Date: Jan 06, 2018 04:45 pm Title: Ch.23
I agree with Amber... Michaela was clearly in the wrong having bumped into Marlon, knocking his hot dog out of his hands...And she is little too into herself...smh
Indeed her pride wouldn't allow her admit in the moment at least she bought him another hot dog lol. Well let's hope she becomes decent in Amber eyes eventually but we shall see as time goes on lol. Thanks Mary!
Date: Jul 28, 2016 11:12 pm Title: Ch.23
Sorry I'm so later reviewing the new chapters! Some of the chapters weren't showing after they reopened and transferred the site.
Anyhoo, great chapter! I see my fave couple is preparing for their little bundle of joy and Marlon is still acting a fool! He was really rude to this new girl Michaela (love that name by the way, plus I have a character in one of my stories with the same name). I would have walked up and down on his ass for saying that to me, but it seems he met his match!
Heyoo Kara yes you are right I had to go back and readd them smh. But don't need to apologize about being late no biggie lol. Marlon has tendency to be rude... When it comes to a female who has same bite as him lmao I can picture you doing so. Ooh great minds think alike.
Date: Jul 11, 2016 05:31 pm Title: Ch.23
Michael and Amber seem so sweet together, this chapter actually mae me miss going to amusement parks! Think it's time for me to book a trip lol! Amber seems to be a little bit of a mediator you can tell by the end of the chapter
("Alright boys calm down, let's go home please" Amber said to stop an argument to break between them.
So getting up from the seats they went back to the front entrance to find where the van was parked and made their way home. Once home they all went to their separate rooms.)
Immediately this let me know a little bit more into Amber's personality
Miss New Character, Michaela reminds me of someone with her shrp remarks and sassy attitude! I had a gretat time reading that and enjoy how you create different dynamics between all the characters. Everyone has their own buildable personality! I'm just waiting for Amber and Michaela's in depth interaction since Amber dislikes her!
I'll be sure to comment more often since I read everytme you update!
I highly recommend going to the funfairs one of these days tut tut for shame you haven't gone in a while. I don't what your talking about when it comes to the new character she isn't an inch like me *halo glows above my head* Lool, we shall see If that interaction goes well between them but we will see in due time. Thanks for the love handsome! 😘