, he should have been smarter with his decisions, but at least he's realizing that now. Beauty never beats brains. 

I get feeling that this date with TJ is not gonna be what Tegan expected, that can be good or bad. 

I'm so glad you finally updated!!!!! I've been waiting like crazy. Can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Yes! Michael finally knows the truth! Now let's see what he does with it! You're right, beauty never beats brains. And with Tegan he ahs beauty AND brains!

You think it's not going to work with TJ?

The new chapter is online :) Thank you for the review love :D

Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: May 16, 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I'm glad Michael broke up with Mya; I really thought he wouldn't. Now he can move forward.

As nice it is to see TJ and Tegan date, it's more than likely gonna cause drama.

Even though Michael is kinda fucked up, he and Tegan belong together.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!! You're doing wonderful as always Annie.



Author's Response:

We all thought Michael would never find his balls and break up with Mya lol! Indeed, more drmaa will come girl ;) Get ready :D

Thank you for the review :D

Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: May 03, 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh Michael, he doesn't deserve Tegan after the way he's been acting with Mya and Camille. Tegan doesn't need that in her life.

I was so happy when Tegan called out Camille!!!!!!! Tegan didn't let that crazy bitch get to her. Makes me love Tegan more and more.

Poor Tegan, she can never find the right dude, if only she wasn't so blind to TJ making moves on her. But what TJ did at the club, was kinda fucked up. He didn't have to be a asshole to Ri Ri.

Great Chapter Annie, can't wait for the next one. 



Author's Response:

You're right, Tegan needs someone who thinks with his head and cares about personality more than he cares about looks! Tegan is strong, just the way she handled Camille shows it!

LOOL, TJ was just trying to see if the way he hits on girl is problematic or not! Seems like Tegan just don't get it lool!

Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Mar 31, 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Teagan needs to stop being bitter. She brought this upon herself, and now she is paying for it. She shouldn't have used Mya's picture in the first place; Teagan is a beautiful girl and she should of had more self confidence. The comment she made about MJ was rude and uncalled for, I'm not saying she needs to beg on her knees for his forgiveness, but she needs to be nicer to him. 


What Mya did was cruel. You never do that to your best friend out of spite. When Teagan finds out, I hope Mya gets her ass handed to her. 


You can't expect MJ to see through both girls right away. When he saw Mya for the first time, he was in awe because he recognized her from the profile; I believe that he was happy that she actually a real person. If Teagan used her picture, she would of got the same reaction from him; I don't think Michael is that shallow to choose Mya over Teagan if Teagan used her picture, but hey, you can never be sure. If Teagan shows more of her personality to Michael, I think he will start to put two and two together, but Teagan is being cold, so I understand why he is reluctant to be friends with her.


Annie you are doing great as always!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I agree that all of this is happening because Tegan did not use her picture online and didn't tell the truth to Michael when she realized he was the man she was talking to online. And Mya is guilty because she is still omiting to Michael she isn't the girl he talked online to! They are both wrong!

I agree when you say Michael likes Mya because she exists lol! Michael is not shallow. And it's not like Tegan is actually giving him a chance to get to know her. She is cold and distant, no wonder why he likes Mya better!

Thank you  for the review Neece :)

Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Apr 27, 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I LOVE TEGAN!!!!!!! 

Mya needs to great ass whoopin.

Someone needs to slap some sense into Michael.

Tegan should go out with TJ, she deserves spme happiness from a guy. I'm still rooting for MJ and Tegan, but Michael needs to drop that self-centered bitch!!!!!

Annie, you never cease to amaze me, Can't wait for the next chapter.

 



Author's Response:

I agree, she needs a ass whooping lool! And Michael too!thank you for the review Neece :)