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Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2019 01:34 am Title: Prologue

Thank you for your reply and I’m very excited to read about all the good things that you have planned for the story. 😘😘😘

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2019 03:26 pm Title: Don't Let Go

Oh my God, I thought I was dreaming when I noticed another update of yours. I am so happy to see that you’re back with another chapter of your tremendously interesting and intriguing story. And yes indeed it has been havoc being on the Internet, having to read all the bullshit that’s been thrown at him and his fans who defend him. The disgusting, filthy lies now finally seem to fall silent but nonetheless they have been thrown out there for those opportunists and their own agenda. Devastatingly enough too many media outlets picked it up and ate it up like it was the gospel. Fortunately his nephew Taj and his niece Brandy along with thousands of fans have been fighting for his legacy and hopefully they will never stop. I am proud to admit that I am one of them😊But the fight is not over, yet. Though every once in a while you have to enjoy some leisure time and this is when reading a well written story with a good plot is the most perfect distraction from all the evil things that are going on in the world. I was very surprised to read though, that Audrey left although Michael had come around and had asked her to stay, simply because he needs her to stay for his own good and sanity and because he must have realized that it was dumb to send her away when he must feel that she cares about him as much as she does . Scared of being rejected or not it was the right thing to go after her.... to call her and thank god he was smart enough to read between the lines of what Steve leaked .... I must admit though that I don’t like Audrey‘s father‘s attitude towards Michael. I hope he will come around and stop giving Michael a hard time. And I sincerely hope that Audrey will give in and come back on tour with Michael to stay by his side and to be his crutch emotionally and personally and to take care of him and his health issues . I really can’t wait for the next trip and I hope it will be more frequently. 🙏🏿🙏🏿🙏🏿🙏🏿Thank you so much for your effort and time and creativity. Lots of love, Gigi from Germany

Author's Response: Oh yes girl, I totally understand. Reading and writing fanfics have been therapeutical. It offers an escape to the painful reality. I actually wrote two versions of this chapter. One where she stayed and this one that got published. I was really torn but I have to think of the character. Was Audrey the type to deal with this kind of crap? The answer is no. I think I've been quite unfair to her character seeing that her world seemed to only revolve around Michael. That's not her at all which was the reason for her outburst. Michael disrupted her life by forcing her into this tour and she's resentful at first but slowly learned to build trust and be vulnerable with him. Then he messes it up by telling her to leave after all she's been through with him because he doesn't want to return that vulnerability. So that's where it really comes from. Don't worry about her dad lol, he'll come around soon. Thank you again for reading and writing a review! It means a lot and I truly appreciate it. Stay tuned for the next chapter! I have great things planned.

Reviewer: AvengingEndgame19 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2019 03:01 am Title: The Spoiled Brat

I actually love this story! It's really amazing that Audrey doesn't fall for Michael's charm easily like other girls. I really like this the way it is.

Reviewer: Unity4real Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2019 06:19 am Title: Stay With Me

I can definitely feel his pain. Great chapter and story. I can’t wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback!

Reviewer: sray16 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2019 10:56 am Title: I Hate Him!

Gosh, this story is great so far! Becoming Michael’s personal doctor on tour would be a dream back during the eighties and nineties! I can’t to read on and see where the story goes. It’s great to see a story with Michael being sassy and demanding he gets what he wants, because normally Michael is portrayed as being the complete opposite (which is always a bad thing). Great story!

Reviewer: PaigesWorld17 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2019 01:24 pm Title: The Heart Wants What It Wants (Part I)

Aww. This is definitely taking a sweet turn

Reviewer: PaigesWorld17 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2019 11:48 pm Title: The Spoiled Brat

Honestly I wouldn't be surprised if Michael got slapped by a few women in his lifetime. He definitely seems likes he's low-key annoying

Reviewer: PaigesWorld17 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2019 11:30 pm Title: I Hate Him!

I can't wait to see where this one goes 🤣😁

Reviewer: RonjaAlexandra Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2019 12:15 pm Title: The Heart Wants What It Wants (Part I)

Great ‘🏻

Reviewer: RonjaAlexandra Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2019 05:52 am Title: Never Letting Go

Honestly so cheesy but good

Reviewer: bg4200 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2019 06:44 pm Title: Stay With Me

This story is so good! I really like the interactions between Audrey and Michael, and I’m interested to see how they’re gonna deal with Michaels health problems.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed the story! Stay tuned!

Reviewer: bg4200 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2019 04:54 pm Title: The Heart Wants What It Wants (Part II)

Awww so glad they finally kissed, so cute

Reviewer: bg4200 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2019 09:26 pm Title: Never Letting Go

Awww that ending part with the hand holding was so cute!

Reviewer: Whitney98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2019 02:39 pm Title: Stay With Me

I’m so glad you updated!! I agree there is so much negativity, but we can help spread the truth of MJ. I hope you update soon!!



Author's Response: Yep, trying to be positive and streaming his songs is the best I can do for now. Heck, I bought the vinyls and I don't even have a record player XD Thank you for reading and leaving a review!

Reviewer: bg4200 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2019 01:38 pm Title: Amada

lol I know Tatum bout to bring some drama

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