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Reviewer: Val Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 25, 2016 05:28 pm Title: Ch. 22

Can You Please let Marlon have a girlfriend and a job. I love Michael but I've always loved Marlon too. I know they were close in real life . I would love it if Marlon finds happiness in the story Too. I like your story.



Author's Response:

He will have all you desired read on to the rest. But thanks for taking the time to read my story. Enjoy the rest! 

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2016 06:29 pm Title: Ch. 22

I enjoy reading your stories.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2016 01:59 am Title: Ch. 22

Knowing how complicated show business life is, Michael is right for the safety of his family. Its not that he is ashamed of Amber or the baby.



Author's Response:

Ikr? but they will learn and grow together as michael gets known in the music world let's hope it doesn't backfire. Thanks kay <33 

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2016 04:48 pm Title: Ch. 22

So Michael is going to pursue a music career? Mmh! That's going to be pretty tough on Amber and the baby! As an entertainer, I think he should hide them so they won't get caught up in the media. Although it's in 70's, it won't be as bad, but as the years progress, it might be. My heart is going in different directions!

Great chapter, Lorry! Sorry I'm late reading and reviewing.

Author's Response:

I agree it is going to be tough trail but they will grow together the media won't be so hectic but what will happen when he truly blows up? Eek! Don't worry my heart is tied on how I'm going to progress as well lol. No problem on the late comment Kara I love reading your comments no matter the time it takes 😏

Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2016 05:37 am Title: Ch. 22

I agree with Michael it will help him and her in the long run😥😣😉😊



Author's Response:

Oh hey marje didn't know you were reading all this time sneaky tut tut lol. But I'm glad you agree. Thanks for reading!

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