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Reviewer: Badgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2017 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 29

It would be great if they were married because when they tell it to their parents and Katie will be happy.

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2017 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 29

That was so emotional. Your best chapter!

Author's Response:

interesting...I wouldnt think that it was that good but thank you for the compliment.  I appreciate it.  thanks for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: Timea1978 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2017 09:35 am Title: Chapter 16

You are an  amazing writer. I was up all night to  read 12 chapters. This is funny  because usually I DO NOT like and  do not read stories in which Michael is not famous. This is the Michael I always imagined him to be like. Sexy, confident, caring and sensitive.  This story is mind blowing sexy.  



Author's Response:

thank you for the compliment.  I've never written a non famous Michael.  it's surprising to me how much easier it is because you can be free to tweak him and remove the road blocks of his fame.  I'm thankful you took a chance on the story and like it.  thanks for reading and revieiwing

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2017 05:12 am Title: Chapter 29

Just caught up with the past four chapters, and I am REELING. This story is delicious!



Author's Response:

welcome back.  glad you are liking it.  it's fun to write

Reviewer: The man with no name Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2017 11:33 am Title: Chapter 29

Since Michael gets checked frequently, I believe he is clean. Actually, the first thing came to my mind when they realized they'd had an unprotected sex was the high possibility that Lindsey might get pregnant, but when I knew Lindsey has been always on bill, I was like 'Girl, you got me so scared'. I thought that Lindsey must have believed that Michael is clean before she had sex with him the first time. After all, condom cannot assure 100%. So I was surprised that she was worried about STDs. Anyways, thank you for the new chapter.

Author's Response:

LOL..hopefully no scare for a pregnancy though I think they would make good parents together.  just might be a bit too soon.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Kareen1303 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2017 11:04 am Title: Chapter 29

Wow what a great chapter! you sure know how to make those sex scenes hot! =D

I understand Lindsey's concern with the unprotected sex but at the same time maybe it was necessary to reassess (not sure how you write that... lol) how close they've gotten and what they want for the future. 

And I hope Lizzy will be ok on the other side of the world. Wonder what youve got planned for her... =D

as usual, cant wait for the next chapter, especially since they'll be love-making (insert Lionel Ritchie song) ALL NIGHT LOOONG



Author's Response:

that was a milder sex sceene.  i figured you guys deserved a little spice.  it's been awhile ..lol  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Tigereyes Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2017 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lol it's nerve-wracking because yours is an amazing, award-winning story! Mine is just in the early stages yet, I have a few chapters pre-written and am slowly progressing. I started writing this about 6 months ago, but I work 5 nights a week and it's mentally draining, so spare time is very sparse.

I think Michael and Lyndsey will ditch the rubbers - not sure they'll want to go back now after doing it without :) xx



Author's Response:

never underestimate you abilities.  write for the love of it and you'll do fine.  take your time and enjoy it.  I want to read it but fell asleep last night.  I get it though about time.  I have less and less but feel i owe it to my loay readers.  thats why its so frustrating when people dont review, they have no clue how much of your time it takes to write.  thank you for the compliment..i'm certainly flatteredd but am not amazing.  i just have fun with it.    keep at it!!

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2017 09:26 am Title: Chapter 29

Very Hot and emotional update!  The heat of the moment and the passion got to them both.  He did not use protection!  I am certain that Michael is okay especially since he gets testes frequently and never not used protection!  

So the thought is... If it was that good without a helmet I am sure they both will want to feel that again in the future!

 

Can I see them both together with a family in the futre hell yeah!

 

Great update!



Author's Response:

Thansk for reading and reviewing.  it might be some time before they get to a point where they both feel free to go unprotected.  maybe lindsey will get some answers when she goes to the doctor and finds out the timeframe when it's safe.  They certainly are on the road to getting closer.

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2017 05:49 am Title: Chapter 29

Poor Lizzy she truly loves her little girl and can't get back soon enough  

 

 

Hmm wondering if that little mistake does become a huge responsibility  (aka a baby) 



Author's Response:

Lizzys distance is making her realize how much she misses her baby.  Any doubt she had is being washed away as time passes for Lizzy and her parenting skills.  who knows if their mistake will mean anything (though that wasnt my intent)  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Llamalouise88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2017 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 29

Great chapter as usual. Why do I feel like Lizzy is about to walk in front of a bus tho XD

Author's Response:

spoiler alert..no bus for Lizzy.  there's a plan for her but her distance is necessary.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Tigereyes Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2017 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 29

Melting-Screen-Alert!!!! Lol this was a wonderful update :) So they got caught up in the moment, probably the best way for unprotected sex to happen. She should probably think about going back of birth control so they can do it bare-backed all the time - makes an amazing difference lmaoooo.

 

I feel for Lizzy, having to be thousands of miles away from her baby girl. The months will fly by though, and everything will work out for her. She'll be back in her baby's life in no time. Having Lindsey as a friend will definitely ease her worries, I'm sure.

 

Why is it every time I read an update, Lyndsey from CSI New York comes to mind..? She's what I picture our Lindsey to look like...wonder if I'm alone with that? Lol.

 

Amazing update as usual, keep 'em coming (literally)! I've started posting chapters of my new story, but having it next to this one on the listing is a bit nerve-wracking hahaha xx



Author's Response:

what have you been a silent reader on me?  I thought you dropped dead.  I missed you.

 

she is on birth control.  that wasnt her wory it was the std's he could carry from his past clients.  hopefully it wont be a problem though.

 

Why is it nerve wracking that i'm posted with you?

 

thanks for coming back and reviewing.

Reviewer: Kareen1303 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2017 06:45 am Title: Chapter 28

That was very courageous of Michael to go back there, if that doesnt prove love, i don't know what does. Lindsey is very lucky! I'm looking forward to reading about their little getaway, make it spicy!! =D lol

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2017 03:09 am Title: Chapter 28

I'm impressed that Michael went back to her parents' place by himself. That was a brave move. Hopefully her dad will see he is serious and give him a chance. I don't see how he can't after all that.

Reviewer: MommaE Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2017 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 28

What a man going by himself to a house he knew may hate him!!! Job well done Michael!!! I am jealous of their trip. I want to go



Author's Response:

maybe someday you can and visit me

Reviewer: MommaE Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2017 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 27

Wow!!! Derek is a jerk...time will tell!!

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