Penname: giveintothefire [Contact] Real name: Shy
Member Since: Oct 10, 2011
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hi guys,


I'm just a MJ stan with a goofy/strange sense of humor who loves Michael Jackson. Writing fanfics was never my passion until I was introduced to this site by one of my best friends/twin sister, Maya aka Dreamer (she really is my twin our birthdays are on the same day and we're the same age...we just have different parents lol) But anyway, she and a lot of other writers such as Lavie (delavielove), Drea (MissA1485), Veronica (Shannon) <-she's also the person who introduced me to fanfics) have inspired me to write fan fiction. (<--That wasn't really important but I wanted you all to know.)


Lastly, I want to let everyone know that I love you all. You're beautiful and remember to smile. 


Gender: Female
Age: 21+
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Summary:

A Fictionalized Biographical Love Story

Disclaimer: This story is based on some true events. 

Michael meets a dancer and a 22 year love affair begins; but its not the typical happy romance.

                                                  ********NEW CHAPTER 2017******

MICHAEL:HIS VERSION IS UP NOW!!!

Included Author's Note and Special Thanks at end.


Categories: Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Domestic Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 127 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 384703 Read Count: 119346
[Report This] Published: Aug 25, 2010 Updated: Mar 03, 2019
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Date: Apr 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: The Reemergence of Tatiyana Thumbzten

dang...Michael was wrong for that but that's a bit much for Michelle to act like that over a 6 second kiss...but then again I would be angry too because of what happened before the show & the things that Tatiana said.

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Date: Apr 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Prince

wow...drama to the max! It all started with the Grammys', Prince & Tati smh I can't believe that Prince did that. I think that he knew exactly what he was doing because he knew that Michelle was in a relationship with Michael. I also think that Michael should have at least listened to Mitch before he fired him. Michelle was wrong for not telling Mike about the birth control when she knew that he wanted to hve kids. Anyway this was a great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! It was one of my favorite to write. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.  :)

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Date: Apr 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Letting Go

This was bittersweet. Its sad that it took her grandmother dying to get Michael & Michelle to come to their senses but she got her dying wish.

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Date: Apr 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: The Pregnancy

aww this chapter is beautiful. Michael is so cute when it comes to babies.

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Date: Apr 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Laya Johnson

Maurice is an ass. He shouldn't even be getting upset about Mike helping out with Layla because he's barely even there. He didn't really even act as if he wanted to be a dad in the first place so he needs to quit trippin.

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Date: Apr 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 39: The Other Woman

this chapter was great...but let me guess the Shena was really Shana Magatal (or however you spell her last name)? I know that you probably won't answer lol



Author's Response:

Yes, it was Shana. For personal reasons I didn't put her 'actual' name in the story; but you figured it out anyway. That was my sercet plan. lol  good job!   :)

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Date: Apr 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 49: A One Night Stand

They definitely have something going on. I can't believe that Michelle cheated lol She might as well go ahead and break up with Martino because her love for Michael will always strong. 

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Date: Apr 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 55: The Conversation

it's about time! they're inseparable!

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Date: Apr 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 56: PART FOUR

they're just so cute together...they were meant for each other after all of the drama that they've gone through

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Date: Apr 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 60: The School Issue

Michelle is tripping! I don't understand why she was mad because she brought it on herself. Michael was just getting her back. She should have known that. Now she knows how he feels about her and Ralph because she feels the same way (maybe even worse) with him and Tatiana.

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Date: Apr 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 63: A New Proposal

oh my goodness! that was a roller coaser! Michael's propoal was so sweet! I knew that they were going to get engaged sooner or later...but I can't help but to wonder about the boutique...

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Date: Apr 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 70: The Plastic Surgery Issue

wow I can't believe that he was so upset...Michelle was actually sticking up for him & he just got mad over a question smh...I hope they work it out soon

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Date: Apr 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 94: The Approach

I think that they both are wrong. Michelle was wrong for what she said but Michael should have known that she didn't mean it. Plus, Michael was also wrong from cutting Laya off completely and not allowing Michelle to see Blanket. AND I think that it was pretty bold o his lawyers to ask her to testify after Mike cut off of like that. That's so wrong in my eyes because he pretty much dogged her out & turned everyone against her & yet he wants her to help him out. ugh this is just sjvbjgirejvjhgjecurj I cannot with them. They need to get it together.

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Date: Apr 25, 2012 Title: Chapter 123: Author's Note

As you mentioned at the beginning, I also remember what I was doing when I found out the news of Michael's passing away. But I'm really happy that you too out the time to write this story to give everyone a fictional yet a somewhat biographical insight on the real Michael Jackson. :-) 

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Date: Apr 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 114: Beginning of the End

Somehow I knew that Michael's new manager was going to be Tohme Tohme before I even read that part. He was quite strange in my opinion. Anyway, all of this skepticism that Michael has doesn't sound too good. AND old friends just can't seem to stay away from Michelle! lol