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Burn by PeaceShanice Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 88]
Summary:

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This passion burns inside of me.

Burn is loosely based on the songs ‘In the Closet’ and ‘She Drives Me Wild’, true stories and my very active imagination.
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A love story that takes place after a few months after the Bad Tour has ended. 

On her way home from a boring day at work Kayden runs into Dorien, a criminal from her past. John, an old acquaintance, comes to her rescue and is forced to remove his disguise revealing himself as Michael Jackson. Michael has an obvious attraction to Kayden and can barely control himself around her. At first all she wants is friendship, but when a friendly trip to Las Vegas turns sinful, she finds herself in a steamy secret relationship filled with adventures in love and lust.

But like any other couple, they hit a rough patch and just as things are starting to look up, secrets from Kayden’s past threaten to ruin her life and sanity.

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I hope you guys like the new banner !! I finally figured out who I originally used to represent Kayden, so I hope you like it. And thank you guys for the support and positive responses to this fic, I really appreciate it.


Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 70970 Read Count: 14169
[Report This] Published: Jun 01, 2013 Updated: Feb 22, 2016
Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: May 26, 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 | Kadeland

THIS IS FUCKIN' HOT!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

haha just wait for the next chapter

Twenty Foreplay by Annie Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 254]
Summary:

 

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“Never ignore a person who loves you, cares for you, and misses you. Because one day, you might wake up from your sleep and realize that you lost the moon while counting the stars.”

 

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    Her name; Harper. Born in Brazil, raised in France and living in London, Harper’s biggest dream always had been to be a supermodel. Not just a model, a flavor of the month, someone you will forget as soon as a trend ends. No, a supermodel. A face you will remember, a name you won’t be able to dismiss from your mind, a figure you will think of... An icon. Wishing is one thing, but making it real is better. A dream Harper reaches when she received that phone call. She said she would do anything to fulfill her dream, right?

 

 

    His name; Michael. A superstar, the King of Pop, millions of album sold around the world, loved by countless but hate and misunderstood by many. After the allegations, after the rehab, after the civil suit settlement, after the out-of-court settlement what happen? The aftermath. Going on stage every night knowing that the whole world thinks you are a monster. Standing up on front of them with the physical pain that you have knowing that everybody is thinking that you are someone you aren’t. And all he dreamt of was to be loved. A dream Michael reaches when he received that offer. He said he would do anything to fulfill his dream, right?

 

 

Who knew a phone call could change her life? Who knew an offer would change his life?

 

 

     In a world where everything seems to oppose them, a woman and a man will eventually end up together. Not for love, but for their image. To be seen as a man again, to have the fame she thinks she deserves. It is just a joke for them, a publicity stunt, a fake love story, but what happen when one of them get caught up in the game?

 

 

I DEDICATE THIS STORY TO IAM_MUSIC FOR HER SUPPORT SINCE THE BEGINNING OF KISS OF LIFE. Love you girl  ♥


Categories: Lisa Marie Presley: 1994, HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Romance
Characters: Lisa Marie Presley, Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 108922 Read Count: 35876
[Report This] Published: Jul 06, 2013 Updated: Nov 15, 2014
Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Mar 23, 2014 Title: Chapter 37: CHAPTER 37 | Drama

I'm glad you updated on this story!!!!!! I don't understand why Harper is keeping this secret from Michael. It ain't gonna benefit nobody; she is just digging a deeper hole with Michael. She needs to tell him about Ethan. I would be jealous too, if I found out my boyfriend was around a girl he used to fuck with; that's just HUMAN NATURE :) 

Ethan is a mess, He's only after Harper because he's pussy-whipped, the sex was great; If Harper didn't have MJ or someone else, Ethan wouldn't be chasing after her. 

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey Neece! sorry for the late answer! Harper should have told Michael before but I think she honestly thought it didn't matter. But I guess she was wrong!

You're right! Ethan only wants what he can't have!!!

Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Aug 13, 2014 Title: Chapter 41: CHAPTER 41 | Clarification

Oh yeah they definitely need to talk now. Harper could be pregnant? Oh my damn!!! 

These two are something else, i love it. Michael needs to work on his listening skills and not jump to conclusions. Stop throwing a fuckin fit everytime something bad happens.

