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Semaj is 17 with big dreams and goals but meeting 21 year old drug dealin', shit talkin', trouble makin', Michael Jackson was not planned. Her life turned a full 360 after the night she met him.

 

Not your average bad boy meets good girl story but see for yourself!

 


Categories: Award Winning, Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Neglect
Series: The Gangsta Lovin' Series
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 238258 Read Count: 62228
[Report This] Published: Sep 07, 2014 Updated: Nov 04, 2015
Reviewer: mickey Signed
Date: Sep 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Confessions Pt. 1

Bout time he admitted it. Love It!!!!!!!

Reviewer: mickey Signed
Date: Dec 15, 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27- Backtracking .....

Thanks for the update!!!  



Author's Response:

You're welcome Mickey! 

Reviewer: mickey Signed
Date: Dec 02, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Brown Eyes

Fasten your seatbelts we are in for a bumpy ride.  I am waiting with bated breath for the *hit to hit the fan when it is revealed that Michael and Semaj are dating.  There is no way Michael is going to back off now that he has opened his heart again.  Maybe he will finally reveal to Semaj how he really feels about her though.  

 

Please don't make us wait too long.  I am checking every 10 minutes like some junky praying for an update.

Reviewer: mickey Signed
Date: Oct 27, 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- She's Different, This Is Different, Different Is Good

I guess we can wait on you. Damn!:)



Author's Response:

I apologize but the chapter is up! 

Reviewer: mickey Signed
Date: Sep 23, 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Word Around Town

That's right Semaj, stick up for your man girl!  Although I have a feeling she will get her little heart broken before it's all said and done.  Too many messy people hanging around and the fact that Semaj is so naive doesn't help.



Author's Response:

We're just going to have to see now aren't we? I have a couple of people saying she might get her heart broken but... just by who will it be broken by? She's around a lot of messy people that is agreed. 

Reviewer: mickey Signed
Date: Nov 04, 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19- Can't Turn A Dog Into A Husband

How cute is that, Michae doing her hair.  

" He gestures to my hair.. "What the hell is going on?" "I'm taking down my hair!" I exclaim offended. "Well put that shit back up."  

I almost spit out my coffee out when I read that.  Having had micro braids I can just imagine what her head looked like.



Author's Response:

Lmfao, a troll dolls head! 

Reviewer: mickey Signed
Date: Sep 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Brown Eyes

I need to have my butt in the bed getting ready for tomorrow but I am so caught up in Michael and Semaj that my eyes are open like a smokers.  Can't wait til the next update. No rush but if you can make that happen by tomorrow I would appreciate it. 



Author's Response:

Awwww! I feel honored that you were staying up to read this. When you wake up girl there will be an update (or two) waiting for you and I hope you enjoy it! I hope to see your name in my reviews more often too. Thanks again! 

Reviewer: mickey Signed
Date: Mar 16, 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42- Twizzler Snatching Thief

"His arm wraps around my waist and he walks behind me while pushing me over to the other side so he’s on the side of the curb."

That's a sign of a good man who protectively places his arm around you and makes sure that you are walking on the inside of the sidewalk and not on the side of the traffic.  

I really like how you are slowly showing the true side of him versus the character that life has forced him to become.  

Can't wait to find out who's playing Stix and how Mike will react to that.

 



Author's Response:

Hola Mickey! 

It's nice to see you pointed that out! I was thinking the same when I wrote that line. Claps for Michael, lol.
Thank you! I'm trying to show you guys a gradual change with Michael's character.
I can't wait for the perfomance chapter of that and the practices. 

Summary:

 

Chivonn's a girl in her mid-twenties working a mediocre job struggling just to get by. Her brother Bryan is a father of two young children is also struggling after his baby mama kicked him out and sliced his paychecks up with child support. The two siblings realize they are better off living together than struggling on their own. Chivonn feels safe with her brother and the living arrangement is working out perfectly....

