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“You didn’t have to get me anything, Michael. This must have cost a fortune,” I smiled as I brought my hand up to the diamond choker around my neck, my fingertips brushing against the precious stones.

He grinned and leaned back against the headboard, aimlessly brushing my tresses off my shoulders, “I just wanted to get you something special.” His hand trailed down from my shoulder to my arm and then to my hand resting on the satin sheets. His skin was warm, but I instantly stiffened as the metal ghosted over my skin.

I ignored it and looked up at him through my eyelashes, my cheeks rosy, “You make me feel special just by the way you look at me.”  It was true, more than he’d ever know. With him, I felt like I mattered. That I wasn’t a complete failure.

 

I also could pretend that he wasn’t married.

 


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Lisa Marie Presley: 1994, HIStory: 1995-1999
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Attempted Suicide, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77909 Read Count: 23858
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2015 Updated: Feb 02, 2017
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Date: Jul 28, 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18-If We

Trai's a good guy. Forreal, forreal. I'm digging him, but I gotta say that I'm not with Michael right now. And Dee, she's tripping. I couldn't be that cool after a man I've been screwing around with just treats me like whatever. I wouldn't be able to decipher his true emotions, ya know. Yes, he's excited about the child but what about her? Know what I mean? Dee better take her heart off her sleeve, because I feel like Michael's gonna hurt even more. 



Author's Response:

Isn't he wonderful? Stark contrast to Michael and maybe that is because he's a married man >.>

And you know it might look like Dee is being cool with it, but I think deep inside she's super angry and hurt. She has issues expressing herself to Michael. Considering how he usually acts...hopefully as time goes on she will get better with that.

And right, its hard to tell where his head is at. 

And yes! Dee's really got to toughen up and prepare for the worst, cause Michael definitely can bring the worst

Thanks so much for your review!

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Date: Jul 30, 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19-The Worst

John Branca?! He's gonna try and take that baby away from her?!

Isn't he?

*faints*

 



Author's Response:

omg no fainting!  D;

and who knows what this meeting is about, we'll just have to wait and see!

<3

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Date: Aug 03, 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20-Actions and Reactions

Trai to the rescue!!! She needs that man. Leave Michael in the dust. So, he knew Dominique before Lisa? Or did Michael mess around with them both at the same time then ran off to marry Lisa? That still isn't clear to me, unless I missed it.

 

Can we get some more Michael? ;)



Author's Response:

He definitely was seeing both of them at the same time. I'm using about the same timeline in reality. There will be more deets on that later.

And of course you can <3 He's coming back next chapter <3

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Date: Aug 09, 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21-Seven

Seven months....

Bitch. Boo. Bye.

I don't have time.



Author's Response:

Michael: 

 

Me:

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Date: Aug 22, 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25-Truth Is..

I can't say it enough, how much of a good man Trai is. Not many brothers would stick around, but then again they are just "friends." For how long though?  

IDK why but I feel like MJ probably has someone watching Dee. Not because he thinks she's found someone else, but because he misses her ya know and she's carrying his child. If that's the case, what if they saw Trai?! 

 

Oh god! I'm getting ahead of myself hahaha. 

Anyway, great chapter chica. Seriously, I'm enjoying the hell outta this story.

 



Author's Response:

Yes Trai is a really really good man. And Ikr, it took everything for him to hold back and not give in to her.

And wow that it is a thought and considering its Michael, I wouldn't be surprised. If Michael ever found out about Trai...and how close they are? Man he would have a fit.

Thank you so much girl and I feel the same way about your story!

<3

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Date: Sep 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26-Truth Is..Part II

C'mon Mike, no one wants you homie. Okay, wait, that's a lie. We all want Michael. Haha, but seriously Dee shouldn't allow Michael to just do as he pleases. I know he's the father of her child, but still. He's done to Dee and he's still hurting her, calling her when he's beside his wife. Has it not gotten through his head yet? Seriously. And Trai...Dee's gon mess around and push him away. Forreal forreal. 



Author's Response:

Michael really needs to get it together and let's hope he doesn't plan on using the baby as a bargining chip to get Dee right back under his thumb!

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Date: Oct 14, 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32-She's Just A Lover (Michael's POV)

I don't really know how to feel with this whole situation. More than anything, he seems so selfish. Why drag someone in a situation like that? Ya know. It's just, wrong. It's partially Dee's fault too but still...be the bigger person and stop it. Instead he continued it knowing we're Dee was heading emotionally. 

At this point, I honestly can't tell if he's feeling are genuine. 



Author's Response:

Dreamer! Long time no see! Thanks for your review and I agree that  he should've done the right thing and end it, even if it was hard.

And back then, it was definitely hard to tell if he was being honest

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Date: Oct 27, 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34-Doubt..Part I

Yeaaaaa!!! You go Trai! He ain't having none of Michael's shit. :)



Author's Response:

YAS.