Penname: giveintothefire [Contact] Real name: Shy
Member Since: Oct 10, 2011
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hi guys,


I'm just a MJ stan with a goofy/strange sense of humor who loves Michael Jackson. Writing fanfics was never my passion until I was introduced to this site by one of my best friends/twin sister, Maya aka Dreamer (she really is my twin our birthdays are on the same day and we're the same age...we just have different parents lol) But anyway, she and a lot of other writers such as Lavie (delavielove), Drea (MissA1485), Veronica (Shannon) <-she's also the person who introduced me to fanfics) have inspired me to write fan fiction. (<--That wasn't really important but I wanted you all to know.)


Lastly, I want to let everyone know that I love you all. You're beautiful and remember to smile. 


Gender: Female
Age: 21+
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Summary: Past Featured Story
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It's been almost a year since Jessie and Michael's two-year relationship fell apart, and since she walked out of his life. Yet after Michael publicly releases new songs from his Invincible album, blatantly trashing her for thier break-up, she finds herself back at the one place she fled in tears, and back to the one man who broke her heart.

Michael still loves Jessie, wants her back, and will do anything in his power to bring her back home to Neverland. But will thier love be enough? To last through anything?

Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Adult
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 143 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 848855 Read Count: 373284
[Report This] Published: Aug 31, 2010 Updated: Oct 01, 2012
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Date: Oct 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 143: Epilogue

Wow!!! This was alghrlagharlg. It was so well written. Everything happened so fast! lol This chapter just proved that their relationship is stronger than ever. The interviews, the specualtion, the adulation that they expressed for one another, their oneness...I'm just so...I love their relationship so much....the birth of the baby and now twins?!?!?!?! Lawd have mercy! I cannot WAIT until the sequel!!! Ugh. I'm so mind blown right now. I just alsghrflghadlgfhdflghrdlghrflg lol

Summary: Past Featured Story

According to the world, he had just been unveiled as the greatest living superstar to grace this planet. To the world, he was that child prodigy who had sung his way into the hearts of people all across the world. He was that little boy who had the voice of an angel and could move like James Brown. To the world, he was that soft-voiced teenager who could mesmerize an audience like no other. To the world, he was the one who had just released the greatest selling album of all time. He was the one that could walk on the moon. He was all of that and above to a screaming nation of fans that were all just waiting, lurching on his next move.

 

DISCLAIMER: ALL PUBLICLY RECOGNIZABLE CHARACTERS, SETTINGS, ETC. ARE THE PROPERTY OF THEIR RESPECTIVE OWNERS. THE ORIGINAL CHARACTERS AND PLOT ARE THE PROPERTY OF THE OWNER. THE AUTHOR IS IN NO WAY ASSOCIATED WITH THE OWNERS, CREATORS OR PRODUCERS OF ANY MEDIA FRANCHISE. NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT IS INTENDED.


Categories: Romance, Adult, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 75 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 266003 Read Count: 102758
[Report This] Published: Dec 29, 2010 Updated: May 28, 2012
Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed
Date: Dec 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Zelda is such a bitch!



Author's Response:

LOL!!!

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

This was a great chapter. I hope Nessa will be able to help him.



Author's Response:

Thank you! And thank you for reading and reviewing! I truly appreciate it!

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Wow! I can't believe she tried to get back at him by drinking again! And Michael was wrong for doing that to her. He could have at least gave her a warning or something.

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Oh...my...God!!! :/ She left him...gosh I'm over here all teary eyed lol please update soon!



Author's Response:

=/

 

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Oh. My. Gosh!! I can't wait for part 2!!! This was a really good chapter. Vanessa is lucky to have Key as a friend. I'm glad Michael finally came to his senses.



Author's Response:

LOL! Thank you so much!

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

this was freaking awesome!!! it was so worth the wait I just knew that she was gonna say yes and i'm glad that Michael finally fired Frank's ass. ugh i love this story...can't wait for the update

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

You're back! And oh my gosh she's preggers! Why do I have the feeling that Mike is taking drugs?? hmmm...anyway great chapter! I can't wait for more! Please update soon! <3

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Oh shoot! I can't wait to hear what happened. On another note, I'm glad that they got things settled out. Mike should know that Nessa is always going to be there for him no matter what, especially since they have a baby on the way. Great chapter girlie :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

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Date: May 25, 2012 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Ugh! I know that bitch Zelda was up to no good. But I think that the family over in Indiana will accept Vanessa...well at least I hope they will. Anyway, Mike and Nessa do need a get away so they can let go of all the drama. Great chapter hun, update soon <3

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

lol Awww they had to get it in. It was long overdue. I'm glad the Jeff guy didn't recognized Michael though. Great chapter, love.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Arianna and Michael meet and right away they have a spark but what Arianna doesn't know is that Michael has been watching her for a long time and in a way waiting for her. Were they meant to be just friends or something more? Join me in a journey to find out.... 

I LOVE TO READ YOUR COMMENTS AND REVIEWS ON EACH CHAPTER OF MY STORY. IT MOTIVATES ME TO WRITE THE FOLLOWING CHAPTERS SO PLEASE FEEL FREE TO TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK. THANK YOU FOR READING! 

