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Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 31, 2018 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 73

Wow...sure wasn't expecting it to be Joseph... that was a surprise

Things sure went from good to bad in a hurry...

Hope Michael and Ariel will be able to talk things over...and maybe stop her father from causing any more damage with his objections before things get any worse.

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

And not a happy surprise 

 

Yes things went sour real fast 

 

Let's hope so 

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Date: Mar 14, 2018 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 72 Meet the triplets

Hello, triplets :D!!!

James and Junior do look like their dad at that age...those big dark eyes :D.

Hm...I'll be interested to know who their visitor is...

Author's Response:

Finally they're here ;) 

 

 

 

Yes those big eyes they got from their dad :) 

 

 

That's a surprise;) 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2018 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 72 Meet the triplets

Hello, triplets :D!!!

James and Junior do look like their dad at that age...those big dark eyes :D.

Hm...I'll be interested to know who their visitor is...

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Date: Mar 07, 2018 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 71

Well, Joseph stayed true to form...keeping things short and to the point.

Wonder how Jamy will react when she finds out her grandpa was here, and she missed him because she was being her little diva self...lol.

Author's Response:

Yes he stayed to his true self 

 

 

 

Lol 

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Date: Feb 25, 2018 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 70

Richard...smh :(... Glad Joseph didn't side with him against Michael & Ariel...Joseph does have his good points especially where his kids are concerned...

Little Jamy...lol...she's a little missy who KNOWS what she wants...always so cute to read about her and her brother :D.

Hmm...maybe Rebbie and Joseph can have a reconciliation :)

Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response:

Yes deep down there is somewhat of a good side in Joseph  

 

 

Lol yes she's adorable lol but a handful at times :) 

 

 

 

Maybe ;) 

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Date: Feb 17, 2018 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 69 Jasmina

Awwww...what a cute little baby :)

Maybe after Ariel gives birth, the birthdays can be celebrated at the same time :).

Look forward to the next chapter :)

Author's Response:

 

 

That's a great idea to celebrate the birthdays at the same time :)

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2018 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 68

Hm...you get to see three different Michaels in this chapter...boyfriend, good friend, and manager :)

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

And the 4th will be father ;) (Not in the same chapter tho) 

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Date: Feb 01, 2018 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 67

Wowww...only two hours of sleep...at least he didn't fall asleep during his and Ariel's appointment.

That was thoughtful of Ariel to let him sleep while she fixed their dinner :)

Author's Response:

Yes he's too nice to sacrifice his sleep to help others  

 

 

Yes she truly loves him :) 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2018 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 66

Oh that Richard smh :(. That would be cool if the private investigator turned out to be a friend of Michael's who helped keep Richard away from Michael and Ariel :).

Sweet scene between Maria and Jasmine :).

Aww...Michael surprising Ariel with a trip to Hawaii :)...and having made all the arrangements :)

Author's Response:

Yes smh at Richard smh 

 

 

Yes they're a cute couple :) 

 

 

He's sweet like that :) 

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Date: Jan 26, 2018 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 65

Richard, Richard, Richard...smh. Good for Michael and Latisha standing up to him.

LaToya and her baby fashion sense...lol...Well the babies will know who their doting auntie is...lol

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

Ikr? Smh at him 

 

She's into any fashion lol and but if a shopaholic when she wants to be :) 

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Date: Jan 20, 2018 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 64

Richard sounds like Joseph...but at least Richard came to the wedding. Hope he won't cause problems for Michael and Ariel in the future.

I always love Jamy and Jayson. LOL Little Jamy is a girl who knows what she wants LOL.

"Ariel EAT baby?" Too cute...sounds like Jamy and Ariel will be having the 'how did baby get in Ariel's tummy' discussion pretty soon...lol

Looking forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

He does doesn't He? 

 

Yes she's a lol diva lol 

 

 

 

Lol  

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Date: Jan 13, 2018 11:34 am Title: Chapter 63

I'm imagining Michael thinking "T.M.I. to John and Sally's 'handcuff fantasy discussion...LOL.

Two boys, and a girl...Jayson and his sister will both have little cousins to play with :)

Author's Response:

Lol yes 

 

Yes :)

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Date: Jan 06, 2018 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 62

I'm imagining these 'threesome' conversations...lol

"Ugh...need to wash my eyeballs with bleach..." that was funny. Sounds like John got a little tmi at that point. LOL.

Author's Response:

Lol 

 

 

Yes he got a lil tmi there lol 

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Date: Dec 21, 2017 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 61

lol...Sally and John's discussion about blank and red pram colors as opposed to pink and purple...

How lucky to have Michael and his creative talents living right across the street :D... lol

Author's Response:

Lol it's important to pick the colors right lol 

 

Ikr? Lol

 

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Date: Dec 16, 2017 09:07 am Title: Chapter 60

Hm...Richard's attitude toward Michael. Maybe Richard doesn't like people who stand up to him, and defend their loved ones. I've known people like that.

Good to see Ariel and Richard getting along...even though there still seems to be tension between them, understandably.

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

Yeah that's his problem 

 

 

Yeah it's a slow process to build up a bond again 

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