[Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2019 10:16 am Title: Chapter 41 - A sensual symphony
Awesome chapter...I was holding my breath first part then *swooooooon* at the end. Can't wait for the fireworks of the next chapter.
Glad to have you back on here Athy, I love you stories.
Happy Holidays x
[Report This]Date: Dec 26, 2019 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 41 - A sensual symphony
First of all, I understand Michael's frustrations and anger towards Amelia and how he felt hearing her call his name while sleeping but she was delirious and having a really high fever so I don't think she called him name in a romantical sense. I think the fever caused some mixup and that's why she went towards the fire. Michael has to give her some slack! Michael really went out and got some divorce papers ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ awww he was really hurt. That hit Amelia out of left field but it got her to brave up and finally express her true feelings for Michael, just mad it took something like that to do it but I'm so happy she finally did, it made Michael so happy 😀 whew that last paragraph took my breath away.... they love each other so much and they finally got a chance to express a little bit of that love 😉😉
Savannah..... sighs... Frank is drinking because of YOU! he's hurting just like you are hurting. She's being so hardheaded and not thinking straight. Instead of running away and becoming a beard, she should do the right thing and tell that man about his baby. It's not right for her to group frank up with her nasty racist and fascist father.
I hope she in the end makes the right decision.
She's making decisions now purely out of emotions and being afraid of not having her inheritance... she gives too much power to her father. Amelia, it took almost dying to truly see thst you and Michael are made for each other and that Michael truly loves her and she loves him just the same.
I can't wait for chapter 42!! Continue with the great work!!! â¤ï¸
[Report This]Date: Dec 26, 2019 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 41 - A sensual symphony
oh God! They almost got divorced but finally Amelia told him the truth! I can't wait for the next chapter! :3 <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 25, 2019 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 41 - A sensual symphony
Dang, Michael I told you that Mia loves you. You are about to find out how much!!! What someone says in a feverish brain can’t be held against them because they are delirious with the fever!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and comenting. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Have a great holiday season. :)
Date: Dec 25, 2019 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 41 - A sensual symphony
Oohhh damn !
This was a super good chapter ! Absolutely loved it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I am so glad you enjoyed it. Have a great holiday season!
[Report This]Date: Dec 25, 2019 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 41 - A sensual symphony
Merry Christmas darling!!! Whew I need to gather my thoughts and return. This was too much in one chapter 😩😩😩 my emotions are all over the place... just when I thought it was all over... BAM!!! Plot twist 😩😩
Author's Response:
Merry Christmas and Happy new year darling! I am so glad you enjoyed this chapter. I wanted so much to convey true emotions, I am so glad you believe I achieved that. I can't wait for your comment, and your feedback. Thank you so much for enjoying my work and for reading and commenting. It mean's a lot to me.
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[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2019 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 40 - Bleeding fire
Oh my god, I knew this was gonna happen when you wrote about her persisting fever. It’s her fever talking, not Amelia. If things get worse she might even loose her latest memory to be living in the past temporarily in a time when she was still with that prick N. and that would be devastating for Michael. Hopefully you will not let that happen but give poor Mike a break. He so deserves to be happy. Mia needs to heal and be their for Savannah before she makes the mistake to marry Gideon and it is about time she tells Michael that she loves him and only him irreversibly. So, with that being said I am confident that her words mean nothing since they were fever induced only. Again another dramatic chapter. So, since Christmas is coming up, I am hoping for a brighter update next time.
[Report This]Date: Dec 21, 2019 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 40 - Bleeding fire
Nicholas 😡😡😡😡😡
welp Michael's heart just shattered into a million pieces again
why is Nicholas on her mind? This better be the fever/malaria talking 😩😩😩
Michael is so worried about her 🥺🥺
Date: Dec 21, 2019 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 40 - Bleeding fire
Poor Michael 😩
Date: Dec 20, 2019 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 40 - Bleeding fire
Freaking beautiful !
I love the way how you tell a story , so clever !
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2019 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 40 - Bleeding fire
Michael, Mia is delirious right now. With the pain and fever but it’s you she loves but you just don’t know it yet
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2019 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 40 - Bleeding fire
Nooooo!!!! Not that snake again!! >:c it's really getting intense! I love it! :D
Date: Dec 14, 2019 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 1- The Helmsley Hotel
next chapter please!!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 12, 2019 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 39 - A drowning diminuendo
Oh God poor Amelia!
[Report This]Date: Dec 12, 2019 10:30 am Title: Chapter 39 - A drowning diminuendo
What a dramatic turn of events!!! I am so worried. I hope it’s only malaria because it can be cured . And I am so anxious for Amelia to finally tell Michael how irreversibly in love she is with him🥰🥰ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜I want her to tell him so badly. Ugh 😩 It was quite a surprise to find out about Danni’s past. Charles really was a benevolent man. He was so kind and good hearted. I wonder when Frank Cascio will address Savannah about the obvious elephant in the room. They sure have some clearing up to do!!! Am I right to presume that Savannah, Danni and Arianna are currently at Michael’s ranch? I am not quite sure...
Thank goodness Michael moved Amelia to another clinic. It’s essential she gets the best treatment and therapy there is. About your question whether we believe that Nicholas makes another appearance in your story, I suppose that he will, since you kind of suggested that, but I am keeping my fingers crossed that he will not mess with Amelia anymore. He is not a threat. Michael is so much more powerful than this sick dude. So if he does have a small comeback, I hope it will only be for him to see how solid and full of real love Amelia’s and Michael’s relationship is. Once he realizes that he can go his merry way for good and never return.