[Report This]Date: Dec 30, 2011 07:43 am Title: Chapter 26
UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE???!!!!
Sorry x'D I am desperate and have too much time on my hands this week x'D
Hope you will tho.. xx
Author's Response:
Hahahaha im so sorry! I'll try && update tomorrow (later today actually since its 3:15am -___-) bear with me<33
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2011 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 26
OMG. OMG. O. M. G.
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First off,
This story, is freaking amazing. Love it.
Secondly, Stephan has SOOOOO gotten out of hand. GAH!!!!!
UPDATE SOON!!!
Date: Dec 28, 2011 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 25
Love ur story i hoe stephan isnt in the mix with cosandra
Date: Dec 28, 2011 08:48 am Title: Chapter 26
Poor Hallie, almost raped by this guy disgusting! I hope that Michael take good care of it now.
Cassandra deserves a good punishment!
Great update! [Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2011 06:24 am Title: Chapter 26
Girl I was throwing pillows around the room over here readin this!
You go Mike, Kill the fool! How dare he almost STEAL Hallie's virginity like that?
That's suppose to be Michael's job! Just not in such a cold, rough and respectless way! That disgusting swine!
He got some nerve...I just knew Michael wouldn't let him get away wit it!! Same thing about that Cassandra ****!!
Well, at least now we know for a fact that Michael genuinely cares about my girl Hallie and is a changed man.
I just love these two together! I'm glad he kept his word and stayed with her, until she insisted to go to the bathroom alone.
Which is understandable,,just too bad she'll never be safe without Michael around even for 5 minutes when they're not in their dorm.
I hope Mike is gonna spoil his girl and take good care of her when they get back.
And I hope the next update will be up sooooooon and be a long one like this one! haha
Thank you, Rebecca! You Rock girl xx
Date: Dec 27, 2011 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 26
oh my god poor girl i cant believe stephan i hope michael broke his jaw as for cassandra she better watch out
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2011 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 26
I don't know whether to cheer at how well-written this is or cry for Hallie. Amazing, girl! Amazing. Please update soon
Date: Dec 27, 2011 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 25
Heey new reader, i have been following your story for a while now and i wanted to say soory for not commenting earlier, uum where do i begin. I couldnt stand michael being so mean to here in the beginneng, the only time when he was ating normal towards her was when he was drunk. So good to see they are in a loving relationship now. Cant believe that cassandra is still trying to break michael and hallie apart how pathetic can a person get, again i am so sorry for being a silent reader for waayyy too long but i promise to comment on every update from now on :)
Date: Dec 27, 2011 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 25
Hi, new reader. I read the whole story. I love it. I hope they are not caught in this getaway to the party, but I think Cassandra is up to something to hurt them. Perhaps along with Stephan.
Great story!
Sandra
Date: Dec 27, 2011 09:49 am Title: Chapter 25
Goddammit, best chapter ever. I don't know what was better, the passion between the two of them or Michael's ringtone. Either way, I absolutely cannot WAIT for the next chapter. I love this story, girl and I hope you update this one and Heaven Can Wait. I think they're both adorable stories and some of my favorite on the site. Happy holidays! xoxoxoxo
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2011 08:52 am Title: Chapter 25
YaAAY! I'm sorry if this sounds mean or anything, but I'm glad you have no plans x'D
Can't wait for the next one... Phiew!! Is it hot in here or what?
Hallie and Michael, finally going somewhere...further...
It was juicy alright! Can't wait for it to once not be interrupted so they can actually continue..
And a party? Srsly, Michael? I don't think this is gonna go well...
It's like they're looking for trouble!
You never know when Cassandra or Stephan may strike again.
Oh God.. Girl, I loved the chapter! It was awesome nd rlly HOT!
Thank youu, hoping for the next one sometime tomorrow, hha xx
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2011 03:45 am Title: Chapter 25
impressive chapter and i love reading your story. they getting interrupted again. cant wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2011 03:17 am Title: Chapter 25
LOVELY STORY DEAR!
I ABSOLUTELY LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS CUTE COUPLE!
THEY'RE FIGHTING,THEY'RE SHOUTING,THEY'RE KISSING AND I COULD GO ON AND ON ABOUT THEIR LOVE FOR EACH OTHER!
don't worry,you don't have to excuse for not writing,we're a FAMILY and we understand each other's problems!
YOU did F-A-N-T-A-S-T-I-C!
BRILLIANT!
GREAT!
PERFECT!
MUCH L-O-V-E!
Date: Dec 20, 2011 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ohh girl.. I'm so crazy about this story I just wish there was an update up everyday. *siigh*
But of course thatd be almost impossible ;P
I'm def hoping you'll update soon tho cs I check here every day with my fingers crossed .lol
And I'm lookin forward to them 'consumating' their relationship too.. I bet it's gonna be so worth the wait after all the cr*p theyre goin through!
Just spreadin some love and motivation here for ya x
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2011 04:45 am Title: Chapter 24
Oh Lordie!! I LOVED this chapter, girl!
I loved how possessive nd potective Mike was!! They're the cutest couple ever, I swear!
I rly hope he means it with her too. It seems like it, after all he didn't even notice that stupid blond waitress, but I rly hope he is genuinly a changed man.
And Stephan, back off man! You dog! How dare he slime all over Hallie like that? And even wth Michael right there before him!
He sure got nerve for doin That!You go Michael! Kill the scumback bfore he can hurt your girl in any way!!
lol. I agree with Foolsumflesh; he should totly hook up with Cassandra! They'd make an excellent couple xDDD
Oh girl I'm hoping you'll update soon cause I swear I'm in love with Michael and Hallie like this, you have no idea!
And I was so glad to see you'd already updated!!! YAY!
Can't WAIT for the next one. Again good luck on your exams girl!
And lol @ the 8 pounds of solid chocolate! xDD There ain't no better cure than MJ's music and solid chocolate tho so do your thing xD
Thank youuu xx