Ethan can go on somewhere with his cocky ass. You shouldn't be cocky at all if you cant make a woman reach her climax, instead of them faking it.

I'm so glad you updated, I love this story so much!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yup, they need to talk because it's getting ridiculous! and now that Harper might be pregnant, they have to make up. Ethan is just... Whatever! It's not like he is coming back lol! Thank you for the review, the new chapter is here :D

Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Jun 02, 2014 Title: Chapter 40: CHAPTER 40 | Misunderstanding

DDAAAMMMNNN!!!!! I know Mike is angry but he's overreacting. He should have calmed down and let Harper explain instead of fuming; he needs to stop comparing his relationship he had with Lisa to his with Harper; that's unhealthy.

Harper is wrong too; Harper should have at least told him that Ethan and her had a fling in the beginning when she and Mike got together. But Michael shouldn't have overreacted, him and Harper weren't even together then. Michael has nothing to do with her past relationships.

I'm so glad you updated!!!! I love this story so much.



Author's Response:

It wouldn't have hurt to hear Harper's side of her story! But Michael was upset and I could understand. Harper should have known better. And you're right! Michael shouldn't compare these two because Harper actually loves him.

Thank you for the review, the new chapter is here :)

Shades of Truth by Annie Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 325]
Summary:

 

« Ooh child, things are gonna get easier. Ooh child, things will be bright cause truth will set you free »

 

 

In order to write the story of the year about the allegations of 1993, Ava Torres changes her identity to be hired as a maid in Neverland Ranch and gain Michael's trust

 

Betrayal, love, lust and vengeance...


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200579 Read Count: 35034
[Report This] Published: Nov 02, 2013 Updated: Mar 11, 2014
Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Feb 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: CHAPTER I - Ambition

Who's bad?

This is how I feel right now. YOU DOIN WRONG ANNIE. Why you playin me like that, I thought Ava was gonna tell him in the next chapter. You got me on my toes girl. At least Ava said she loves him too. OOOOOHHH....Gurl you are amzing. But she seriously needs to tell him quick before something bad happens. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

HAHAHA! Because I'm bad, you know it! ;)

One step at the time, she tells him she loves him and then... she tells him the truth! You'll have to read the next chapter to see what happens! Thank you for the review :)

Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Mar 11, 2014 Title: Chapter 55: CHAPTER LV - End

AAAAWWWWWW!!!! *wipes tears* That was beautiful. What am I suppose to do with my life now? lol I really enjoyed this story, everything was amazing. Thank you for the shoutout, that was really sweet of you. If only there were more people like Ava, this world would be a better place. She put all those paprazzi and journalist in place. MHMM *snaps fingers*



Author's Response:

Hey Neece :D Aww, you're so adorable lol! Thank you for reviewing often girl! Well, if you don't know what to do with your life, you can still read my other stories lmao!

"If only there were more people like Ava, this world would be a better place."

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Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Jan 13, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: CHAPTER I - Ambition

I love this story!!!!!! You are a wonderful writer. It's weird that Lisa Marie is the other woman; Michael was sleeping with her while she was married? That's fucked up!!! I'm anxious about Michael finding out about Ava's secret though; I mean she's writing the acticle with good intentions, not to bash him; hopefully he won't be too pissed. Anyway this story is great, and please keep updating. God Bless. I will try to review more.



Author's Response:

Hello Neece :) Thak you so much!

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I'm glad you like the story :). I have so many things in store for this story. So get ready to get your mind blown!!

Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Jan 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 44: CHAPTER XLIV - Ireland pt. I

Poor Mikey J. :( This is a messed up situation that Ava is in; the closer she gets to MJ, the more guilter she feels about her sercret and hurting him, and he is in this horrible situation with the Chandlers, HOT DAMN!!!!! You just keep the drama goin, don't ya? hahaha. Anyway, please continue, the story gets better and better.



Author's Response:

Hello Neece! Indeed, Ava is in too deep! But right now she is doing everything in her power to support Michael. The article is not her priority. Thank you for the review, the new chapter is online :D

Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Jan 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 46: CHAPTER XLVI - Ireland pt. III

DDAAAMMNNN!!!! DRAMA, DRAMA DRAMA, everywhere!!!!! When is it gonna get better from this hell they are going through? Ohhhh Annie.....gurl, you are too much. You are so good and so bad. You keep bringing more obstacles into their relationship. Gurl, I applaud your creativity; you should be a published writer, with all the conflics and twists you put into your stories. I read some of your others, and they are amazing. I wonder how this Rael character is gonna play out; I know we ain't seen the last of him. 

