Date: May 16, 2018 12:11 am Title: XXIII: michael.
Oh my holy Macaroni
Now I have to tell you how happy and excited I was for this update!
I'm so glad I decided to check in this morning, the chapter was so perfect.
I really like how you gave Brooke this kind of opportunity for redemption so to say, because I always see these very...unkind comments about her in the fandom, which I can understand to some degree after what she did. I'm glad that you put her in a supportive, human position. But again, as I said that's what I love about your style, the realistic approach.
Epiphany sums Michael's decision up really well if you ask me, realizing that you made a mistake is complicated and it takes so much confidence to act on it.
Which only makes it harder now that Mike heard about Isa's decision. I swear to god I did not expect that she would give April a chance, even though I should have!
I'm so so so excited for what he will do now, if he will go to New York and see her or if this will crush his confidence. And more importantly what is Isa thinking right now? Is April even happy with how things are going? What do the others think about this whole situation?
I'll be here to read it for sure :D
I think we'll be both preoccupied with Netfilx tho, can't forget the 5 shows I'm binging atm
So my best wishes to you, and I'm glad that I could make you so happy with my last review by the way!
Sending lots of love!
Date: May 14, 2018 07:40 am Title: XXIII: michael.
OMG what a mess!
Michael needs to grow a set of balls in this story. Seriously. If he just told Isa the truth in the first place none of this would be happening. I think his excuse for letting April blackmail him for so long is weak and pathetic. Initially I get it but Isa was/is his best friend surely he could have told her sooner. He needs to do something to let Isa know April can't be trusted. If anything I hope it strengthens his resolve to tell Isa the truth.