....until the day Bryan's childhood friend Michael Jackson, gets released from prison and becomes the roommate from hell you just can't get rid of. He's bad, he's dangerous, and often lets his pride get in the way of doing what's right. There are a few good things about him, though. He's got a secret soft spot for children and just so happens to have one of the rawest talents the world will ever see.

 

But will the world get to see it? Or will his talent be wasted... Forever lost to the streets...

award winner


Categories: Award Winning, Adult, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Domestic Abuse, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142404 Read Count: 36878
[Report This] Published: Sep 09, 2014 Updated: Sep 20, 2015
Reviewer: mickey Signed
Date: Mar 26, 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Making Amends

In the words of Scooby Doo "ruh roh."  Can't wait to see what happens next.  I hope Chivonn and Michael's relationship survives his career.



Author's Response:

LOL ruh roh! I'll be updating sooon! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mickey Signed
Date: Oct 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Not Another Tally Mark

I know Michael has to prove himself and get his life together but Chev is really getting on my nerves with all this hot one minute cold the next and jumping to conclusions.  Either you are going to find out what the situation is for yourself and take or chance or listen to your friend. Dog gone it, choose for goodness sake!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Lol I agree with you, its about time Chivonn's feelings settled into one place.

Reviewer: mickey Signed
Date: Dec 30, 2014 Title: Chapter 28: A Possessive Past

I have no words right now.  I really want to hate Michael but I just feel really sorry for him.



Author's Response:

Chivonn probably feels the same way!

Summary:

 

For the past three years, Kerry has excelled in her law career and is known as one of the best attorneys in Los Angeles, but her dedication to the job has made her love life little to nonexistent. What happens when Kerry's older sister tries to set her up with one of her husband's closest friends?

 

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Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Song Fics, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Sexual Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33348 Read Count: 6767
[Report This] Published: Oct 06, 2014 Updated: May 22, 2017
Reviewer: mickey Signed
Date: Oct 06, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: ONE: I Could Believe It

Great job! I think I'm going to enjoy this. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Michael Jackson is an award winning screen writer who has just written a book called Cradle To The Grave.  Though it is published as a work of fiction the subject matter mirrors events in his own life.  He grew up poor in Gary Indiana with his best friends Kenneth Bertrand Grave and Kamaria Bello. As they grew older distance and time eventually made them drift apart.  When Michael reunites with Kamaria it's bitter sweet.  Love lost and found, betrayal, lies, deceit and eventually death steps in to rule the day.  How will Michael cope.  Will he move on with his life or will he be haunted and emotionally trapped forever by his past.

 

This is a story of pure fiction I do not own any images used in the dipiction of this story.  No copyright infringment intended.

award winner   award winner


Categories: Award Winning, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Physical Abuse, Rape, Sexual Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 124143 Read Count: 15332
[Report This] Published: Nov 17, 2014 Updated: Jun 12, 2016
Reviewer: mickey Signed
Date: Jan 20, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Interview...

A very sweet reunion.  Not anticlimatic at all.  Itching to find out what's in the box, can't wait!



Author's Response:

Ahhh thank you I'm glad it didn't come off too slight. As for the box you will get a peek inside come next chapter. Be prepared!!! <333

Reviewer: mickey Signed
Date: Nov 20, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chocolate Pudding And Paint It's All Creative

Wonderful!!!!!  I am really looking forward to the next chapter.   



Author's Response:

Thank you so much I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far.  I will update asap.  <3

Summary:

 

Having left the music business behind after Thriller .  MJ finds himself the head of a multi million dollar art and tattooing empire. On the brink of a return to music and engaged to be married to his girlfriend of four years, everything is finally falling into place…or so he thinks...That is until a new apprentice joins his team and their stories get Inked Over.

"Tattoos are only skin deep,  just like beauty they can fade, but I have her name etched permanently into my heart…"


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64415 Read Count: 8001
[Report This] Published: May 31, 2015 Updated: Feb 07, 2017
Reviewer: mickey Signed
Date: May 11, 2018 Title: Chapter 25: Promises...Will They Keep?

I have finally caught up on this fic.  Now I am just patiently waiting for an update.