Reviews For The Assistant
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Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2010 12:22 am Title: The Game Of Who's Who

Omg omg omg thats sooo cute,awwwww. Looove it.. Very sweet..

Author's Response: thanks i hope you like the next chapter keep on reviewing i love to read them

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Date: Jul 28, 2010 03:06 am Title: The Family Disgrace

Damn her mom is evil, wonder how things are going to work with Michael.. Keep writing ur doing good.

Reviewer: Ceannxxx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2010 12:25 am Title: Who's Your Daddy

"Goodnight Carola daddy loves you."

Awwwww(:

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Date: Jul 27, 2010 02:25 pm Title: The Surprise of her life

Wow michael really does care about her and the babys... I really like the story.. Keep it going..

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Date: Jul 27, 2010 02:21 pm Title: Who's Your Daddy

Can I say something? Ok well this chapter made me cry a lil, ill admit it.. Omg wow this is such a touching chaper soo sweet and loving.. I could imagine michael being like this.. Love it.. Keep writing your doing good..

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much your response means so much to me!!!!!

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Date: Jul 27, 2010 04:42 am Title: The Big Surprise

Awww his gonna help her take care of the baby thats soo sweet..

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Date: Jul 27, 2010 04:11 am Title: The Kiss

wow I really like it, its really cute.

Reviewer: Ceannxxx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2010 10:58 pm Title: The Assistant

This is good (:

Reviewer: Lovelymi95 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2010 08:25 pm Title: The Assistant

Please continue I love this story already...... I love how you convey Marisol as a girl who is concious of her self image as is a lot of woman in reality... Please Oh Please continue...

Author's Response: Oh my gosh thank you so much. I'm so glad you like it. I'll try to update probably tomorrow

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