[Report This]Date: Aug 26, 2018 05:29 pm Title: XXI
Good to see Eva has Michael and Paul on her side.
Vikram and Daadi...there are no words...smh... perhaps karma will pay those two a visit...especially Vikram...
India is a beautiful country...too bad the men are chauvenists living in the dark ages where women are concerned...smh
look forward to reading how Michael and Paul (and Eva's cousins) help Eva out of this situation...
Author's Response:
at least the poor girl has some good people on her side including the jackson clan too. those two are consumed by their own self credit and control over everything that karma will be sweet when it happens tsk don't worry it's coming eventually lol. Yes I agree India is gorgeous but how men treat their wives in the 21st country is sad and digusting tsk. Thanks Mary <3
[Report This]Date: Aug 14, 2018 10:16 am Title: XXI
Yikes I do feel bad for Eva. Paul and Michael found out about what's happening to her which is essentially a good thing because now they know that Vikram is a dangerous af man - not that kind of dangerous, which we like, the bad kind (and now I've unintentionally made a pun out of TWO MJ songs...or is it albums?) - anyway, they know so they won't let this wedding go ahead. No way. I know they will do what they can to save Eva.
"I- I rather see you living because I care for you too much" Eva blurted out nervously staring into his russet coloured eyes.
"You care for me that much? Even with all the mean things you say?" Michael teased.
"Stop ruining the moment! I'm serious" Eva huffed to him with a roll of her eyes trying to get back to the topic.
^ love love love.
O M G. I can't believe Paul betted on when they'd kiss for the first time! LMAO. The kiss was soooo sweet, really well-written and I know you're a little shy when it comes to these things but it was great, Lorry! Aw I'm glad Eva was able to experience such a spcial and memorable moment amidst all of this marriage/Vikram bs. Legit. She deserves to be happy fam she's so young got a whole future which she could possibly spend with Michael. The ending was hard to read...Eva's like a puppet. I mean, being physically harmful is one thing, but being sexually abusive is another and I'm legit just fearing for her life at this point because it's so baddd and she's not even married to him yet man! Messy now but I'm sure it'll be cleaned up. Wonderful as always, Lorry! Update soon. <3
Author's Response:
I agree that its good Mike and Paul know now that Vikram is no good for her and is a dangerous man sigh you had to bring in the puns onion lmao and of course those two brilliant minded friends will find someway to get her out of this situation. Paul somehow is always loosing his cash either way he has enough to last him a long time so a small dent in his bank account won't effect him lool. poor girl deserves to have a live without that pervert Vikram in her life and be with Michael who can show her a new whole world (Catch that refernce from one disney film hmm? lool). something will be done Onion! thank you for all the encouraging words as always <3
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2018 02:57 am Title: XXI
Gotta love Paul lol
Poor Eva tho she deserves so much better than Vikram
Yes auntie J is right Michael is smitten
Lol Paul and auntie J are too funny
Aww Michael and Eva are too cute and OMG finally they kissed
They made bets really? Lol
Smh Riya and Vikram are a perfect match for each other both of them are ugh
Ugh I can't stand the creep aka Vikram
Author's Response:
Paul never gets his way when it comes to the jackson clan when betting with money or not lool of course he and his favourite woman love to tease poor mike and eva about their feelings lol. Yay they finally kissed phew it took a while but we got there lool. Vik needs to jump on the sun train heading to the sun and daadi can get on too smh but we shall how things play out.
thanks pea <3