Date: Apr 19, 2016 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Don' t make it so dirty! He should not have his first time in a public place neither with a filthy whore. I mean seriously. Make it a romantic Story, please
we shall see..who's to say he doesnt become the whore? lol I promise his first wont be with a filthy whore...may not be a romance story thoug. still too early to tell..it was only just an idea. thanks for reading
Date: Apr 18, 2016 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this. The bathroom encounter was hysterical. I'd love to see this become a story!
glad you liked it. not sure if everyone would get the subtle quirkiness of the club or not. thanks for reading.
Date: Apr 18, 2016 12:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Woahhhh interesting start! This place and its name are really one of a kind. I can see a delectable future to Michael from this place :)).
I am looking forward to reading more. Thank you for having updated.
thanks for reading. I cant even imagine this place really existed and he went there. Its fun to imagine what he did. Someday I'll update more if the interest is there.
Date: Apr 17, 2016 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved it.This definately need more chapters and i would love to see them.
thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it. time will tell if i continue and if people respond well enough it might motivate me.
Date: Apr 17, 2016 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great! I enjoyed it very much! It felt as if I was in the moment with thr characters. Next chapter!
glad you liked it thanks for reading. it will be awhile until i write more. it was just a test and would want more responses before I commit to taking it on though it would be a fun story.