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Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2018 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 64

Richard sounds like Joseph...but at least Richard came to the wedding. Hope he won't cause problems for Michael and Ariel in the future.

I always love Jamy and Jayson. LOL Little Jamy is a girl who knows what she wants LOL.

"Ariel EAT baby?" Too cute...sounds like Jamy and Ariel will be having the 'how did baby get in Ariel's tummy' discussion pretty soon...lol

Looking forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

He does doesn't He? 

 

Yes she's a lol diva lol 

 

 

 

Lol  

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2018 11:34 am Title: Chapter 63

I'm imagining Michael thinking "T.M.I. to John and Sally's 'handcuff fantasy discussion...LOL.

Two boys, and a girl...Jayson and his sister will both have little cousins to play with :)

Author's Response:

Lol yes 

 

Yes :)

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2018 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 62

I'm imagining these 'threesome' conversations...lol

"Ugh...need to wash my eyeballs with bleach..." that was funny. Sounds like John got a little tmi at that point. LOL.

Author's Response:

Lol 

 

 

Yes he got a lil tmi there lol 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2017 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 61

lol...Sally and John's discussion about blank and red pram colors as opposed to pink and purple...

How lucky to have Michael and his creative talents living right across the street :D... lol

Author's Response:

Lol it's important to pick the colors right lol 

 

Ikr? Lol

 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2017 09:07 am Title: Chapter 60

Hm...Richard's attitude toward Michael. Maybe Richard doesn't like people who stand up to him, and defend their loved ones. I've known people like that.

Good to see Ariel and Richard getting along...even though there still seems to be tension between them, understandably.

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

Yeah that's his problem 

 

 

Yeah it's a slow process to build up a bond again 

Reviewer: Shannon Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2017 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 4

Hi, love the story so far! Its such a little gem



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear that, I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story too 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2017 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 59

Maybe someone should try to convince Michael that age is just a number... lol :).

Hmmm...having Jasmine babysit...maybe that will help her not feel so bad if she and her girlfriend aren't able to find a 'love juice' donor :)...

Chicken wings and rice...sounds yummy :D

Author's Response:

Lol 

 

Yes let' hope so 

 

 

Ikr?

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2017 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 58

I can imagine the scene between John and Sally ;).

Fortunately Michael had an extra car, and John and Sally didn't live that far away...

Author's Response:

;)

 

Yes Fortunately Michael had the extra car 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2017 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 57

Hm...sounds like Maria is feeling insecure about her relationship with Jasmine, maybe she should let Jasmine know how she's feeling, and see if she has anything to worry about... which I'm guessing she probably wouldn't... Maybe John should do the same...ijs

Purple is one of my favorite colors :)

Hope they find someone willing to donate a little 'love juice'

Author's Response:

Yea she should tell Jasmine how she feels 

 

Same here :)

 

 

We shall see ;)

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 06, 2017 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 56

Triplets...wow... Ariel and Michael are gonna have a houseful, that's for sure lol :).

Hm...sounds like maybe Maria and should ask Michael to give her cooking lessons :D. lol

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

Yes the house will be full lol 

 

 

Yea she needs some cooking lessons :) lol 

Reviewer: Angelonfire Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2017 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oooh. I love a good angsty beginning.



Author's Response:

I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story too 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2017 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 55

Hm...sounds like Ariel has had second thoughts about suggesting Michael sleep with Jasmine...

Lol...would have loved to have been a fly on the wall, and seen Maria's reactions when she thought Michael and Jasmine had been intimate.

Michael's ideas for the nursery sound charming :).

Author's Response:

Yes she changed her mind

 

Lol 

 

 

Yes its charming :) 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 03, 2017 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 54

Wow... I can just imagine what Michael and Jasmine must really be thinking about Ariel's suggestion...

Look forward to finding out what they decide to do...and what the reaction to the decision is...

Author's Response:

We shall see ;)

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2017 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 53

Oooh...triplets, more little cousins for Jamy to play with...lol :D.

Latoya and her baby fashion sense LOL

So, Sally and Ariel are both pregnant, and having mood swings etc...poor John and Michael LOL

Looking forward to more :D.

Author's Response:

Yes triplets lol 

 

Lol yes Toya and her fashion advice :)

 

Uh huh poor guys lol

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2017 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 53

Oooh...triplets, more little cousins for Jamy to play with...lol :D.

Latoya and her baby fashion sense LOL

So, Sally and Ariel are both pregnant, and having mood swings etc...poor John and Michael LOL

Looking forward to more :D.

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