Goodness the details. The movie like quality to your chapters is addicting. One cannot help but to feel as if they are right beside the characters.

I can’t wait to see what happens in the next few chapters. I can only hope that Michael’s efforts to help don’t cause problems with the tribes. But places like Africa much too often have these kinds of conflicts.

Amazing job at putting this chapter together, making it as realistic and whole as possible. You must have done crazy research, maybe? It’s incredible. Even the people Amelia comes across while there feel real. So do the tribes.

Well done, honey!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the amazing compliment! I try my best to fill every chapter with incredible detail to give my readers the most enjoyable experiece possible. Thank you for reading and commenting. 

Ahahahaha!! The divinity in motion lines were funny! I started reading them and then I was like...wait...and then I just sang along, LOL!

Ooh, so Michael is fighting his feelings. Welp, let's see how that goes in the next chapter!

That was a very interesting inside into the tribal life. I think it is a great opportunity for Amelia to reflect her own life and upbringing and her role in life in general. I was very concerned to read that the location chosen for the facility Michael plans to build appears to be unstable. I hope Amelia makes the right choices, here and doesn’t end up upsetting Michael. I also hope that Amelia learns from her experiences she is about to make during her stay in this primitive village. The women she is surrounded with are super nie and heartily. They are so very human a straight I sometimes miss in Amelia. She often appeared to be restrained, even awkward at times and definitely not a hands-on person. Hopefully she will learn from these women and grow as a person and become a better and much more warm-hearted person.

Author's Response:

I am glad you thought this chapter was about reflection. That is exactly what I was trying to capture. Thank you for reading and commenting.  <3

I like it! I thought the conversation with Amelia (slow dancing scene) was a little drawn out and tedious, but I did like the detail about MJ being the only "man of color" in the room. "Burning holes" is an accurate feeling when people stare at you intently. Great job with chapter 3!

So sorry I haven’t reviewed, yet. But I will now:
First of all I am very happy to read about the progress Amelia and Michael are making lately in all recent chapters. I looooooovvvvve to read all about these two interacting. With every moment they spend time together you are allowing us to witness how smitten Amelia is and every time one can tell how irresistible and irreplaceable Mike has become to her only she is still in denial and too afraid. There is so much chemistry between these two, the air seems to be electrically charged it is this palpable. Will always love how protective Mike is over Amelia. 😉😊And I loved the cherry picker scene when Mike took Mia for a special kind of flight. I am sure she felt lightheaded and certainly not just because she was high up in the air😉🥰. I loved her candid confession about how much she always misses Michael even if he is only gone for o few minutes. That was nice!!! But her saying back that she loves him, too was to early for Mia, I guess. Can’t wait for the day!!!!!
I also loved the part when you described Michael’s solitude when he was in his hotel room alone after Amelia’s departure. There he was helplessly trying to distract himself by interacting with his fans. I thought it described his state of mind best and also his loneliness and how forlorn he seems to be. Also when Frank came in and was all over the place in regards to Savannah, I enjoyed when Michael’s other persona came forward, showing how passionate and outspoken he can be. Great chapter! What I did not see coming was that 1) Savannah was a virgin ( just like Amelia is) before sleeping with Frank , because she definitely did not cone across like that !!! and 2) that she might be pregnant. 🤭😳WOW , I mean my god not only isn’t she even sure about her feelings towards Frank and secondly her father will probably disown her but before he does so, he will rip off her head😢😱
Loved how Michael gave Frank a peace of his mind. Fantastic

Hey Athy!

I have been away, but BOY do I have some reading to DO because I am BEHIND!!! I WANT to read this story, I've just been all over the place...and I can never seem to sweep myself all the way up from every corner of my life. (literally)

I'll catch up on a few chapters and tell you what I think. 

I saw that second trailer....I had tears in my eyes. It's so...so...heavy. You know? Really moving trailer!!

How are you these days? How's your writing process going? I saw you uploaded recently, so the words must be flowing nicely. Hope to hear from you, Athy!

Starting to get good, for Michael and Mia. Frank and Savannah are about to get a very big surprise!!!

Author's Response:

It is certiantly getting more dramatic! I am so glad you are enjoying this so far. Thank you for reading and commenting. It means a lot to me.