Penname: giveintothefire [Contact] Real name: Shy
Member Since: Oct 10, 2011
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hi guys,


I'm just a MJ stan with a goofy/strange sense of humor who loves Michael Jackson. Writing fanfics was never my passion until I was introduced to this site by one of my best friends/twin sister, Maya aka Dreamer (she really is my twin our birthdays are on the same day and we're the same age...we just have different parents lol) But anyway, she and a lot of other writers such as Lavie (delavielove), Drea (MissA1485), Veronica (Shannon) <-she's also the person who introduced me to fanfics) have inspired me to write fan fiction. (<--That wasn't really important but I wanted you all to know.)


Lastly, I want to let everyone know that I love you all. You're beautiful and remember to smile. 


Gender: Female
Age: 21+
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Summary:

A Fictionalized Biographical Love Story

Disclaimer: This story is based on some true events. 

Michael meets a dancer and a 22 year love affair begins; but its not the typical happy romance.

                                                  ********NEW CHAPTER 2017******

Included Author's Note and Special Thanks at end.


Categories: Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Domestic Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 127 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 386192 Read Count: 128149
[Report This] Published: Aug 25, 2010 Updated: Mar 03, 2019
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Date: Apr 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 60: The School Issue

Michelle is tripping! I don't understand why she was mad because she brought it on herself. Michael was just getting her back. She should have known that. Now she knows how he feels about her and Ralph because she feels the same way (maybe even worse) with him and Tatiana.

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Date: Apr 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 56: PART FOUR

they're just so cute together...they were meant for each other after all of the drama that they've gone through

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Date: Apr 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 55: The Conversation

it's about time! they're inseparable!

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Date: Apr 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 49: A One Night Stand

They definitely have something going on. I can't believe that Michelle cheated lol She might as well go ahead and break up with Martino because her love for Michael will always strong. 

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Date: Apr 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 39: The Other Woman

this chapter was great...but let me guess the Shena was really Shana Magatal (or however you spell her last name)? I know that you probably won't answer lol



Author's Response:

Yes, it was Shana. For personal reasons I didn't put her 'actual' name in the story; but you figured it out anyway. That was my sercet plan. lol  good job!   :)

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Date: Apr 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: The Pregnancy

aww this chapter is beautiful. Michael is so cute when it comes to babies.

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Date: Apr 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 80: The Baptism Thing

oh my goodness! They're always breaking up! Michael shouldn't have gotten so angry over something like that because it wasn't that serious.

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Date: Apr 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 74: Waiting

Michael is so cute with his excitement lol but I think he was a bit too excited about the baby.

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Date: Apr 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Two Weddings

Maurice is an instigator! He knows what he's doing

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Date: Apr 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Jordie Chandler

I can see why Michelle felt that way. I mean I would too if Michael constantly asked for me to stay but never actually stayed with me.

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Date: Apr 08, 2012 Title: Michael: Magic, Madness, The Untold Story

dang...Michael just had to call when Michelle was trying to move on. I couldn't be in her shoes. Its just way too much emotional drama with Michael.

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Date: Mar 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Baby Be Mine

that was sweet of Michael...he's so understanding

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Date: Apr 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Letting Go

This was bittersweet. Its sad that it took her grandmother dying to get Michael & Michelle to come to their senses but she got her dying wish.

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Date: Apr 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Prince

wow...drama to the max! It all started with the Grammys', Prince & Tati smh I can't believe that Prince did that. I think that he knew exactly what he was doing because he knew that Michelle was in a relationship with Michael. I also think that Michael should have at least listened to Mitch before he fired him. Michelle was wrong for not telling Mike about the birth control when she knew that he wanted to hve kids. Anyway this was a great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! It was one of my favorite to write. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.  :)

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Date: Mar 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Dream Come True?

wow...I would have been upset too if I were her. That happened way too fast...& fast relationships like that usually go downhill