[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2011 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 17
Omg! I just thought of something: maybe Mike and Stephan can end up in a fight over Hallie someday ;o
x'D That would be awesome!!! xD
[Report This]Date: Nov 13, 2011 03:44 am Title: Chapter 17
Yeah Mike really should make up his mind.
If he doesn't wanna lose her he's gonna have to hurry and get into action now!
Woot! Go Hallie! She did good and left Mike with some serious thinkin to do..
I knew that Stephan-guy would do the trick. He was SO jealous!
In your FACE, playboy! lol. playin Hallie like that, how dare he?
I just hope that once they finally get together, he'll finally have it in his heart to respect her, unlike his many hoez..
He better know this girl is a keeper and if he doesn't realize it now,, I'm sure Stephan will, hhaha.
Hopin you'll have writing time tomorrow too cause I HATE waiting for updates girl. It's torture xD
Lovin this x
[Report This]Date: Nov 12, 2011 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter. Love the Stephan twist. :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 12, 2011 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 17
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I loved it michael needs to make up his mind does he want hallie or not
Date: Nov 08, 2011 01:17 am Title: Chapter 16
Ohhh yessss! I agree with xMOONWALKERx here...
She should bring a guy over to fool around with and just see how Mike reacts to THAT. Not have sex though, she doesn't wanna act like a total tramp and get STD xD
Hey, perhaps she'll run into that charming guy from the party again?? I just KNOW that Mike was jealous of him and that's why he claimed to be 'angry at some people' and have walked away from Hallie afterwards.
I bet that's what it was. Yeah, she defntly has to run into this guy. It'd be like faith.. x'D
Please update soon? x
Date: Nov 07, 2011 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 16
this was a great chapter i liked it michael always have some type of groupie over like wtf when will he start to like halie becuz he does like her he just an asshole an dnt wanna give up his many hoes cnt wait for more please update soon
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2011 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 16
She needs a guy!!! She needs to bring a guy over and idk maybe not have sex but like kiss and fool around like have a good time... It's no fair how Michael ulis always with girls and fooling around and she may has to so there and take it.. We know mike likes her and for him to do that is jerky of him.. She should do the same but not get hurt.
She should Have some fun in the room too and chill with guys who are attracted to her let Mike see that and have to take it..
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2011 02:58 am Title: Chapter 16
Aaaannd the asshole's back... :/
Too bad he didn't change one bit even after it kinda appeared that way.
Although, Halle said he seemes to really like this one..How strange!
Maybe that's why she's jealous. Halle thinks she likes him but I'm pretty sure she just feels attracted to him and is confused by his constant moodswings.
I mean come on! I would totally HATE it to find someone as gorgeous as Mike fooling around with a girl after he kissed me once and acted nicely to me every once in a while too, but for her to actually like him? She really shouldn't , for her own good!
Again, I totally understand if she does tho!! I just hope she'll protect herself cause Mike's a dangerous one indeed.
The last thing she needs is a guy playing her both physically & mentally.
Can't wait for an update to see where it all leads, girl. Thank you ;D
[Report This]Date: Nov 06, 2011 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 16
I think shes starting to fall for him. Its sad that michael doesnt see her that way. I cant wait for the next chapter continue
Date: Oct 29, 2011 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww no update? Missing you already hun! xxx
Author's Response:
So sorry about this! We're almost done with this ridiculous book in English so I'll quite possibly update tomorrow. I'm terribly sorry for this, I hate saying one thing and pretty much going back on my words.:(
[Report This]Date: Oct 24, 2011 04:01 am Title: Chapter 15
Damn you Michael Joe! It's so damn hard to just simply keep on hating him sometimes x'D
Really I did not see this coming from him but it rly was a pleasant surprise!
I sure am with Hallie on hoping that he won't turn back into that same ol' asshole all over again after this....
That was actually...dare I say it x'DD, kinda very sweet of him....
Lol. Great update hun!! Can't wait till friday, no joke!!
And of course - Good luck in school! xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 24, 2011 12:39 am Title: Chapter 15
Good luck. Aww michael be a sweetheart instead of being a ass. Cant wait for the next chapter continue
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2011 11:09 am Title: Chapter 14
I fell in love with this story so amazing......Michael needs to get his priority straight or he is really going to loose her. They miles well say I LOVE YOU! keep them coming please
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2011 06:52 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh my God! WTH happened? I can't even believe Michael man!
He's officially like the lowest, coldest, cruelest, most heartless assh*le ever!! No joke!
Man this time he went too far. I hate him now. Nothing could make up for what he did to her this time.
He's f*cked up and Hallie just needs to stay away from him for real.
Poor thing! She was lookin all gorgeous for the party and what did he do? Ditch her and leave her to get beat up by a bunch of Barbie-wannabes?
That's just beyond low!
He made her a promise and once again didn't keep it.
He deserves to feel as crappy as Hallie felt bcuz of him. He needs to get severly punished for all the sh*t he put her through.
Boy I wonder if things are ever gonna get better. He'll need a serious attitude-fix for sure!
But as long as he decides it's okay to be an arrogant, heartless jerk, she needs to stay away from him as much as she can!
Phhiiewww, sorry! x'D Just had to get that offa my chest x'D
Damn great update girl!
Lots of drama for sure! Please don't keep us waiting a whole week for the next chapter??
I can't even wait!! Pleassseeee??? x
Date: Oct 22, 2011 03:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Michael is so wrong for doing that, anyways can't wait until next chapter.