WOW!!! over 1500 Reviews! I never thought I would see that day!. Thank you so much. I am humbled and honored by your love. Thank you for making this story so popular in this website. 

** "WAITING FOR YOU" IS ONLY BEING POSTED BY ME ON MJFICTION IF YOU SEE THIS STORY ANYWHERE ELSE, IS NOT ME THEN IT HAS BEEN STOLEN. THANKS FOR THE SUPPORT!! 

 

Official Waiting For You Promoter: AMALuvzMJ

 

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Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, Lisa Marie Presley: 1994, HIStory: 1995-1999, This Is It: 2006-2009, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Lisa Marie Presley, Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 178 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 850299 Read Count: 255622
[Report This] Published: Mar 10, 2011 Updated: Feb 09, 2017
Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69 - You Give Love A Bad Name.....

Yay! Ari finally wants him to knock her up lol They're so cute. I hope that the positive pregnancy test was correct. Mike shouldn't have drank so much at the after party. I hope he doesn't end up doing anything stupid & falling into Lisa's plan.

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Date: Jun 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68 - Seal it with a kiss....

Ugh Sandra is starting to act like Lisa. Those two woman just need a good ass whooping & then everything will be ok. I knew that River had feeling for Ari. I don't understand how she couldn't have seen that coming. As for Mike! bruh you need to step your game up & tell the public about you & Ari's relationship for real now.

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Date: Jun 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70 - Eaten alive...

UGH!!!! iugibvkdfguvueuxcuevureuvu I just can't I'm done! I am done! What the actual fuck?! Ohhhhhhhhh I wanna knock the lights out of Sandra. And why was Bill not there with Michael to take him home so that none of this could have happened in the first place?!

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Date: Dec 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150 - What about your friends?....

Ok first off, this was a great chapter!  Smh at Mike telling Ari that she was a little thicker lol He messed up. And oh my gawd! The relationship between Toni and her mother :( I mean but it's understandable as to why she would help her mom. I mean, it IS her mother. You can't help but to have a soft spot when it comes to your mom no matter how wrongly she may have treated you. I'm just glad that Michael and Ari were understanding and were willing to help her.

"I heard her talking to her mother on the phone. She was talking about taking money to her and her time in jail. Also, I don't know if you have noticed but she and Michael seem awfully close, don't you think?"

"I'm sure you misheard Toni's conversation and Michael teases everyone, you know that!" I shrugged it off with a chuckle.

"It's more than the teasing but hey, what do I know? I'm just the nanny" she said. "Just thought you should know"

Grace! WE ARE NOT HERE FOR YOU! Idk how many times I have to say that! Always trying to start some trouble. Her little ratchet self was mad after she say Michael and Arianna's reaction. And I'm glad that Ari didn't fall for her little scheme either. Ehhh I can't stand her! 

"That and because no one dared to talk to her when we were children. She used to walk around with this huge bubble coat that made her look headless. She scared a lot of children that way" <---this hand be cutting up!!!

She looked up and stood quiet. Too quiet so I knew she knew she was caught. But then she began playing with the collar of my shirt and said in a low voice "What I meant to ask was do you want sex? I could give you a lot of nights of burning, passion, love making" she then kiss me softly before sucking on my bottom lip seductively but oh, too guilty. "Or if you prefer it rough, I could that too"

"Arianna..." I dragged her name and she laughed.

lol she ain't slick.

"I'm sorry, baby" she said a soft, childlike voice as she reached to kiss me again. I let her kiss me before I added "Yeah, you are going to be sorry. Once the doctor gives you the ok...." I got close to her face. "I expect those promised nights. I'm gonna punish you good"

She smiled and said "I can't wait" before we kissed.

Ohhhh Mike and Ari are some freeaakks lol And noooo! Not Jimmy checking out another girl! I feel like drama is on the way. 

And did you purposely use TLC at the beginning and later mentioning Usher dating Chilli b/c if not that's an epic coincidence lol

Anyway, loved the update! Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Awww thanks Shy!! And yes, MJ is so clueless sometimes lol and Toni had a rough childhood but she's ina good place now. She's strong.

"You can't help but to have a soft spot when it comes to your mom no matter how wrongly she may have treated you" <---You're right about that.

Grace tsk tsk I have nothing to say about her.

"That and because no one dared to talk to her when we were children. She used to walk around with this huge bubble coat that made her look headless. She scared a lot of children that way" <---this hand be cutting up!!! <---- I used to tease my friend this way. LOL. SHe had a huge Northface bubble coat that she used to wear with her huge tims in the early 2000s, the same one I told you about who I go to the gym with and I used to say that about her. But she knows I love her. She used to laugh...I was so mean to her LOL

LMAO Arianna did try, she ain't slick tho but she got Bon Jovi to play at her party and MJ got the sex so they are both even XD

LMAO at the Mr. Bean gif yes they are some freaks LOL

I chose the song at the end tbh. I had another song in mind about friendship and while I was editing the chapter, I was listening to TLC and noticed I mentioned Chilli, remembered the song "What about your friends?" which I love and then boom, it was the song for the chapter. My brain works in mysterious ways LOL

Thanks Shy xoxo