Date: Dec 30, 2017 08:02 pm Title: I Just Can't Stop...Messing Up
I think Josie is a bit nervous that Michael will be upset that she forgot the words. I am certain he was just looking at the pretty girl she is. After all Michael is a full blooded man!
Looking firward to more
Date: Dec 30, 2017 05:45 pm Title: Dumb Luck
Wow I have to say this is really freakin good seems like you've done your homework.The first few chaptes makes me feel like i'm along for the ride on the 'BAD Tour'.Want more can't wait.
I have to say, I'm so happy you should say this, cause that's exactly what I wanted to achieve with this story. I really wanted to write it as if I was really in it, back in the 80s, experiencing the Bad Tour alongside Michael, and I really want my readers to feel the same way. Thanks for sharing your thoughts! It's always very much appreciated!