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Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2017 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 57

Hm...sounds like Maria is feeling insecure about her relationship with Jasmine, maybe she should let Jasmine know how she's feeling, and see if she has anything to worry about... which I'm guessing she probably wouldn't... Maybe John should do the same...ijs

Purple is one of my favorite colors :)

Hope they find someone willing to donate a little 'love juice'

Author's Response:

Yea she should tell Jasmine how she feels 

 

Same here :)

 

 

We shall see ;)

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 06, 2017 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 56

Triplets...wow... Ariel and Michael are gonna have a houseful, that's for sure lol :).

Hm...sounds like maybe Maria and should ask Michael to give her cooking lessons :D. lol

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

Yes the house will be full lol 

 

 

Yea she needs some cooking lessons :) lol 

Reviewer: Angelonfire Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2017 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oooh. I love a good angsty beginning.



Author's Response:

I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story too 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2017 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 55

Hm...sounds like Ariel has had second thoughts about suggesting Michael sleep with Jasmine...

Lol...would have loved to have been a fly on the wall, and seen Maria's reactions when she thought Michael and Jasmine had been intimate.

Michael's ideas for the nursery sound charming :).

Author's Response:

Yes she changed her mind

 

Lol 

 

 

Yes its charming :) 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 03, 2017 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 54

Wow... I can just imagine what Michael and Jasmine must really be thinking about Ariel's suggestion...

Look forward to finding out what they decide to do...and what the reaction to the decision is...

Author's Response:

We shall see ;)

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2017 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 53

Oooh...triplets, more little cousins for Jamy to play with...lol :D.

Latoya and her baby fashion sense LOL

So, Sally and Ariel are both pregnant, and having mood swings etc...poor John and Michael LOL

Looking forward to more :D.

Author's Response:

Yes triplets lol 

 

Lol yes Toya and her fashion advice :)

 

Uh huh poor guys lol

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2017 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 53

Oooh...triplets, more little cousins for Jamy to play with...lol :D.

Latoya and her baby fashion sense LOL

So, Sally and Ariel are both pregnant, and having mood swings etc...poor John and Michael LOL

Looking forward to more :D.

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2017 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 52

Aww... always love Jamy and Jayson when they visit :D...so darn cute :D

Author's Response:

Ikr?  I want kids like that lol (well maybe two pair of Jayson because Jamy can be a handful lol) 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2017 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 51

What a sweet thing for Janet and Latisha to do for Ariel...making her a maternity dress :).

Smh...Jasmine's parents...smh, typical...sad but typical :(.

Author's Response:

Yes they're sweet to do that :) 

 

Yes smh at them 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2017 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 50

Good to see things worked out with Ariel and her mother :)

LOL, Ariel and Michael's conversation

Janet's face must have been red when she walked in and heard what her brother and his fiance were discussing, lol :D

Author's Response:

:) 

 

Oh well Janet is used to alot with that many brothers lol 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2017 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 49

I love Michael, always able to give a word of encouragement when needed :).

Hm...pretty sneaky of Sally and Maria to not tell Ariel they were going to see her mother... Hope the visit turns out okay

Author's Response:

Me too :)

 

They just want to help that's all 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2017 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 48

Awwww...I always love scenes with little ones helping out :). Can just imagine Jayson sitting on the counter with the eggs. And of course Jamy perking up and joining in when the family had breakfast together...TOO CUTE :)

It's always hard for gay couples to start families because of the prejudice that exists. Hope the donor Maria has in mind is willing to help them out.

Good to see the willingness to let Jasmine be the godmother of Michael and Ariel's baby :)

Author's Response:

Yes those two are adorable :) 

 

Yes it's sad. Let's hope so

 

Yes she deserves it 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2017 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 47

LOL... Jamy's 'commentary' on LaToya's fashion choice... XD.

Hm...looks like Jamy might start asking the 'where do babies come from?' question pretty soon.

Author's Response:

Jamy is something lol 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2017 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 46

Awww...always love it when Jamy and Jayson visit :D... They are always so cute with their uncle and 'auntie elfie princess :D.

Sounds like Richard and Ariel have patched things up...Good for Michael explaining his stopping Ariel from committing suicide.

Author's Response:

Yes they're adorable :) 

 

 

Yes they did a little

Reviewer: Giovanna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2017 08:57 am Title: Chapter 16

Michael is always concerned about the staff of the hotel

So happy to see their relationship becomes better after the misunderstanding was removed, heartwarming progress

Enjoying the reading of the whole story very much!



Author's Response:

Yes he's a very caring guy 

 

Yes progress  

 

 

I'm glad to hear that, thank you 

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