Reviews For The Merman
Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed 
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Date: Jan 25, 2014 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2014 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Neat! Very awesome, as well as very well-written, too. I like this story so far... :) And I can see why you were inspired by the Disney film The Little Mermaid to write this as well. :)
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally beautiful writing! :)
Reviewer: 4ever Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2011 02:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: Jul 11, 2011 02:19 am Title: Chapter 1
its sounds great cant wait till theres action... :)
Reviewer: Sweetdreams345 Signed 
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Date: Jul 09, 2011 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2011 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! That is some of the best detail in a chapter I've ever read! It wasn't too much and it wasn't too little, it was that right amount! And now I can't wait to see what happens next!!! xD
Reviewer: DontStopTillYouGetEnough Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2011 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2011 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was really interesting :)
But like I said, I don't consider myself a good writer and can't write as well as you do...