Please keep updating, your stories are captivating, I just read Twenty Foreplay, and I love it. Keep updating on that one too.



Author's Response:

 

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Would it be too easy if everything was alright? I love drama, yes :D Thank you for the lovely review, I really appreciate it! You're so sweet!

The new chapter is online :D

Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Jan 27, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: CHAPTER I - Ambition

*tears* *sniffs* *tears* AWWWW poor Ava, it's gonna be harder for her now to tell Mikey J the truth, now that he said he loves her. IT'S. ABOUT. TO. GO. DOWN!!!!!! I wish Mj will go easy on her, but I know he's gonna be furious. I'm glad Michael and his team got Evan's ass; it was very noble of June to come foward with  the tape. Can't wait for the next chapter. *biting nails*

 

 



Author's Response:

:'( It's going to be hard but Ava has to be strong and tell him the truth!

Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Feb 09, 2014 Title: Chapter 50: CHAPTER L - Mistake

AAAWWWWW!!!!! So it finally happened. I wish Michael would have listened to Ava, maybe would have been more understanding. But I get that he felt used and didn't want to listen. I hope Ava can fix this. You are doing great!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey Neece! Yup, Michael knows the truth now! Let's see if Michael can forgive her

Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Feb 19, 2014 Title: Chapter 52: CHAPTER LII - Bittersweet

AAAAWWW!!!!! WWHHHHYYYY!!!!!! *cries* Michael open your eyes and see that Ava loves you dude. She wrote that article to defend you. It was really sweet of him to help her, I just wish he would get her back. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Michael is angry and it's clouding it's judgement :/ He needs time! The new chapter is online :D

Summary:

Hi, I'm WWE Diva AJ Lee.

And I'm best friends with the King of Pop, Michael Jackson. :)

Michael and I have been best friends for years, ever since his time with the Jacksons.

And we love each other dearly, but Michael doesn't know how I feel.

I've been in love with Michael ever since we met, and it's never changed since then.

I haven't told him because I didn't want to ruin our friendship.

And it's worse now.

He's getting married.

To the daughter of Elvis Presley, Lisa Marie Presley.

I know I don't know her much, but I know that she's trouble.

How can I tell Michael how much I love him now?

Thanks to everyone who reads this story. I hope you all love the new banner.


Categories: 1993-1994, Lisa Marie Presley: 1994, HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Song Fics, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Lisa Marie Presley, Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Michael Jackson and AJ Lee Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39750 Read Count: 8954
[Report This] Published: Nov 06, 2013 Updated: Apr 21, 2016
Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Jan 13, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Characters

It's about damn time they kiss. I just wish Michael would divorce Liss already, uuugggghhhh!!!!! Sometimes it pisses me off when Michael is too nice in stories, he doesn't see people's cruelty sometimes. Anyway, this is a great story and I love it.



Author's Response:

I know right! Everyone's been waiting for them to kiss! :D

And yeah, it pisses me off too....

And thanks!! <333

Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Jan 25, 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 20

HAHAHAHA Michael called Lisa a bitch!!!!! That was funny. Lisa has no right to be mad, she's cheating on Michael and doing worse than what Michael did. MJ and Aj are too cute, they need to get together already; they are a bunch of goofballs. Please continue.



Author's Response:

See, Lisa got on Michael's nerves so what was he suppost to say!? XD But yeah, that was funny as hell! Michael was kind of shocked that he said that too! Hahahaha! X3

Yeah, MJ and AJ will be getting together soon! Because I can feel it! :D

And I will continue! <333

Reviewer: neece Signed
Date: Jan 13, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Characters

Layla kinda rubs me the wrong way, I get a bad vibe from her. I don't think she a true friend to AJ, but that's my opinion. She probably is a good friend, but something is off about her to me.



Author's Response:

Yeah, you have a point there. I guess Layla is a kind of friend that's like that. She cares about AJ though. She just likes to mess with her sometimes. Some friends are like that. :)