Date: Mar 19, 2018 02:32 pm Title: My Hero
Hi I like where the story is heading so far but, I wold suggest maybe trying to be a little more specific in you’re fighting as far what exactly is going on, why, etc, etc. I think it might help the readers a little bit because I personally found myself a little confused. Happy readings xo
Thank you for the suggestion♡♡♡
Date: Mar 18, 2018 11:49 pm Title: Wonders...
Is Michael the famous MJ in your story? It doesn’t sound like it going to a regular school and without a word about music . But so far so good... I am curious what is going to happen,how the story will unfold.....
Michael isnt famous...yet lol. He is a regular student and noone knows that he has a musical talent (singing ) and he will eventually become famous♡